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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Tammykhurana

hey Rati dear,
very nice n sweet update...
it must be the first updatewer m loving Dev's character...
n m just able to imagine Samir Sharma at this character
sketch...it was really very sweet...
waiting for the next update...
continue soon...😃 ❤️


thank u...but i always imagine abinav as dev😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: DilMaaneet

awesome update ...👏continue soon ...⭐️ aur haan...thaq list mein mera naam nahi tha ...😕


i m terribly sorry dear...as i said the list was copied from like box ...a big thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
great ff cont soon n plzz pm me on d next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
CHAPTER -24

Maneet reached Goa . Maan insisted to stay in his guest house though sameera asked them to stay with her.Maan wanted some privacy.They reached their guest house geet started to unpack their things. maan slowly hugged her from behind.

GEET : cadu aap kya karrahe hai ...
MAAN : tum muje kuch karne kahan dete ho...

Maan said in true desperate voice (bichara)

GEET : aap chodiye muje bahut kaam hai

maan was in no way to leave her alone . Geet tried to get off his arms but was unsuccessful so she decided to give in.She turned to face maan and put her hands around his neck.

GEET : aap toh aaj bahut naughty naughty mood mein ho?

maan didn't answer he was busy exploring her near neck...oops...bad timing geet's phone rings.

GEET : maan phone...

Maan didn't reply. geet tried hard to get her phone which was on the nearby table. it was sameera's call. geet moved her face bit from maan to attend the call.maan was annoyed so he left geet and went to balcony.

Geet finished her talks with sam and went to see maan. he was standing in the balcony looking at wide spread sea. geet hugged him from back.

GEET : i m sorry...

Though maan felt bad at that time he was not angry.so he turned to hug her.

GEET : muje sam ke saath shopping jaana hai...
MAAN : teek hai...

geet was surprised to hear a yes from maan . She was sure that he ll not allow her to go anywhere leaving him esspecially when he was in full romatic mood . She was a bit disappointed .

All the girls were out shopping it was like a girl's day out . Geet kept on checking at her phone but there was no text from maan . now she was worried than angry . Geet reached their place as soon as possible but she didn't find maan in living room. She guessed that he ll be out so tried calling him but his phone was not reachable. She sank in the couch as she was tired of hard shopping. Suddenly she noticed a chit on the table which informed her to be ready for a surprise in their bed room. By now geet was used to maan's surprises. she went to their room.

The room was beautifully decorated with roses it was perfect romantic set up. The flowers , candles , fragrance everything had their own version of maan's intentions for that night. That made geet a bit worried. Maan slowly encircled his arms around geet's waist and kissed her cheeks. maan lifted her and placed her on bed.he whispered lovingly in her ears.

MAAN : how did u like it shona?

Geet didn't reply at first maan thought that she was blushing and may be shy but later he realized that she was worried.his voice was concerned.

MAAN : kya hua shona?

Geet got up to sit near maan. she hugged his arms and rested her head on his shoulder.

GEET : main ek baat boloon?
MAAN : umm...
GEET : wo...main...i know maan that we r married aur ye sab galat nahi hai phir bhi...phir bhi main chati hoon ki sab kuch traditionally ho...mera matlab hai...

maan placed his index finger on her lips. Her eyes explained everything to him more than her words.He kissed her forehead assuring her that he is agrees with her.Geet felt guilty and sad for depriving him from something that belongs to him.

MAAN : tumhe kuch kehane ki zaroorat nahi . main samaj sakta hoon and trust me i don't have any problem with that.

Geet was still feeling bad. Maan tried to change her mood by asking her about her day. Both discussed about their day and about next day's plan and soon slept in eachother's arms. Maan was neither disappointed nor angry after all that was not exactly what he expects from their relationship.

It was sameera's engagement the atmosphere was really happening and romantic. Maan was looking stunning in his black outfit while geet was breath taking in white saree. Sameera and gaurav exchanged their rings their parents were out of the world wit happiness. Sam's mom hugged her and kissed her tears rolled down her eyes. Geet was watching them and remembered her mom. She felt sad. She remembered her wedding though she was happy that she was maan's wife she wasn't happy with the fact that they married secretly.She wanted a traditional wedding with all her near and dear ones. maan sensed her sadness he put his hands around her and comforted her.

MAAN : jaise hi hum wapas jaayengey main daadi se baat karloonga.

geet was touched by the fact that he understood her feelings . She couldn't ask for anything more she had everything coz she had maan.


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PRECAP :GAURAV ASKS GEET FOR DANCE... MAAN ' S DANCE WITH SAMEERA ( UFFF...YE DONO KABI EK DOOSRE KE SAATH KYUN NAHI DANCE KAR SAKTE )

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Edited by RATII - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update dear 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice, he is really understanding...looking forward to dance
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey dear,
tht was really vry nice n sweet...
both understand each other so very much...
n i agree wid ur precap...
y cant they dance wid each other...
thnkx for the PM n keep writing...
lots n lots of hugs n kisses...😃
❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update !!!
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
Keep rocking
Luv
TC
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow...ab to main bhi cahti hoon ki Maan dadima se jaldi se baat karle
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Posted: 14 years ago

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