~*~ PYAAR KA EK NAGHMA ~*~ MG ff ...COMplETED .!!! - Page 57

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Amazing part. Loved it... 😊


thanks dearie,...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: raj_202

will read but will take time

as it is 24 parts


no problem dear take ur tym ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 25

geet leaves towards arohi's room..
she enters the room...
and sees arohi sleeping ...
very relaxed..
she goes near the cupboard ...
takes out all the materials required wid arohi's dress ...makeup , jewels , and keep dem aside ...and den she takes out the dresses of her and arohi ...
and keeps dem aside neatly ...
it was 3:30 of the afternoon ..
she goes to the side of arohi ...sits beside her and caresses her head ..

and says - aru chal uth ja ..bohot der ho gaye ...
arohi stirrs in her sleep and says - thodi der aur sone de na geetu ...

geet - nhi arohi badui der ho gayi chal uth ..tune kuch khayaa bhi nhi ... tujhe fir apni medicines bhi toh leni hai na ..

arohi - bas 30 mniutes aur ..

geet - nhi aru agar jiju ko pta chal gaya ki tune apni meds nhi li ..toh voh sabse pehle mujhe dantege aur fir tujhe daant padegi ...
on listening dis arohi got up immediatly ...

geet - ok..accha chal jaa jaldi fresh hokar aa ... fir hum sabh bethkar baat karenge ...

arohi - han han ..thik hai ..
arohi gets up and goes towards the washroom to fresh ..
after arohi goes to the washrooom...
other side ..
maan goes to arjun's room..
and finds the bed empty ..den he hears the shower runnning in the washrom ..and comes to know dat hh myt have got up and will be taking a bath ...

a servant comes and says - sabh apne jo fool mangavaye the ...voh laal wale ..voh aa gaye..kahan rakhvaun unhe ..??

maan - hm..tum unhe uppar study mai rakhva do ...

servant - ji sabh ..
the servant keeps all the things in the study ..
maan moves towards the study ..
other side

geet makes a call and says - mera kaam ho gaya ...

person - nhi mam ...abhi thoda tym lagega ...

geet - mujhe kuch nhi pta ...u r having 4 hours ..agle char ghanton
mai mujhe voh mere ghar par chaiye ..suna aap ne ..

person - we will try our best mam..

geet - dont try it ..i want it complete by 7:30 ...

person - ok mam...

geet - gud..

geeet hangs the call and smiles to herself and says - very gud geet handa ...gud idea ..
jst den arohi comes out of the washroom...

arohi - kis se baat kar rhi thi geetu ..

geet - kuch nhi arohi ..voh flower shop se call tha ..

arohi - accha ..ok...
other side
maan makes his way to the study ..
maan says a servant to call geet, arohi and arjun from deir room...
the servant informs geet and arohi dat dey have been called by maan in the study ..
and he informs the same to arjun ..
all of dem reaches the study..
and makes demselves comfortable deir ...

maan - cumon geet help me ..

geet - ya ..ya ..i m coming ..
arohi takes a magazine from aside and starts reading it while geet and maan r decorating the shagun plates ... keeping the rings in the middle of the plate ..
dey decorates the plates like dis..


all of dem r now siitng on the sofa and sipping deir coffee's

arjun lifts his head and says - geet ..

geet - hm...

arjun - mai soch rha tha ...ki meri koi family nhi hai ..

geet - aree aap aesa kyun bol rhe hain ..hum hai na apki family..

arjun - exactly ..toh mai soch rha tha ..ki ...kya tum shadi ki kich rasmein meri behen ki tarah karoge...
geet's eyes filled wid tears ..

arjun continued ...- main humesha se ek behen chahta tha ... par meri koi choti behen hai hi nhi ..aur tum bilkul vaise ho jaise mai apni behen ko chahta tha ...toh kya tum meri taraf ki rasmen karvoge ..

geet - hm..geeet stands up and hugs arjun tighly ..and starts sobbbing ...

arjun - aree aree ..tum ro kyun rhi ho .. agar mujhe pta hota ki tum rogi toh mai kabhi tumhe yeh baat nhi bolta ...so cumon wipe ur tears offf ..

geet - hm...geet gets up and wipes her tears ..

arohi - haw...!!!!!!!!
3 of dem turn deir faces to see arohi ...and sees her angry ..

arohi - arjun tumhe pta hai tum kya bol rhe ho ..agar geet tumhari taraf se ayegi toh meri taraf se koun ayega .. mai toh apni behen ko miss karungi ...

geet - jiju arohi bhi sahi keh rhi hai ... arohi ki side ki bhi kafi rasmein hai ..

maan - han its really dificult ..

arjun - lets do one thing ...geet pehle arohi ko taiyar karke ... ladki walon ki taraf se rasmeinh kahatm karke ..idhar aa jayegi and den ..mai pehle se hi taiyar rahunga and den voh meri help kar degi ... yahan ki rasmein poori kar degi ..and barat mai shamil ho jayegi ... baad mai ladki walon ki taraf se pooja ke liye ... she will again change her place...and bidai ke baad she will come wid us ...to my home ...

geeet - but it will be difficult to again go and change the places ..

maan - tum uski chinta mat karo ..tumhe vahan se yahan laana my responsibility...

arjun - dekha sabh ho jayega,... so tell arohi do u agree wid it ..

arohi happily says - ok...

arjun gets up and hugs arohi ..and says - thank u ..

geet winks maan and says - vaise arohi and bhai ..raat ko aap dono kahan chale gaye the ...humne kitna dhoonda aapko ...

maan understands and joins - han... tumhe dhondte dhondte hum pagal ho gaye ...
on listening dis the colour of arohi and arjun's face fall ..
and dey broke out of the hug ..

and arohi nervously says - ...v..voh mujhe na...and signals arjun to do something ..

arjun - han voh kya hai na ...

geet - han han boliye ...

precap - eveyone getting ready ...

plz..plz...do comment gyz ..
srry for not showing the ring ceremony ...
i thought of adding dis convo between arjun and geet as it will bond deir relationship more as bro and sis ...
and plz..plz..do comment ..
i m waiting for dem ..
non - commmentoors..
plz..do comment dis tym or click the lyk butoon below...

and plz..do check dis link ..

Edited by savie_ - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

lolxx

shaitaan geet :D :P ..

and maan is no less..

he's helping geet to tease them ..


btw nice update

continue soon..

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesme update continue soon loved that geet has became the sister of arjun
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update. love the convo between geet and arjun. it was kind of emotional. and arohi getting mad on seeing geet going to arjun side.

pls continue and thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update
Maaneet were good
continue soon nd thanx for pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update savie. time 4 celebtate .
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Posted: 14 years ago
Love it amazing continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
I read all the parts..Loved all maaneet moments😊
Wonderful update..👏.
thanks for pm
continue soon..😊

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