AbhIya FF : And I will be waiting-B3 - Updtd-Pg149 - Page 90

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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update Poco!
whats up with tanushree? whats happenign?!? im excited!
and abhay... just... DAMN...
and i cant believe im saying this, but GOSH I MISS ABHEER! :p
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh gosh Poco can you please get Anushka back. I mean seriously it feels like only she can get Abhay back. I wish Abhay shows mercy towards Zee and Piya. Just a bit would be fine!


Sambhav...i wonder how he'll react when he finds out!
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW...T and Sambhav's relationship are beyond words emanated...so much of ambivalence..so many contradictions...you feel like Sambhav's sharp strong hands are the only pair of arms which can shred T's skin to ASHED pieces and yet , the only set of gorgeous bronze skinned arms that can mend those torn pieces of pale and ETERNALLY SCARRED , tainted skin stitched back together through his touch of concern and warmth that is still not completely thrown out of his body...T..similarly is the only one who can raise the animal inside him at it's worst possible shade and yet be the only one who can rise feelings of humanity inside a savage , betrayed and scorned predator...they are the only ones who can destroy and mend each other whenever they want across the sands of time..they illustrate a self destructive relationship sowed by the seed of hate , physical violence , evoking humanity ad a faint echo of plausible feelings inside each other..and this scene just tells you why can't anyone replace their positions in their life for each other i feel..
As for Piya...life may suck out of her but her hope , her light and her love for Abhay never will...even those two seconds of a pensive expression and the initial softening of his beautifully flawed features is the ONLY thought that crosses her body besides his insults towards her love for him..her hope still remains and stakes at even those two second's of her Abhay...ah...her love and her psychologically disbalanced ray of life for Abhay will never stop to amaze me . EVER.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome. I am speechless was that Abhay oh poco di please dont make us wait long please
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Posted: 13 years ago
Super awesome update...thanku thanku soo much for updating 🤗
What has Abhay became Surely one thing hasn't changed is Pia's love for Abhay. he must be feeling guilty even a lil bit for putting her through so much pain but he will overlook it for now because he is in pain too and it must hurt badly
T and Shambhav... what would I say... Sam is my alltime fav character in this FF. their relationship is also very complicated. im pretty much sure now T is pregnant... i cant wait to see sam's reaction on it... please update next time... not saying soon because I know you must be really busy but just dont forget this FF ok 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesummm update poco di!!!oh!!oh!!oh!!was that abhay????please please dnt let him sink in the dark and pain...piya's love will bring hm bck wnt it??nd tanushree and sam were amazing!!!pain and passion are both tangible!!update asap di..
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Posted: 13 years ago

A bright afternoon, Bhulargarh, 1851

She looked so beautiful amidst the lamps in the desert . Tall, statuesque , milk skinned and such lovely brandy doe eyes. Ah, he loved the way her rose bud mouth opened like a blooming flower – the stars swimming in her eyes and that laughter – sigh! She sounded like a running water stream. Adorned in gold and red brocade , her beauty shimmering like a chandelier in those gold jewels. And he was just the missing part of this beauteous picture – handsome, valiant , charming and an evil evil vampire. To the world, she was a mystery relative of the Bhulargarh royal family. That is what he was told when he- an equally mysterious wealthy prince of a state – was invited to a wedding in the palace. They called her by so many names – Vasundhara, Shraddhanjali, Amrapaali and she kept teasing them with all kinds of names. He had laid his eyes on her for the first time, when the mirrors of her red veil had flinched in his eyes as she was flying kites with a fleet of servants on the terrace of the palace. 'Hukum', they used to call her.

The first time, he had seen her , he had known that she was not a normal human-being. Supernatural, there was something supernatural about her and his sensors had been receptive enough to gauge that. And he prove that , when he tried to hypnotize her so that he could seduce her , sleep with her and then, feed on her blood. She had taken him to a lakeside instead of getting hypnotized.

"You want to see something , Aadiiraj?" , she had asked him, lifting her lehenga a little to expose her fair nimble feet adorned with silver anklets.

"Go ahead, princess." , he had said, crossing his arms across his chest , waiting for some magic to happen that would echo his guess that this princess, this bottled beauty was supernatural.

She had a powerful grin on her lovely pear face as she walked into the pond – sorry , on the water of the pond.

"So?", she had asked as she stood on the water in the middle of the pond.

" What are you?", he had asked her with a smile.

