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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: darshika121

di updates de do ab wait naho rha hai itne acche acche promos diye h ab update k lie koi delay mat karo na plz plz plz



Originally posted by: sammuratfanno1

milenge milenge in dono ko milne se koi nhi rok sakta. nxt part jaldi update karna di




FINALLY UPDATING THE LAST PART 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RagSia

Abhi's proposal!!
N God damn..
Precap has me equally heartbroken...
Accept ka kya matlab hai?
How can she?
U makin me cry...




Originally posted by: RagSia

Aww!
Everybody knows something z cooking!
Shooo cute!
N m way too excited about their dance practise, n performance!



Dnt cry darling njoy it aage padh u'll only njoy it 😃

thnku
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I read part 13 now!
Reached half way..
I was really scared when Rohan said "jaise maar dalegi muzhko..."
I too believe k some past birth fears do return bt this I mean to live it through Rohan was really dangerous experience..
For a while I forgot I was reading n not watching..
Really fably written..
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Part 27 - Last Part





There is a place of peace
There is a place of joy
A place away from loneliness
A place away from pain
That place is next to you
A secret garden
Where black and white becomes a colorful place
Of loving, kisses, touching, caressing,
There with you and only you
Cares of the world melting away
Anger and fear are not allowed
Prejudice cannot enter
A place where two hearts beat as one
A place where two souls are interwoven,
Touching the inner-place of one another
A place that I long to come back to again and again
A place of sweet abandon
A place next to you

Update

Next Morning,

Suhaani was packing her Stuff, she's in haste...

Sumit: Wat are u doing suhaani

He ask twice, but she dnt reply...

Sumit hold her hand n turn her to himself...

S: I was asking u sumthing...

Suhaani look at him with anger, those 2 eyes, filled with anger, pain n tears but she's not letting those tears drop out...

Su: Leave me(she shout n push him back)

He was shocked to see her so angry...

Su: Problem kya hai tum boys ki, maine kya theka le rakha h tum log ko clarification dena ka, kya karti hu , kahan jaati hu, kaun ho kaun tum, dad ho mere, bhai ho, husband ho, bf hokaun ho kaun tum ... y can't u ppl just let me live happily, y the hell one or the other person expect me to be happy when everything around me is just a mess, when everything inside me is broken...Just leave me alone...

She was saying this with so much but still those tears dnt came out... tears came out from sumit's eyes, he move forward n hugs her tightly... n then those tears drops out...

Su: Y sumit... y its happening, i was happy y he came back... i can't see him in such a pain,...
M troubling him...

S: No suhaani u r not troubling him...

Su: yes i m sumit, m face reminds him of those disastrous happenning which happen becoz of me...

Sumit can feel her pain, she was not crying but she was hurt Cry

Sumit help her in packing...

S: Ghar ja rahi ho?

su: Hmmm

S: Apna dhyan rakhna

Su: Hmmm

S: Wapis kab aaogi?

Su: Pata Nahi... need sum tym

He gave her a jaado ki jhappi

S: I m going to miss u buddy

Suhani gave a smile to him n leaves.

Other Side...

Rohan was dreaming, those eyesss, that smile... n all of a sudden a ring disturns his dream, yes his phone was ringing...

R: Hello (sleepy voice)

Mehul: tu so raha hai abhi tak Angry

R: Kya hua

M: aaj mera sangeet h Angry

R(wakes up with sudden jerk): ohhh teri!

a Pause

R: srry srry srry yaar mere dimag se utar gaya, dnt wrry i'll be thr, abhi nikalta hu, maine tickets karwa rakhi h bas sham tak pahunch jaunga...

M: Tu nahi aaya to tu gaya...

R: Ye wada raha yaar, " MAIN AA RAHA HOON"!

Suhaani was in taxi n all of a sudden a cool breeze touch his face, she closed her eyes, take a deep breath, a sigh of relief was their, her heart says " ROHAN" n she feels as if he was coming to him...

