Desire to be Irresistibly Desired(MG)ff#2 note@149 - Page 30

Created

Last reply

Replies

824

Views

215.7k

Users

155

Likes

3.8k

Frequent Posters

-Elfin- thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago
Anu, i know its your story and you have all the right in the world to direct it the way you want to.

But as a reader, i have requested you twice before and will do that again,
geet must not be raped.

Please save her as a writer.

Hope maan repents and repents hard, its not easy to let go of the hurt when it comes from the person who means the world to you and accuses you without giving you a chance to explain your side of the story.

Great update as usual...please continue soon...👏

thanx for the pm...😊
Edited by manashi - 14 years ago
spvd thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
part 29
what?
was Geet raped by that bas****?
if its yes, then Maan should shred him to pieces...
hope Geet was not raped...
plz plz plz...
and Maan am gonna hit badly...
how could he say such words to Geet?
poor Geet...
cont ASAP dear...
Myra.nelly thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
Great part!! Gosh...she was molested...dont agree with that...this is the biggest crime ever...i am crying rite now...hope she didnt hurt herself after he left...
abinash079 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 14 years ago
i feel that geet might not have been forced if that was the case she would have consider herself as a dust for maan but she was excited to meet maan so i think no dreadful thing might have happen to geet
-eiya- thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
geet😭😭😭😭...geet😭😭...nahiii...do continue soon😭..
shining_moon thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: DrashtiDhamiNo1

fab update it totally rocked

im glad that maan is better
and i loved how you tied in the prologue
with the update
i wonder what maan saw on the tv to
think that geet betrayed him
it came as a shock to me when i read
that he believed the news so quickly
i thought he would atleast hear geets side first
im really curious to know what it was
another shocker that hit me right outta the blue
was the fact that maan directed a gun at geet
this is getting really interesting
dead excited for the next part
cont soon please
cant wait
thanks for the pm!! :D


thanks dear...I was a bit unsure about adding the prologue like that,but m glad it turned out good😊
maan's side of story will be fully reasoned...I'll try atleast😳
shining_moon thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: manashi

Anu, i know its your story and you have all the right in the world to direct it the way you want to.


But as a reader, i have requested you twice before and will do that again,
geet must not be raped.

Please save her as a writer.

Hope maan repents and repents hard, its not easy to let go of the hurt when it comes from the person who means the world to you and accuses you without giving you a chance to explain your side of the story.

Great update as usual...please continue soon...👏

thanx for the pm...😊


I am so sorry for keeping you all hanging like this in the middle, but I promise atleast geet's side will be cleared in the next part...till then bear with me😊

and as for ur request I'll only say..."trust me"😉
savie_ thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
hey..
loved the part alot..
the flashbacks were gud ...
lets see how will maan applogise for his mistake ..
and ronak toh gaya ..
he is dead for touching maan's geet ...
thanks for the PM ...
shining_moon thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

hiii anu...
let me kill u...and then write an obituary for u...
so rondhu and sad update
that bas***d ronak is having a gala time and maneet have to go thru the most painful phase of their life...
why are u hell bent on making me cry...tere hote hue glycerine ki zaroorat hi nahi😡...
hope ronak didnt do anything with geet apart from blackmailing her to give hand over the reigns of KC...
agar mujhe woh ronak mil jaaye toh main uska chatney bana dungi...kamina kahin ka...
what crap has maan been feeded with by those lowly creatures, that he is consumed by rage once he glances the TV and catches some news about KC...
i want maan to torture ronak and make him wish hell is better than the life he is leading...
geet's plight reduced me to tears...
ab jaldi se update karna...warna main tera kheema bana dungi😡😆

keep writing
love u and ur ff...but i hate u for this update(me pouting and frowning)

reva


reva ur threatening seriously amuses me now😆😆...I guess I am taking u lightly, let me hide somewhere safe before replying😆
the villians will pay with more tears and blood...a writer's promise...lolz
just few updts with senti things then I'll give u a laughter ride and with one on one I'll try to lighten ur mood😳😳
I'll ask maan to parcel ronak to u after his revenge is complete😆
I have updated check it out😉

love u dear

anupam
shining_moon thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: bansipatel

dat was awesome anu...!!!
u portrayed maan's n geet's emotions so welll...have no words dear...it was beautiful...both have gone thru alot...wonder wat happened that dreadful night wen geet was kidnapped n maan had an accident...hope that fool dint do sumthing wrong wid geet......
y does maan have hatred towards geet all of a sudden??? that ronak has given him some wrong info bou geet that is making maan think she has betrayed him...n wen they finally met...maan pointed a revolver towards geet😲...!!!
too much suspense to revealed...plz update sooon anu to clear all the MU btn maaneet...they already have gone thru soo much...
geet has really been strong thru out wid da hope that maan wil be back some day...n nw maan has hatred for geet in his eyes..😭

but the update was awesome n beautiful anu...!!!
loved it alooottt!!!!!! 😛 😳


thanks bansi
its always difficult to write emotional things as I myself starts crying in the mid...😆...so I understand what my readers have been through😳
u'll get all ur answers soon
keep reading n commenting

love u

anupam

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: dellzcreationz

9 months ago

In Your Memories Book 1 (Last Chap Pg 12+ Imp Note Bk 2) In Your Memories Book 1 (Last Chap Pg 12+ Imp Note Bk 2)

Siggi by Sandhya (@sevenstreaks) (P.S this was my pitching picture to the production houses - which Sandy had done for me a couple of years...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".