maaneet FF...Alwayz Mine... Part 16 ... pg 104 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice concept...in first meeting itself kiss interesting...cont soon...add me 2 ur pm list...i send u buddy req...thanks...
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Awosome one

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nice start ..

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awesome part... 👏
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Awesome FF
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Awesome start...continue and pm wen u do update, thanks 4 da pm
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what a meeting:)

challenging each other, but then maan is maan
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awesum update
Maan kissed Geet on der 1st meet
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Alwayz Mine (part 2)

Part 2...

After long refreshing bath Geet went to her bed. She sleeps with her care taker Bano Maa because of her bad experience. She was in her bed holding Bano Maa's hand in her while thinking about stranger again and again. As she thought about him she hate him more but as his face appear in front of her eyes she become numb. She could still feel the heat of his lips on her cool lips and that add a little more hatred in her heart. "If I saw him again I will kill him with my bare hands" was the last thought in her mind before she slip in deep sleep.

Maan went for long drive after kissing beautiful girl in the middle of high way, he still try to understand why he react like this. He have met hundreds of girls, no one had ever made him react like this. There was something different about her, something special. Because this is first time Maan had acted without seeking first permission from his brain. If I saw her again I don't know how I will react again but this was confirmed that girl had wakened the illogic side of Maan singh Khurana.

Geet woke up with the call of her best friend Pinky. All the girls plan to go out for shopping and that seem to be nice idea for Geet since she need distraction from the image of stranger popping in her mind after every few seconds. After gulping down juice under the threatening eyes of Bano Maa, Geet left for shopping. It was a sunny day and Geet really enjoy riding her bike. When they reach the Mall they went to different brands sometime buying sometime just window shopping. Geet was starving to death after two hours shopping and she really need to recharge herself with food. All girls plan to eat pizza so they went to pizza parlor for lunch.

They serve one of delicious pizza in the world according to Geet. As soon as mouthwatering pizza arrive at the table without waiting for anyone Geet attack the pizza.

After satisfying her stomach Geet and girls once again went back to their pervious activity that is shopping.

Maan was there in the mall with his band of merry men for some work when he saw her, his kissing partner leaving the pizza parlor.

"Guys I will see you in while!" he informed them.

He looks at Adi and instructed "Solve the problem we are here for!" and left behind the girl.

Geet choose black strapless dress and thought of trying it on before buying. She went to trial room to try it on, it look perfect so she made up her mind to buy the dress.

As soon she left the trail room and was walking towards her friends when she heard someone greeted her from behind.

"Hello again!"

She turns back and her eyes pop out on seeing the stranger from last night. She was hit by shock at once but the scene from last night play in her mind and she was over took by anger.

Without thinking she went towards the stranger and punches him hard on his face. "If you ever kiss me again I won't mind killing you!" she informed him while pointing finger at his face.

Pinky saw Geet punching a guy and got worried, she came running towards her and pulled her towards the counter.

Maan saw stars in daylight after getting punch from girl. Maan looked up and saw girl threatening him.

For the first time in his life someone threaten him and that is girl. "There is sure first time for everything" thought Maan and smile appear on his lips. One girl who was trembling with fear was pulling her and calling her Geet.

"So her name is Geet!" thought Maan and his smile widen. The short girl was pulling Geet away. There was anger on Geet face and that seem to increase as she saw smile on his face.

She turn her face forward and let Pinky pull her because otherwise she will run back and wipe that smile off his face.

Maan was shocked by Geet behavior; she sure is one of kind. If there had been other girl either she was drooling over him or too shy or afraid to speak to him. He have seen girl begging to get his attention but Geet was the first one who just stood in front him and talk to him like equal and that was a moment he fell in love with her.

Without thinking Maan proposed her in middle of shop "Geet will you marry me?"

As soon as words reach her ears, Geet stop at once. She turns and looks at handsome from top to bottom then walk towards him.

"If you were last person on earth even then I won't marry you!" she replied controlling her voice and walking back towards her friends.

Her denial strength his decision further and smile appear on his lips.

"Only you will be Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana!" he announced in loud voice.

She turn back and look at him, there was challenge in his eyes and smile.

"In your dream!" she shot back with challenging smile and walk out of shop.

Maan know that Geet is stubborn and she will not go out with him or get to know him. So he need a situation where Geet can't run away from him, where she had no option other than staying with him and get to know him.

Plan was forming in his head as he left the shop and wide smile appear when he know that soon she will be Mrs. Maan singh Khurana with her own choice.

He took out his cell and calls Adi and gave him instruction about his new task "Mission Geet!"

Geet was in really bad mood after punching session. Her friends were trying to cheer her but nothing seems to work.

Geet got irritated by the unsuccessful attempt of her friends and decided to go home when Pari stopped her "Geet we planned girl's night out and you are leaving us in middle because of some stranger, since when did he became so important to you that he start affecting your mood"

Her words seem do magic on Geet "You are right Pari, he is not important lets go!"

First they went for movie and unfortunately they decided to watch romantic movie which seem to raise Geet BP because at every scene between leads, images of stranger floats inside her brain.

She tries to keep her irritation aside to prove her friends that, Maan don't have any affect on her. After movie they had a dinner at Italian restaurant and then they went club.

All the girls were dancing on the crowed dance floor while Geet was at bar drinking only orange juice to distract herself but nothing seems to help.

"He is just stranger, he doesn't affect you!" she keeps on chanting in her head but nothing is working today because she is not able to forget him.

She took another sip from glass when someone put hands on her waist. The touch was familiar to her body because she felt butterflies zooming inside her stomach which never happened before. She was about to hit the person in his stomach when he rest his chin on her shoulder and whisper in her ear in his deadly sexy voice "missing me!" strange electric current went through her body.

She turns backwards at once and came face to face with none other than "Maan singh khurana"

Shock hit her for a moment then anger took over her entire existence. She look at his arm then hiss in low voice "Move them or lose them!"

Angry Geet was looking really sexy and the way she threaten him was cheery on the top. "She will be death to me!" thought Maan and smile appear on his lips.

Smile on his face woke angry lioness in her, she raised her knee to hit him in his most sensitive part but her action was interrupted by his next sentence.

"I am here to kidnap you, thought you would like to know!" he said extra sweetness in his voice. Before Geet could react he moves his one hand from her waist, someone hand him handkerchief and without a pause he put it over Geet's mouth.

Geet was still in shock when she was engulfed by darkness. Maan carried her in his arms gently and walk towards their destination.

to be continue...😊

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Edited by somakazmi - 14 years ago

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