Rohan can feel it as if sum one calls him...

Sumthing like this

Delhi...

7 PM

A large banquet hall's garden, fully decorated, a stage was set up... Yes its Mehul n kaya's sangeet ceremony Eve n Rohan n Suhaani are coming thr, they dnt know that its thr destiny, no matter how far they go, thr destiny will eventually bring them together...

Kaya was getting ready, n two beautiful hands with magenta n blue mix colored bangles came forward n close her eyes...

Kaya: Kaun hai?
She said while touching those hands...

Suhaani: Tu mujhe bhool gyi (she said in a softer tone)

Kaya removes hands, turn to her with a big smile, n hugged her tightly...

K: I missed u so much yaar

S: I missed u too

K: Thank god tu aa gyi, tere bina mera kya hota...

S: Ha ha ha, jhoothi tujhe meri kya zarurat hai ab (she tease her)

She was smiling but her eyes says it all, kaya is her best friend, she can read that udaasi in her eyes...

K: tu thik hai na...

Suhaani gave a big smile : aur kya, thik bhi hu aur tujhse achi bhi lag rahi hu... aisa lag raha hai AAJ TO DULHAN MAIN HOON!

K: Shut up!

They giggle n suhaani make her ready n they arrives at the garden where sangeet was going on...

Boys were on other side ...

They were having drinks etc... mehul n jai were waiting for rohan, they have no clue that suhaani is already there...

Rohan arrives in a haste, running, n waering his coat...

Mehul: Loji DULHE RAJA AA GAYE...

Rohan hugs mehul n jai...

Mehul: abe shaadi meri hai teri nahi, itna late kyu aaya...

R: KYA KARU DER SE AANA AADAT ME HAI, PAR TU KAHE TO MAIN BHI SHAADI KAR LU AAJ HI!

They laughs...

Other side...

Kaya: U hv to dance suhaani...

S: Nahi yaar (she hesitate)

Kaya call her cousins n says that she's a very good dancer...

They all insist her a lot, so suhaani had to dance... Music Starts

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-v56OafVt4Q[/YOUTUBE]

suhaani starts dancing n singing with kaya's cousin's

"Meri banno ki aayegi baraat, ke dhol bajaao ji
Meri laaddo ki aayegi baraat, ke dhol bajaao ji
Aaj nachungi main saari raat, ke dhol bajaao ji
Meri banno ki aayegi baraat, ke dhol bajaao ji
Meri laaddo ki aayegi baraat, ke dhol bajaao ji"

Their was dhoom dhadaka, full too ...

She was upset ... n while dancing n singing she gets more emotional, seeing her parents sad face...

But still she tries to control...n also console her parents...

"Sajna ke ghar tu jaayegi, yaad hame teri aayegi - (2)
Jaake piya ke des mein na hamko bhulaana
Aankh baabul teri kyon bar aayee, betiya toh hoti hai parayi - (2)
Abb rahegi yeh saiyaan ji ke saath, ke dhol bajaao ji
Meri banno ki aayegi baraat, ke dhol bajaao ji
Meri laaddo ki aayegi baraat, ke dhol bajaao ji"

Dancing was going on this side... music was loud so the voice of girls are not reaching that far...

Rohan: are ye bata party sharty kidhar ho rahi h ...

Mehul: are i guess wahan, every1 was dancing...

R: To hum kis chiz ka wait kar rahe hai... chalo BAARAAT WAHIN LE CHALTE HAI, JAHAN DULHE KI DULHANIYA HAI!

They move towards the stage...

Dancing was still going on...mehndi wali arrives n she was putting mehndi to kaya...

