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Zahra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#631

is amy maaneet' son...but how can it be...omg it's so coonfusing...continue soon n thnx...

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Muskan

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Posted: 14 years ago

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~maitri~
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Maan gave an irritating look at him. Amy throws the other dart at Maan..
Maan immediately bends down & teases him silently.. u missed.. amy smirks..more of winning smirk.. Maan narrowed his brows & followed his gaze to the board behind him on which amy was aiming until now. He was taken a back, his anger short to different level all together.. it was his face cut out on a board & the dart was pinned all over his face..the last one on directly between his eyes at the center.

Maan clenched his fingers into a ball & furiosuly walked towards the wall to removes his pic from there ..not noticing the table on the way!! he hit his knee really hard & tripped ..he held his knees... & limped towards the wall.. with all the pain on his legs & between the legs he still manged to reach the wall & removed his pic.. he pulled out each & every dart & threw it away.

He was so miffed he broke the darts.. he wondered why those kids hated him so much..think about it.. he hates them equally. The little bit..tiny miny..liking because they are his dodo's kids, also doesn't seem to linger in his thoughts. He just can't stand them. Especially that sardar!!..eeks..he made all funny angry peeved face & limped back to his room.

Later in the evening he dressed in pair of jeans & t-shirt. He brushed his hair & came out thinking about a casual dinner, was taken by surprise seeing his dodo looking stunning in a formal black dinner dress with her curly hair cascading her shoulders. He wondered if she was actually a mother of 2...that too those shaytan's. He tried all his ways to stop looking at her but his eyes were glued on her. It was so embarrassing, especially in front of the man who was her husband. He warned himself..Maan Singh Khurana..aapne hormones ko control main rahk warna.. he can't even imagine. But he can't even imagine his dodo with that stupid looking fried monkey..yes thats wat he seemed..with his hair all gelled still falling on his forehead. Uff Maan just couldn't stand the sight of rahul next to his dodo.

When they walked towards the car he narrowed his eyes on the little devil even he was dressed in jeans & t-shirt.
Maan murmured copy cat
amy showed him tongue. Maan was abt to react when he saw his dodo occupying the front seat next to rahul. He immediately excused himself & forced his way in front seat..almost pushing dodo to sit behind. Rahul looked at him from corner of his eyes. He had been observing him calmly since the time he landed. They both not even exchanged names yet. He rather not!! maan's demeanor has been so wired since he seen him. He knew genie..character was weird but this much.. he cleared his throat & settled behind the wheels.

Maan preferred not even feel his & the kids presence. His sense were lost in feeling her ..her scent that filled the car as she settled right behind him with amy next to her & rany on near the window. He couple of times checked her out through the rear view mirror..which amy noticed & frowned, he frowned back..the cold war on through out the drive.

Finally Geet cleared her throat.. genie this is dr rahul. Maan scanned him top to bottom.. DR!! oh!! dehkne main tho servant lagtha hain.. Maan didn't even extend his hand he just kept quiet. As the car pulled out in front of the restaurant.
Geet - rahul this is Genie.. mera matlab hain.. Maan
maans heart missed a beat when he heard his name so sweetly played on her lips..like it belonged there. He doesn't even remember her calling him that ever, but when she did.. he lost all his senses. Yes he was crazily madly..fallen..oh god when was he to know wat was wrong with him!!

rahul extended his rt hand across the seat. Maan reluctantly shook his hand & pulled it back immediately.
Geet exhaled sharply ..ok.. genie this is rany..Ranav...& this his amy.. she blushed..Armaan.. she paused to see his reaction on the name. It was nun..he just stepped out. She was little hurt.
Rahul noticed the sadness in her eyes. He turned to her
Rahul - give him some time, he will be fine
she smiled weakly helped amy & rany with the seat belt. Amy immediately hugged her..I love u mama
she kissed him with a smile, her pain just vanished in thin air.
Be nice she warned. He smiled naughtily.

they all settled in the table that rahul had booked for the night. Maan came to sit next to Geet but amy pushed him away & sat between them. Maan frowned since it was a round table.. rany..rahul..geet...amy & then him.. he was stuck between the kids & his dodo was sitting next to rahul. His eyes couldn't take the sight.

Geet asked every one wat they wanted to order.
Rahul - I will have a Meet lasagna
rany - I want that too dad
rahul - ok we will that
Geet looked at amy & then Maan..
both of them together - chicken cheesy pasta
amy - copy cat
Maan pointed his knife - u copy cat
amy - mama chicken cheesy pasta only for me.. dehko na humesha he copies me!!
Maan - he copies me
Geet - why don't u both share
amy & Maan together - NO
amy - chicken cheesy pasta only for me
Geet - aacha teehk hain 2 chicken cheesy pasta bus
amy - nahi, u will not order chicken cheesy pasta for him,
Geet - AMY
he had those big tears in his eyes
Maan looked at him from corner of his eyes. Those tears hurt him like her tears does.. it just felt replica.. he frowned ..ok.. I want a chicken cheesy pizza
Geet smiled & thanked Maan. He smiled making a baby face.

