Pablo's Muse#2 - AR Part 35(Completed) Sept.1 Pg 51 - Page 35

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Posted: 12 years ago
I...erm...yeah...I still exist...

RESERVED!

*runs away*





(Exams next week...then I shall be back!) 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Nikhi.

I...erm...yeah...I still exist...


RESERVED!

*runs away*





(Exams next week...then I shall be back!) 😃


Ha!
Look who is here!!

😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Pious_KaSh

I am completely out of touch. I will have to read the FF from the very beginning to continue and it might take time, as I am busy in my personal life at the moment but please do pm me when you update. I will read as soon as I can.


Hey, Thanks for leaving this note here. I hope everything is going well at your end. I will PM you for the new updates, not many left since this I will be wrapping this up soon.

Aria
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: DMGFan-2b-not2b

Did I comment? I'm not sure...loved the fact that you're back with an update.. Loved the fact that Armaan has complete faith in Ridhima.. Loved the fact Ridhima is willing to fight for them & is struggling to balance the two men in her life.. Lived the wonderful mom Padma is & loved to see the smirk wiped off Shashank's face :-))


I'm not sure either but I love what you've written :D Riddhima didn't really leave him with a lot of choices if you think about it. But she is trying to balance both, and that's what I always felt she would have done... struggle to balance both - never saw her as one who wouldnt fight through, and the show would come down to that at some point. Oh well, may be it did. I wouldn't know since I did not follow it through to the end.

Thanks for your comment, I hope you are decided on whether you are DMG fan or not by now ;)

Cheers,
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wasn't this part suppose to come before the ending of 2012? Well, better late than never!


To say I had expected this would be a lie. Riddhima, in the show had never stood up to the challenge of making a right choice. And here she very shrewdly has made the choice yet has not. I like her taking charge. And since that important conversation was a flashback, I wonder what has been going on in Shashank's head ever since. It's clear he is bewildered but I want to know if he is torn between his love for his daughter (and the fatherly devotion of seeing the child happy) and his prejudice. Good going, A!

I hope you update Pablo's soon and I saw that lunacy has found a way onto your fingertips and thus on the screen. I'll catch up with that too - soon! As soon as reality and this mind of mine allows. ;-)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Dee-

Wasn't this part suppose to come before the ending of 2012? Well, better late than never!



To say I had expected this would be a lie. Riddhima, in the show had never stood up to the challenge of making a right choice. And here she very shrewdly has made the choice yet has not. I like her taking charge. And since that important conversation was a flashback, I wonder what has been going on in Shashank's head ever since. It's clear he is bewildered but I want to know if he is torn between his love for his daughter (and the fatherly devotion of seeing the child happy) and his prejudice. Good going, A!

I hope you update Pablo's soon and I saw that lunacy has found a way onto your fingertips and thus on the screen. I'll catch up with that too - soon! As soon as reality and this mind of mine allows. ;-)


In a perfect world, this FF would have ended by now. But its very close to the end so *touchwood*

I did not watch the show through to the end but the Riddhima that they started off with in terms of characterization before they butchered everything would have never got herself into that triangular soup like she did in the end. That was a different show all together. I'm certain, Riddhima would have stood up for the right thing...had they kept her true.

Shashank has his own demons to battle...but in his heart he is a good man. Let's hope he comes around...besides, its not like Riddhima actually left him with too many choices, you know ;)

Thanks Dee.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved all the parts
Plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetgirl555

Loved all the parts
Plz cont soon


Hey Thanks!
Will come back to this one definitely!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Aria-


Hey Thanks!
Will come back to this one definitely!


aww…

that's a lovely news dear..

will be waiting 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
^^ There isnt a lot left. I will try and finish this off with one or max two updates now. Its been pending for too long despite me wanting to finish it. :(

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