"Gajra kila hai baalo mein, surki lagi hai gaalo pe - (2)
Bindiya chamakati maathe pe, naino mein kajra
Saja hai tan pe gehana, lagi kya khub tu behna
Khili hoton pe laali, saji kaano mein baali
Lagi mehandi dulhania ke haath, ke dhol bajaao ji
Meri banno ki aayegi baraat, ke dhol bajaao ji
Meri laaddo ki aayegi baraat, ke dhol bajaao ji"

As suhaani saw the mehndi, she starts missing rohan n gets emotional...

"Le lu balaye teri sabi, dedu tujhe main apni khushi - (2)
Maangu duwa main rab se yahi, tu khush rahe
Koyi chaahat rahe na adhuri, teri saari tamanna ho puri"

Tears cum out of her eyes, she turns her face n kaya hold her hand tightly...

she turn with smile n again starts singing n dancing...

"Maine keh di mere dil ki baat
Meri banno ki aayegi baraat, ke dhol bajaao ji
Meri laaddo ki aayegi baraat, ke dhol bajaao ji
Aaj nachungi main saari raat, ke dhol bajaao ji
Meri banno ki aayegi baraat, ke dhol bajaao ji
Meri laaddo ki aayegi baraat, ke dhol bajaao ji"

She was dancing n dancing, just to hit her emotions, n suddenly she collides with a child n his dish split over her dress... she moves towards washroom to clean her dress... n from there rohan with mehul n jai enters, kaya was surprised to see rohan n wished that everything goes f9 today...

Rohan wished kaya, function was going on, mehul was more interested in kaya's mehndi, jai was busy with arrangements... n rohan was roaming here n there...

Suhaani was coming back after cleaning her dress, rohan was standing on other side of the tent, thr was a partition, u can only see the shadows...

Rohan hear bangles n anklets, it attracts him again...

As he turns he saw a shadow, he move towards it, suhaani stop thr for a moment as her anklet was disturbing her, she bent down n from other side, rohan bent down... they were so close... they can feel each other... Rohan moves his hand towards that shadow on cloth... suhaani was about to stand n she saw that shadow... she dnt noe wat attracts her but she to move her hand towads that shadow hand... n both touch each other's hand thr was only a cloth between them...

It gave them inner peace...

Jai came from other side n call " Rohan"

Suhaani can easily hear it, she got scared that if he saw her, he'll get attack, she stands n run... her anklets n bangles make a lot of sound... rohan can see her back now...

He ran to see who was thr...
A girl was thr...

Rohan: Excuse me ...

Sum1 turns... she was not who rohan wants...

Jai saw him behaving the same... few years back in college... he had a flashback...

...

Flashbck scene...
Rohan was standing with his GF in the corridor n kaya n suhani passed from his behind n he feels sumthing n immidiately turns n sees them

Rohan : excuse me
kaya turns n suhani paas but rohan wanna see her

Kaya : hi rohan , hw r u
Rohan : m f9 hw r u
but rohan ka dhyan to suhani pe tha n kaya keeps on talking , jai sees it n comes to them
jai: rohan , kya hua
kaya: bro main is se kitni der se baat kar rahi hu but inka dhyan to LOL
rohan: vo jo tumhare saath thi vo kaun thi
jai n kaya laughs
kaya: use chod do plz , uske dad use maar daalenge
n both laughs
but rohan got serious
rohan : aise kaise koi kissi ko maar sakta hai [he shouts n leaves]"

Jai leaves from thr...

Jai: kaya... suhaani yahan aayi h?

Kaya: yes... bulau yahin hogi...

Jai: nahi... ask her to stay away from rohan...

he leaves...

Kaya: when destiny wants to meet them bhai, u can't stop it now... ab sab thik hi hoga...

Suhaani came their in haste...

S: I hv to leave...

K: Kyu

S: Vo... (she hesitate to say that rohan was thr n she can't face him)

K: Kyunki rohan hai yahan...

Suhani nodes

K: Kab tak bhagti rahegi yaar, just face it, jo hona hoga vo hoke rahega, TU JITNA DOOR JAYEGI VO UTNA TERE KAREEB AYEGA!