She had walked back to the bank and looked at him, glittering like a sky of stars .

" You know who and what I am, Aadiiraj… or Abheer…You wanted to know my secret , because you wanted to know who you are going to bite. Now, you know who and what I am."

Abheer really was awestruck and taken in by her. She was beyond acquisition and that is what excited Abheer.

" A witch ." , said Abheer , looking into her brandy brown circles , his own green eyes refusing to leave her face.

" Correction," , she raised her royally crafted hand clinking with gold bangles, " A sapphire witch. The last in line of the species. And you are a vampire – I mean, a dangerous vampire.I think you thought I could be your next dinner. But that is not happening, Abheer…..never. "

She had turned to leave but Abheer had caught her arm, gently. Touching her was like touching silk. She had looked at him, with a raised witchy eyebrow.

" And what if am not planning to feed on you, princess?" , Abheer had slowly brought her close to himself. She was so lyrically beautiful that he just looked at her like you do at a dream.

" Then, don't plan anything at all, Prince Aadiraaj. I refuse to be seduced,"…..then, she had cupped her hand on his ear and whispered , " Hunt someone else."

Her voice had poured into his ear like a spoon of melted velvet.He had just smiled and bowed like a gentleman , as the princess stepped away from him, got on the chariot and a pair of black stallions too her home. Abheer kept standing there , watching her go.

"Elusive. Unattainable.Hmm. Get ready, Princess. All your defences are going to fail. Seducing a … oops, a sapphire witch , is going to be such a journey.", Abheer smirked to himself as he looked at the water on which she had just walked. He was smitten by this delicate devastatingly powerful woman – and the only way to kill this fixation was to have her , to destroy her. If he didn't , he would start feeling for her and well, FEELING was Abheer's least favourite word.

Attic, Abheer's Mansion, 2012

Abheer , smirking and his green eyes glittering lifted his finger and wiped the dust from her portrait – sitting like a queen on a peacock throne, her elbow resting on its arm and that spark of arrogance on her beautiful face – attired in red and gold.

"Hmm. Hukum…..", grins to himself, " You were one conquest, witchy. Destroying you, ruining you was necessary. It really was," his face darkens, " something in you threatened to make my heart beat and I cannot afford a heartbeat…. ( rolls his eyes)… dayumn! How I hate these cheesy lines.

Just then, the door of the attic is swung open and Abheer turns to see a furious and disturbed Abhay walk in.

"Hello, brother!", Abheer winks at him as he tosses Anushka's portrait aside, " So, I guess you had great fun playing snakes and ladders with Zeezoo and Piyu… oops, Piyaa."

Abhay gives him a cold glare and goes and picks up Anushka's painting , looking at it.

" Its been more than lifetimes, Abheer. I don't understand why you carry Anush's portrait everywhere you go, " said Abhay as he carefully placed the painting in a cupboard and closed it.

Abheer shrugged his shoulders and picking his glass of bubbly that had been left midway sits at a window and eyes Abhay like a predator.

" Leave that aside. You tell me. What wind blew you into my house?", he asked.

Abhay sat down on a dusty settee and spread his arms over its back , tapping his fingers thoughtfully. His one leg on the other and his foot oscillating. Abheer narrowed his eyes as he looked at Abhay. Hmm, he was changing – there was something so powerful about him now. He actually was sitting as though he was the king of the house.

Abhay glared at Abheer but then, gave him a studied glance , " You did something to my head that night , didn't you? When you had dropped in for a brotherly crappy visit.

Abheer blinks his eyes innocently at Abhay and then, smiles wickedly, " But it did you good, no? I introduced you to your destiny, my little baby…. Now, you know who you are and what you are meant to be. I just triggered it, boy. The ring would have found its way to you , anyway."

Abhay looks at Abheer deeply and all he sees a gorgeous man with an evil spirit. Of course, Abheer had his own motive and it was definitely not good. I mean, good and Abheer don't go together.

" Abheer, i know you didn't do all this as some social service or for any love lost for me. You have your own motive.", said Abhay as he tapped his fingers on the arm of the settee.

Abheer rolled his eyes and sipped his drink , his hair kissing his forehead and his green eyes competing with cat eyes in the glinting moonlight.

" Don't worry about my motives, little one. I am a bas***d and playing bas***d-bas***d, screwing lives is my favourite sport and you know that , right?"…. he walks over and sits next to Abhay , resting his head on the headrest, " Think about yourself. And the story of the white swan and the black swan that I told you. .. ( pauses and grins wickedly )…. And of course, your pretty pixie pink Piya. Maithli's epic romance has failed , after all."

