[AR] - What you least expect - [Mini FF] UPD. CHAPTER 5 PG15

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Posted: 14 years ago
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I'm not so sure about this but I'm going to give this a go. This is basically a FF about Armaan and Riddhima and there's also a third protagonist in it and that's Shaan "played" by Karan Tacker. I basically stole his characters name from RBO because I didn't feel like being creative.
I personally imagine KSG as Armaan, Jennifer winget as Riddhima and Karan Tacker as Shaan. Now of course the male protagonists are obvious but since we've had three Riddhima's feel free to imagine any of the three as Riddhima.

Shaan's character in this FF is a lot like his character in RBO, not completely but quite a lot.

Shaan (for those of you who don't know how Karan Tacker looks):



KSG (I just have to post a picture of him in a tux!)





(he will be seen in a suit often 'cause he is a business man in this FF)

This FF is a bit different, I recommend you to be at least 16+ to read this! It will contain adult scenes, adult life issues etc. AND this FF will be more like a movie. I'll tell you people how it works soon. There will be scene changes and day changes. Sometimes there will be a scene change all of a sudden (like in the movies) and you just have to read to find out what's going on.

The following signs will show what happens:

This means scene changes, the scene might be happening simultaneously as another one OR time could have past but not a lot, we're talking about minutes, hours but not days :

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This means that scene has changed and time has past; day/days, weeks, months, years etc:

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I know it sounds weird now but it'll be clearer a little further down the line. I will post the first chapter soon!

If you want to be on the PM list then let me know!

PS. the pictures that I chose to post for Shaan and Armaan were carefully chosen 'cause that's pretty much how I see the characters look like in this FF. Armaan will be having a slight stubble in this FF (most of the times), just thought I'd let you know since he hasn't in the picture. And yes, I'm a detail freak, sorry!

PPS. First chapter will be posted soon!


INDEX
- Teaser PG1
- Chapter 1 PG3
- Chapter 2 PG6
- Chapter 3 PG10
- Chapter 4 PG11
- Chapter 5 PG15

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Posted: 14 years ago
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seems interesting.
please add me to your PM list.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Looks interesting. Update soon and can you please pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting concept!!! Plz pm me
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Waiting 4 d part.
Plz pm me when u update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Writers note:

Wow, I haven't even posted the first chapter and I have like 5 replies already!

I wanted to tell you all that I won't be giving you much information about each character! You'll find out things as the story unfolds, so no character descriptions etc. sorry! It'll make the story more interesting that way. I'll be posting a little 'teaser' today if you can call it that. It's too short to be considered a chapter so you guys can see it as a teaser. It's basically how I see the story starting. It might leave you guys with a lot of questions but it requires you all to read further in order to get the answers.

Ya'll are going to have to excuse me for any typing errors or grammar mistakes, this was kind of written in a hurry. Anyways, here we go.




'Teaser'



The rays of sun light hit her eyes as she was sleeping, she frowned but it didn't help, her eyes slowly opened as she saw a well built figure standing in front of the sunlight, half naked with only his pants on he threw on his shirt and started to button it up. He suddenly heard a moan and turned around to see his wife sit on the bed, holding the covers in front of her naked chest.

"Well hello there sunshine" he said as he leaned down to her and gave her a peck on the lips.

Riddhima: "It's morning already'?" she moaned, still not completely woken up.

"Yup.. I got an early call from the office, need to go there and sign some papers" he said as he was putting on his tie. She wrapped the sheets around her and went up to him and said annoyingly "Oh god, will you EVER learn how to tie a tie?" she took over and started to tie it for him. "SOMEONE seems to be a little grumpy today... Long night last night?" he winked at her and smirked. "Well you should know, you were the one that kept me up!" she replied cockily and pushed him lightly putting both her hands on his chest after finishing tying his tie. "I don't recall you having any complaints about it last night.. In fact, quite the opposite" he smirked and slid his arms around her waist from behind, resting his chin on her shoulder, preventing her from going away. She smiled but quickly changed back to her stubborn attitude. "I have things to do, okay! I need to make the bed and then head to the hospital!" She complained and managed to get herself out of his grip. "But you have the day off, don't you?" he said surprised. "Yeah I do, but I really want to check on that little boy that came earlier this week, his mother works and doesn't get a lot of time to come and visit, and he doesn't like being alone so..". "So my pretty wife is going to go there and keep him company, huh?" he joked. "Yeah... There really is no point in staying at home if you're not going to be here, is there?" she smiled teasingly. "That's it! I'm staying home and so are you!" he said as he slid his arms around her waist and pulled her in, leaving no space left between them, pressing her up against his body. She giggled, but he was looking at her lips, hypnotized and turned on. She stopped giggling and looked into his eyes and down on his lips too. They started to kiss passionately, his hands started to move all over her body, feeling her everywhere. Riddhima pulled away from the kiss and started panting for breath. "Honey, you need to leave before it gets late" she reminded him. "Fine.." he said, totally bummed out. He was about to leave when he came back and kissed her neck from behind and purred in to her ear "Don't forget that I'm taking you out for dinner tonight, be ready at 8 oclock". She smiled, he was still as romantic as he was 2 years ago before they got married. He left, while she was still standing there frozen to the same spot, in her silk, short robe, with a goofy smile playing on her lips. She suddenly came out of her thought's and shouted "Wait!" she started to run down the stairs, he had just finished adjusting his suit and was about to head out when he turned around worriedly and looked at her thinking that something might have happened. But she was jogging towards him with a huge smile on her face, exposing her beautiful legs wearing that short robe of hers that also showed off her thin, sexy waist. She came standing in front of him, biting her lip, slightly blushing, she put her hands on his shoulders to support her herself on him and stood on her toes to almost reach his height and pecked his lips and almost whispered "I forgot to tell you that I love you before you leave... I love you Shaan". A big smile was playing on his lips, he cupped her face and gave her a passionate kiss and whispered "I love you too, Riddhima" as he looked lovingly into her beautiful eyes. "You know, you're making it really hard for me to get out of that door today, Riddhima" he teased her. She slapped him lightly on his shoulder and said "just go!" slightly blushing. He smiled and winked at her as he reminded her once again to be ready at 8 and then reluctantly left their home.


Will send PM's later, gotta run right now.

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Edited by dimples00 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey,
nice concepts and do add me in ur pm list if possible...
Now coming to th teaser , that was something unpredictable.
Since the start i was thinking its gonna be Armaan [ 2 years and stuff] but girl it took my breath away... that was my reaction on seeing shaan and ridz together.
You have got the curiosity better off me now so u better update fast atleast after such an heartattack.
tc


luv,
neha [shona]
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: neha2607

hey,

nice concepts and do add me in ur pm list if possible...
Now coming to th teaser , that was something unpredictable.
Since the start i was thinking its gonna be Armaan [ 2 years and stuff] but girl it took my breath away... that was my reaction on seeing shaan and ridz together.
You have got the curiosity better off me now so u better update fast atleast after such an heartattack.
tc


luv,
neha [shona]


Haha, that WAS the intention! To make you think that it's Armaan, that's why I waited until the end to reveal who it was. I will try to end each post with a cliffhanger! I will update asap, I'm still working on the first chapter. Will make sure to PM you once I've posted it. ;)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome teaser not to the forget it was shockinggg
riddhima and shaan 😲
add me to ur pm list

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hey,
nice ff...really intrigued to read on...
i'm probably the only one who thought riddhima's husband would be shaan...reason? because you make it sound as if there is a lot of twists and not to mention you said shaan is a third main protagonist...at least at the end AR will be together...hopefully...
this is indeed very interesting continue soon!

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