While waiting for their dinner..the jealousy was vident in his eyes. Rahul did notice that. He didn't leave a chance to burn him further. He occasionally inched closer to Geet & whispered something in her ears.. mostly a joke.. that cracked her up & she would giggle.. first few times Maan ignored it, then every time rahul came close to her, he immediately asked her random question..insignificant, baseless
have u met Obama??
wat cracked everyone the most was have u met the queen!!!
she wanted to say they were in US not in London... but she didn't want to make fun of his genie.. she would have had they been alone ..not infront of anyone else.. but she loved it so much to see him so possessive abt her.

As the dinner was served. Amy looked at his pasta & then at maan's pizza. He ate his pasta a bit & then kept looking at rany who was lost in enjoying his lasagna. He looked at rahul who was also busy with his dinner. He made a cute little face
Amy - mujhe pizza khana hain
Geet - but u ordered for pasta na
amy - nahi abhi pizza kaha na hain
Geet looked at Maan. She knew her genie very well he won't give in so easily. He had a bite & looked at her. He made a baby face & passed his plate to her...some body didn't want to share, he taunted.
Amy very cutely .. turning his lips.. I don't mind sharing just once.
Maan murmured..copy cat
amy cried to Geet mama!!
Geet gave an angry glare to Maan.
Maan complained..when he calls me copy cat u don't say anything to him.

He just excused himself to the wash room. He splashed water on his face & looked at himself in the mirror. He wondered why was he behaving so immaturely. Why was he holding her back.. when she has gone to far away. He wiped his face unknowing the tears that shed with pain of her going away from him. He felt he won't be able to take this all anymore. He took a deep breath & came out. He just saw a happy family... rahul feeding rany & Geet pampering amy. He just calmed himself ..she looked happy. He called adhi & told him to book the return tickets.

-BLOG maitri part 44-

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Geet shouting at maan

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Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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Humera Anwar

@-Humera-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#633

Yaaay me first

Fabulous update baji 🤗

😆 Love the cute little fights between Maan and ArMAAN who I am sure has to be Maaneet's son as Geet blushed when she said the name!! As Armaan called Geet "mumma" as well so he is definetely Geet's son, and I am sure she is not married to Rahul so he has to be Maaneet's son... 😲 and Maan and Amy like the same food!!!

I wonder why the kids especially Armaan hates Maan so much? 😕
Loved Maan's reaction to hearing his name from her mouth😳
Oh no... He was about to say the word "love" until he let his thoughts get distracted..!!

Awww both Maan and Amy didn't want to share, but Amy ended up wanting the pizza 😆
😳 Maan has some feeling for Amy as he didn't like seeing tears in his eyes just like he doesn't like seeing tears in his Dodo's eyes!!
Rahul took advantage of the situation by making Maan jealous, and Maan started to ask random questions 😆

Hope that Maan realises he loves her soon, or will he realise what happened between them in the past first?

How Maan just leave his Dodo?
Has he forgotten how much he misses her when she is not there?

Hmm... Wonder why Geet will shout at Maan? Over Amy? Or Something else?

Can't wait for the next update 😃

Edited by humz_786 - 14 years ago

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my_maan_geet

@my_maan_geet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#634

waiting di...plz jaldi se amy nd maan nd geet ka kya connection hai bata do...bahut confusion hai!!!!!!!!!

edited wow now i m preety sure that amy or armaan is definitely maan's son...poor geet she expected her genie to react on d name but pagal genie kabhi koi kaam ache se nahi karega...

Edited by my_maan_geet - 14 years ago

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

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Posted: 14 years ago

#635

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wonderful part!!!

loved it ...awesome!!!

Poor dodo ...how she ll manage his genie if he start behaving like a kid.

Maan tho bilkul bachi ki taraf behave kar rahe hai.

OMG MSK checking out Rahul...🤣

con soon

Edited by -dia- - 14 years ago

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Sameenaas

@Sameenaas

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Posted: 14 years ago

#636

So... Amy is Armaan.. Maan's bacha... But how???? When????

And Maan is leaving back to Delhi as he thinks that they are a perfect family!!!!!which is not true at all...

Now wat???? Is Geet gonna tell Maan abt Amy or will he find it out on his own?????

Loved the part where Maan cud not c tears in Amy's eyes... So sweet of him to share the pizza!!!!!

OMG!!!! Kitna possessive hai ye Maan!!!! Just behaving like a kid...
Thanx for the lovely update n cont sooon...

Edited by Sameenaas - 14 years ago

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sunshine94

@sunshine94

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Posted: 14 years ago

#637

omg...now i am sure amy is maans kid...

"she blushed..Armaan.. " this sentences supports my thts...

actually the thing is i cant think geet with someone else other than maan...oops i am so possessive😆

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cyberprincess

@cyberprincess

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Posted: 14 years ago

#638

wonderful muskaan!! so what is happening? please reveal soon! why Geet is shouting at Maan, is Amy really Maan and Geet's son? all his habits are same as Maan's please continue soon. please please give us another update!!