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Posted: 14 years ago
thank yu thank yu
for double treat yaar
me waiting

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OMGOMG! I m waiting..

while she is getting more mature..I want to her stay maan's nanhi dulhan! I don't want you to lose that part! she shud still stay innocent..but mature and responsible! (:

I love that update! Maan cannot resist Geet and I m soo happpy that geet can give birth! I m soo happpy! I want her to keep the babyy becus during the preg...9 months..she can be matured during the whole process..!I just want whole family to be with geet and take care of her!

precap looks kinda funn! but scaryy!
Edited by ayeshaaa. - 14 years ago
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caught up with all the parts...
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Chapter 77


Khurana Mansion
Evening
:
Jaya and Raj arguing with Vicky'
geet closes her ears and shouts' "Stop it"'.all looking at her amused'
geet ---bas bahut hogaya'now everyone has to accept what ever decision I take'theek hai?
dada dadi'we are ready'raj and jaya'hume bhi manzoor hai'vicky ' "and what is your decision madam"'
my decision is you and prachi are going to honeymoon.. '.
jaya ---dekha'ab toh vicky tujhe jana hi hoga''..
vicky---mom dad what is wrong with U guys '.I am not going anywhere right now and this is my final decision'''
he left angrily''
geet turns to raj and jaya'.maa its my responsibility to send them 'don't worry'
raj'and jaya smiles at their nanhi pari'who is always ready to handle any problem. for her family
ok beta go on'.
she went to vicky---vicky what is wrong with U'.
kya sara romance shadi se pehle hi khatam hogaya'.?
vicky'geet U know better I will not leave U in this situation. .?Don't waste your time on me'nothing matters to me more then U'
nahi vicky u are going.. and this is final'
theek hai'then U are also coming''..

She smiles 'vicky I am grown up now'I know the meaning of honeymoon. .why will I come on your honeymoon'?
why not..?U and bhai can come 'as U both didn't went anywhere..?
kya..?main mere honeymoon par gaye thi naa''..don't U remember'?
both exchanges looks and broke into laughter'''.
vicky---.do U remember your honeymoon at farm house'''?
how can I forget that'after all it was my honeymoon'.where maan was busy preparing me for my interview in school'hai naa'
haa..

Woh mujhse bahut pyar karte hai naa'
haa

Main bhi karte hu'
mujhe pata hai'.'par gudiya pyar ko dil main nahi rakna chahye'jatana zaroori hota hai..

geet---that is what I am trying to say. Vicky'U need to take her on honeymoon. for expressing your love'..U have responsibility towards your wife too'
vicky chuckles mockingly'look who is explaining me about wife and husband relationship'how much U understand all this''geet?
Have U ever cared about your husband 'then why should I care for my wife'?
geet looks down with tears feeling guilt'.
he wipes her tears'gudiya I don't want to hurt U but please stop thinking about all of us'and concentrate on bhai'U are still unaware of his pain. And longing for U..geet''
geet---nahi vicky ab sab theek hogaya hai'I know he has forgiven me'.
vicky closes his eyes'
U are still not understanding the depth of problem u are in'.
she looks at him innocently''.vicky eyes filled up thinking about both this lovers..
who are madly in love with each other'one is bold and another is innocent'.
one loves her crazily and demanding same respond'.but other is to nave to reciprocate '.
one heart is selfish who only beats for one person'but other heart is so big, that can keep whole world in it''kaun samjhaye is pagli ko'pyar karne ke liye selfish hona padta hai''.kaun bataye ise bhai kitne insecure feel karte hai'''..
geet wipes his tears vicky tu honey moon jaraha hai''.and this is final''..
she got up to leave'and vicky held her hand''..
'.geet humse pyar karna chod de'.warna tujhe iski bahut bade keemat chukane padege''..U are still not understanding the depth of problem U are in'''.
mujhe koi problem nahi hai'..tujhse toh baat karna hi waste hai'I better talk to prachi'she left..
vicky shouts'I will not listen to anyone geet I am not leaving U''
geet irritatingly left from there to prachi'


prachi was sitting out watching rain''
geet---hey prachi U are sitting here'U know vicky is denying to go for honeymoon'
prachi smiles at geet'I know and he is right'how can U think geet we will leave U and bhaiji in this situation '?just forget it'
why U both stupid's are worried for me'.
she ran into rain enjoying,.. Showing her happiness she got morning seeing love in his eyes''.'''

just look at me. How happy I am'?
today I have everything'?every one loves me'

aacha aur maan bhaiji.. ?
woh she rests her hands on her. Waist proudly'maan singh khurana'is totally under my magic'he see what I show him'hears what I say'do what I tell him'he loves me madly haven't U seen his eyes morning 'it was full of love and concern for me'.
'he can't stay angry with me for long...after all he only said. he can't resist me'
geet paused seeing prachi..wide eyes'tujhe kya hua prachi'.?


geet turns around and found maan staring her painfully'
prachi ran to maan'bhaiji aap jaisa sonch rahe ho waisa kuch nahi haii'geet ka matlab who nahi tha ..please'her voice struck in throat with maan's threatening look'

seeing his pain'geet's eyes filled up '.

maan was hating himself for loving and trusting her again'when she don't leave any chance of making fun of my love for her'''..
maan glares her furiously and walked back to his car and drove off'..'.
geet turns to prachi'maine aisa kya kiya'.unki aanokno main itna dard kyun hai''.
who kaha gaye prachi'bol na prachi maine kya kiya'''''.
prachi hugs geet crying'.sorry geet hamare wajah se bhai ji phir se tujhse naraz hogaye..
. par hua kya prachi'?..
prachi drags geet to her room'.
geet stood numb' woh aayenge naa''?
prachi silently changes geet wet dress'and laid her on bed'
geet 'prachi bol na woh aajayege naa'

Prachi---haa geet ,..bhaiji tujhe dur kahi nahi jayenge'who aajayenge.. tujhe tension nahi lena chahye'just sleep'.

She left from their to vicky'and told everything'''
vicky punches wall in frustration'na kabhi geet bhai ko samjhege aur na kabhi bhai geet ko samjhenge'''..
'.pata nahi in dono ki kismet main kya likha hai'?


updating next part in few min

(Precap ---maan's accident')



Hi friends here is part 77 ..hope U all like it...
sorry for mistakes and please comment...




Edited by fairyland_1234 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
:) . . . Hmph.

Personally I think Geet should care about her child if that's why she broke Maan's heart and lied to him . . . (dancing in the rain . . . HONESTLY!?)

Anyways, poor Maan . . . I feel for him. He married a kid and her mind is unfortunately STUNTED. Whether it be her child marriage or the fact that the family babies her! (Like the pet name is cute, but she is supposed to be an adult now)

The family should try and give her the responsibilities of a bahu (not such work related)! But to manage the family as they eldest bahu! Instead of being babied Geet should learn how to grow in her environment.


Love

Liz

Can't wait for the next part!
Edited by luvabbybaby - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

poor maan wonder when

i'll geet understand him
i thought she learn lesson
but not yet
she won everybody heart
but stil can't understand her
hubby & lover yet
maybe the accident i'll tought
her something
wonderful part
waiting waiting eagerly
Edited by sharmake11 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg,

poor maan, geet really needs to grow up.

plzzz update next part soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update poor maan is in so much pain he cant make his naive wife explain what he feels. love geet and family scene. the precap is looking more pain in manneet life.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesoem udpate dear
uff geet kuch socah kar nahi bol sakti
deakha phir se use hurt kardiya
update soon

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