~*~ PYAAR KA EK NAGHMA ~*~ MG ff ...COMplETED .!!! - Page 29

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow awesome update dear...
loved it...
arjun n arohi r soo sweet... loved it...
plsss continue soon...


jyothi
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Posted: 14 years ago
brilliant update dear loved it continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it..
I was just laughing & laughing..
awesome!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Awesome update... continue soon...:)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: varnika95

i think maan ki moder ki age bohat kam hai. dat means she was 15 wen maan was born




varnika ki bacchi ..
tu mujhe scool mai yeh baat bol chuki thi ...
i m gonna correct it now...
vaise u hate maths but yahan teri calculation is perfect ...
❤️ u ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
gyz ...
a change in the ages of mr. handa , mr. khurana and mrs. khurana ...
i m such a stupid ..
thanks to varnika ..she told me about it ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey post the next part yaar plz waiting for it
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 18

maan drags arjun out of the room...
while arohi blushes ..and geet laughs ..
1st maan and arjun descends down the stairs wid all eyes glued on dem ... dey both r were looking dashing ...wid spotlyts on dem ...

( arohi and arjun were looking like dis ..)
den after some tym ..
arohi and geet comes downstairs dis tym ..spotlyts were on both of dem ...

(geet was looking like dis ..and maan wore black kurta pyajama ... )

arjun's eyes were sticked to the beauty coming downstairs which will became his and only his in the coming 3- 4 days ...
and maan's eyes were glued on geet ...
mr. khurana noticed maan oogling at geet ..and smirks ...
he was really impressed by geet and wants her to be the badi bahu oh khuranas ... and maan liking geet will be sone pe suhaga ...
four of dem were down ..
arohi was made seated in the middle between the ladies while geet was seating beside her ... both of dem were applying mehendis ... it was arohi's turn but arohi forced geet to aplly mehndi wid her as she is her sister ...
geet and arohi were really happy wid deir mehndis

(arohi's mehndi)

(geeet's mehndi was like dis)
...while both the handsome hunks maan and arjun were staring dem ...deir eyes were stucked on dem ...deir cute smiles ... formed by deir lips ...
dia and vicky were roaming in the party and both of dem teamed together and were doing deir small mischiefs ...out of which some were noticed and some not ...
vicky took a cake and dia distracted the mind of a man and vicky placed the cake on the seat and both of dem made him sated on the same seat on which the cake was kept ...
and thud...!!!! lolz... bechare ki pant gandi ho gayi chi chi chi chi...
dey ran from dere ... hiding some where ..
deir next prey was sameera ...
dey were taking revenge from her ..for making deir cute geet di cry ...
well vicky was starting liking geet as her frend ..and became gud frend of dia ..
he was the dude of his scool ... many boyz were after dia becoz of her charms ..and innocence ... but vicky threatened all the boyz ..and if dey will go near her ..he will broke deir hands and feets ... he started became over - protective about dia ... and vicky and dia used to stay together in scool... helping each other ...
sameera was wearing high heel sandals ...
dey hooked deir legs in front of her leg..and she fell down ...
maan was standing deir only ..

sameera - maan plz..help me to stand up ...
but vicky and dia were fast ..
dey caught each of maan's arms and started dragging him from dere ..showing deir tounges to sameera ... teasing her ...

maan - yeh kya kar rhe the tum dono ...mujhe uski help kyun nhi karne di ...

vicky - nhi bhai aap uss gandi sameera ki koi help nhi karige ..

dia - han...bhaiya ..voh bohot gandi hai ...unhone geet di ko kitna rulaya ...

vicky - aur jo geet di ko pareshan karega ..hum uska jeena mushkil kar denge ...aur ab bari hai sameera ki ..

maan was also thinking the same ..he started hating sameera more ... after the chaos she created in the party ...

maan - sameera nhi sameera di bolo...voh tum dono se badi hai...

dia - badi hai par bohot buri hai ...

vicky - han bikul thik ..respect dene ke zara bhi layak nhi hai ...

vicky and dia hy- fyed each other while maan rolled his eyes seeing dem teamed up together ...and leaves from dere ..
deir next mischief towards sameera ...
dia intentionally dropped juice on her dress ...

sameera - tumhari ankhein hain ya button ...cant u see and walk...

dia - aap bhi toh dekh kar chal sakti thi ..

sameera - galti karti ho aur phir zaban ladati ho ... tumari himmat kaise hui...(and raised her hand to slap dia )
when vicky holded her hand and stopmed his feet on sameera' s feet ..due to which she winced in pain and fell down ...

vicky bends down and says - dia par haat uthane ki koshish bhi mat karna ..samjhi ...varna maar maar kar halwa bana dunga tumhara ...
vicky holds dia's hands and drageed her from deir ...
( gyz ..!! i knew i should not write lyk dis ...but i hate sameera to the core and will leave no chance to insult her ...)
sameera gets up and drags herself to the washroom...
arohi and geet were done wid deir mehndis ...
arohi was starving and arjun very romantically made her drink juice being very very careful not to spoil her dress , mehndi ...
geet was also starving ..she was trying to locate dia so dat she can help her ... something to eat ...but dia came and sat wid all the ladies and started wid her mehndi ...
vicky came and sat wid her teasing her by bringing food in front of her mouth and den gulped it himself...

dia - vicky do na mujhe bhi bhook lag rhi hai ...akele akele kyun kha rhe ho ..?

vicky - khana hai toh kha lo ..mujhe kyun bol rhi ho ...
dia made a baby face and turned her face aside not talking to him ..
geet was also starving ...
arohi nudged arjun to help geet ...
but arjun knew dat maan had started liking geet ..

he called maan and says - yaar maan ..geet ki khane mai help kar na .. mai arohi ko khila rha hun ..and winked at him ..

maan rolled his eyes and said - ok..
he took some food in a plate and moves towards geet ..
he sat beside geet and starts feeding her ...
mr. khurana and mr. handa were looking at dem together ...
dey were looking perfect together ..
6 of dem were done wid deir eating and now it was some tym to rock the party ...

PRECAP -- geet's + maan's dance ...
dia and vicky also included ...

plz..do comment gyz ...!!!
me waiting for dem ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
How sweet
Kaash mr khurana n mr handa maan n geet ki sagai karvaa detha is shadhi ki
Time pe
It will be so sweet naa
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb update.
dia n vicky were awesome.

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