S: Par...!!!

K: Par var kuch nahi, beth yahan, aur mehndi lagwa!

She sat for mehndi...

Their rohan was searching that girl, he was getting "bechain", he want her now...

After few minutes... rohan finally saw her... she was sitting beside kaya... hair tied behind but sum hairs were covering her face, she was smiling at all the girls naughty talks... he was starring her continusly, n this time her face was not troubling him...

It tooks almost two hours n rohan dnt move a single inch from their, mehul n jai observed him, jai want to talk but mehul stop him saying that he's absolutely f9...

Its 1 am mid night, kaya was tired, she lie down on stage only 😛 , suhaani was still fighting with her hairs, try to move it back but her mehndi is still wet... rohan move towards her... she was looking at her mehndi n trying to find a dry side so that she can move her hair back...

Rohan smiles looking at her n slowly moves her hair back... suhaani got scared n stand in haste, her clip got open in it n she lost balance... rohan hold her hand tightly n that mehndi on suhaani hand got smudge n now its on rohan n suhani's hand (shaadi me bride n groom dono ko mehndi lagti hai) ... wind was blowing hard now, her hair was blowing, they were looking into each other's eyes ...

Rohan pull her towards himsel, look directly in her eyes... n moving her hair from her face...

As he came close to her, he got those flashes, n a l'il headache starts, he keep his hand on his head, suhaani got scared n try to move from their...

Rohan dnt want her to go, he was struggling but this tym his love is on heavy side, he's able to control his headache... those flashes were their but thr was a beautiful flashes... although he's still not getting wats going on...

Suhaani try to ran from there, rohan saw a mike near by stage n he switch it on...

Rohan: Please ruk jao... please don't go away ... Please Suhani!

She Turns

R: I dnt know u, but it feels that i noe u since long, i dnt luv u but it feels i need u, i dnt noe y i see u when i close my eyes... i dnt noe anything
" I DNT KNOW SUHAANI WHEN YOU HAPPEN TO ME "
"BUT PLEASE DON'T GO AWAY, I'LL DIE WITHOUT YOU"

Suhani ran towards him n they hug each other tightly...

As he hug her with all his will, all those flashes gets over n now he remember each and everything...

All Claps...

The End.


😃


Edited by Amor. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello Guyz,

Finally "VO MIL GAYE" ...n as they met this is the last part of "Vo mile the" , hope u likes it, n yes i'll be back with " Vo Mile The: Season 2 " Which is going to be named as " Milan" .

Hope You like this part.

Luv U All
Khushi
😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovd it
Finally they are together.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wowww dii
Awesssummm Part
Finally they met .

Was shocked to hear that it was last part
But yet season 2 is going to come na
Will wait
I hope the season 2 will fill with love n romance
Title ka name hi itna romantic rakha hai MILAN.
Fir to romance hoga hi .
Pls pm me when you wil start the season 2
Will be waiting
N thank you for this lovely shovely update
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Posted: 11 years ago
happy and emotional ending <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing part
happy that they are together
luvd it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
~~~~~~EDITED~~~~~~
Sorryyy...I know I m late...but kya karu ye story...it stole my heart...Rohan..!! Suhani...!! I love them...n Di I love u too that u gave them an existence...ur a really good at writings 👏
I remember that Holi party scene...ohh heaven's so romantic it was...how he colored her cheek...it made me fall in love wid them...that bangle scene ...when she felt him around...!!
the scene where she was terribly crying for him...it is true love...😳
Rohan-Suhani these two r d definition of love really😳😳👏
n the scene of Shadi...those incidents...rather miracles ...vo sahi mayno me shadi thi...milan tha...!!👏


Milan se yad aaya...di jaldi se season 2 de do plzzz
bacchi request kar rhi h be fast plz...!!



😳😳😉

Edited by darshika121 - 11 years ago

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