Abhay glares at Abheer at the mention of Piya and snatching his glass of bubbly smashes it on the floor.

" Is Piya your new acid canister to hurt me?," Abhay literally screams at him.

Abheer shrugs his shoulders and makes a baby face , " You and Piya are enough to play hurt-hurt with each-other. I don't need to do anything. And come on, she loves you. You love her. How cute… awww. But you love breaking her heart – or should I say all the women who fall in love with you. Oh, come to think about it , how are you and I different?"

Abhay smiles a disappointed smile and looks at Abheer in a little disgust , " Abheer, if, tomorrow, I was to turn into the most evil being , I will still be the no.2 . I break hearts , maybe. But you screw and end lives. And there is no worst example in history than what you did to Anushka. Misha is next in line to suffer the same fate."

Abheer's face goes dark and evil at the last part of Abhay's ridicule.

" Why do you keep feeling bad about it, Abhay? I am an evil superpower. I needed to sire my own breed and Anushka was perfect for that and…."

" Until, you found out that if THE SAPPHIRE WITCH gave birth to your child, the child will be more powerful than you! And what did you do, hmm? You threw a pregnant Anushka into a well of fire!"… Abhay grabs a furious Abheer by his shoulders… " You do remember that spectacle, don't you? I DO! You may have forgotten her screams and her pain but I haven't! So, before you go around telling me what am doing to Piya and that white swan-black swan poem, think about what you have done.

Abheer's forehead creases as he recalls a backstabbed, betrayed Anushka falling into a well of fire as Abheer pushes her in with full force.

" So? Big deal!", Abheer shakes off Abhay's hands from his shoulders and grins evilly, " Its called collateral damage, brother. The baby had to die and we all knew that nothing would happen to Anushka. She is protected by a coven of 1000 witches. Why do you keep going back to the same chapter again and again and again? "

Abhay shakes his head at Abheer, his ice blue eyes screaming 'HATRED'.

" Abheer, i don't know what way am going or what am becoming or what will happen to me , eventually. I know am going over to a dark dark side but one thing that has not changed in all these centuries is my wish , my hope, that Anushka will be avenged."…. ( Abheer just rolls his eyes and shrugs it off )… " And what you want to achieve through Misha will never happen."

Abheer smirks, " Is it? And who will stop me? You? Misha?

" Something. Someone . …. (pauses )… anyway, am going now, Abheer. I just came to tell you that none of your manipulations are going to work on me. I know that you, Master, Sambhav, the slayers , everyone is after me because of what is going to happen to me on my 666th birthday but trust me – don't attach yourself to my new powers .You will regret it and regret it bigtime."

Abheer makes a scared face , " Am sho shcared."

Abhay shakes his head and starts to leave but Abheer puts his arm in his way to stop him.

"What?", Abhay bellows.

" You still love Piya, don't you? Be honest." Abheer grins like a gleeful child at him.

Abhay jerks away his arm, " Mind your own business, Abheer. "

Abheer looks at Abhay mischievously with a glint in his hot greens , " That means , I can have her? Her virginal innocence is such a turn on. "

Abhay gives Abheer a soft dark grin and puts his forefinger under Abheer's broad jawline, " Trying to instigate me, hmm? I know Piya is of no interest to you and she doesn't excite you. And if she excited you , I would gouge out both your sexy greens that drive women wild. Goodnight."

And Abhay is out like a swish of cool wind. Abheer grins to himself and goes out of the attic, whistling to himself .

TO BE CONTINUED……………….

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Posted: 13 years ago
2 updates in a row. Am I dreaming?😲😆
Edited by Siberian_Pigeon - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved the brothers' convo
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Posted: 13 years ago

And... You did it again...Left me panting for more... Outrageously awesome update!

I could never imagine Abhay being such cold hearted. Now that he knows the truth, I wish he realize what his beloved ones did was for his best and at least stop hating them. The battle between evil and good has just started and is not going to stop so soon.

Don't know what to say for T and Sam. They were the reason for each others destruction they can be the only aid to each other.

Cant wait to read more. Please keep updating'

Finally, big thank you for continuing such wonderful FF. I am sorry for loosing the hope and stop visiting or writing comments in between.

🤗

Neha
Edited by Precious_Pal - 13 years ago

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