pyaar ka naam na lena (ss) part 12 pg 113 updated - Page 29

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Posted: 14 years ago
👏this story is getting more n more interesting ... loveing every bit of it... update soon

ur vm is also very nice... oh I l be waiting for d next update eagerly ... pls do it soon😍
Edited by sayaneegupta - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update!
Geet was worried for the puppy!
And she left to save it..!
And maan just left her alone there!
But glad that he came back!
And good that maan isn't giving importance to Sam!
Can't wait for the next part!
Please continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Good that Maan felt guilty for leaving her there n went to her
Sam that was yuckiest joke of hers
Maan will get the biggest shock when she wil get to knw abt Geet's prob
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Posted: 14 years ago
When will he come to know about Geet??? ab har baar kuch na kuch gadbad ho jatha hai... aur what is wrong with that Sameera😡
and... superb VM dear!!!! Can i know which is the song used for background score, coz its just the apt for those scenes
Edited by maanhar - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

this vedio really suits on your ff,... i really loved it

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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow superb VM yaar...suits your SS very very much...
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Posted: 14 years ago
update soon...
i'm eagerly waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 14 years ago
INTEHAAA ho gaiii intezaar kiii ……………. 😭😭

aai na kuch khabar hamaare WRITER N UPDATE ki ……… 😕

hai mjhe yeh yakeen aayein ge woh jald hiii …….

phir wajah kia huiii INTEZAAR ki ……. 😆

JWALA plzzz update soon ….. i m getting crazy dude !!!!! 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF MY SS FOR UR LOVE AND SUPPORT
THANKS FOR COMMENTING


Part 6

maan looked at her in shock and surprise...she couldnot speak anything due to shock...she was sweating profusely..her hair was in mess...her legs were bleeding...her breathing was faster...she closed her eyes and leaned onto seat trying to calm her self from the most scariest situation she had ever met in her life...seeing her condition maan understood that someone chased her...he got down the car and looked back...there he saw the autodrivers running back after seeing him...he felt guilty for leaving her in that situation...he tried to talk to her...but seeing geet's condition he kept quiet and sat in the car...but when he saw her legs bleeding...he felt bad...he took out his hanky saying...

maan: tumhare pairo se khoon aaraha hey..yeh lo tab tak iss hanky ko bandh lo...

geet didn't gave any response...this made maan angry...but he calmed himself saying...

maan: shayad woh shock mein hoga...

he then slightly patted her shoulders...geet instantly opened her eyes and looked at maan...maan gave her his hanky...and signalled with his eyes pointing her bleeding legs...geet looked at him for a second with teary eyes and gave his hanky back to him...maan got confused...and angry

maan: .mein inhe madath karna chahtha tha..lekin yeh...

when he was about to yell...he saw geet opening her bag and removing cotton,ointment and a gauze piece...she cleaned her wounds ...with cotton...applied ointment ...and bandaged it ...maan looked at her in surprise...he couldnot yell at her after that...geet was scared to look at him...she lowered her head and said "thanks"...

maan: thanks...kisliye...

geet remained silent...

maan: mein kaise bhool gaya...iska attitude..khair mujhe kya karna hey..ek baar isse ghar lejao uske baad dadima jaane aur yeh jaane...

having said these words he drove the car towards mansion...

By the time they reached mansion...geet slept in the car itself as she was tired and weak ..when maan stopped the car before mansion...geet woke up suddenly ...and looked at maan.

maan: ab chale andher...

geet looked around...and got surprised when she saw the mansion before her...maan got down from the car and started walking inside in his usual speed...geet got down from the car...but because of wound on her leg...she couldnot stand and fell down...maan who almost reached the door looked back when he heard the sound of falling..

maan reached the car...and tried to make her stand by offering his hand...geet looked at maan...and shook her head saying "no" ...then she herself tried to stand with the support of car...maan gave an angry glare and turned back...started walking towards the door... just then savithri devi who was waiting for them since evening, came outside when she heard maan's car sound...

savithri: maan ..hum kabse aapke intezar kar rahe hey...

she then looked at geet who was standing near the car...

savithri: maan..yeh ladki...

maan rolled his eyes...

maan: wahi...aap ka fav...artist...mera dimaag kharab karke rakha hey...ab aap hi sambahlo isse...

having said these words maan walked angrily towards the mansion door...savithri felt very happy...she came near geet...geet greeted savithri folding her hands...

savithri: beta..aap hi woh artist hey..mein ne socha tha ki koi bada admi shayad..khair..chodiye...

geet smiled...she couldnot get what savithri was saying...because geet was in severe pain and couldnot give any attention to lip reading...

she then looked at bandage on geet's leg...with a worried look she asked...

savithri: beta kya hua aapke pair ko

maan who was walking seriously into mansion stopped when he heard her words...he turned back...and looked at geet who was silently listening without giving any answer...

maan: daadi..yeh sab baathein aap andher bhi karsakthe hey na...

savithri looked at geet with a smile...

savithri: haan..beta ...hum andher chalthe...

geet could understand only the last word "andher chalthe" from savithri...she smiled and nodded...but geet was unable to walk due to pain...then savithri turned at maan...

savithri: maan beta...yeh bechari chal nahi pa raha hey..thoda isse utake ghar ke andher leke aasakthe hey kya...

maan got shocked with her words...and looked at geet...sending virtual daggers onto her with his looks...

to be continued...




Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
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continue soon

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