SS-Is raat ki Subah Nahi! Thread 1 - Page 69

Originally posted by: maneet1985

updating tonight... aashu kahan hai aap... yeh last part hai kya???

Originally posted by: leverne

Cant wait for it...jaldi update do before i go off to sleep

Originally posted by: esha143

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Chalo me finally here...sorry for being late to comment on the OS that u wrote as part of my request...wohi tooo..kamina behuda demands karti hai aur fir dekhti bhi nahi hai😡😡😡😆😆😆😆😆

Update was...kya bolu...lovely...ye word kam hoga...beautiful...ye bhi kam hai... awesome...romantic...still less...sensual...thoda sa theek hai... blastingly hot ... ye achcha hai I think...😆😆....LD se hot nahi na???😉😉

.well all these words will summerize my feelings for this update...u really did justice to the romantic plot of the story aashu👏👏👏... the scenes between Maan n Geet were yummylicious...like that chocolate desert u described😛

jijz ko bolu tujhe chocolate khilane??😉😉😉😉

😆...Maan's romantic demands n Geet's feigned reluctance all suits well to the situation...n at the end Maan baring his soul in front of Geet...that was so emotional...Maan rarely speaks his heart out n whenever he does that...its mesmerizing...just like this...the lines u wrote to describe his feelings were so beautiful...👏👏...I totally loved the update Sweetheart...🤗...wuuuww juu kamini...Now me off to read the next one too...😃

Originally posted by: esha143

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Le main aa gayi yaha bhi...phinalllyyy😛😆😆
kamini kahiki...🤗🤗🤗🤗

Again a blasting update filled with Maaneet's pure n soulful love...the song is nice n suit the setting...the way they expressed themselves while dancing to this song is amazing...all of their emotions being said through the song...their moves n most importantly their eyes...it was wonderful...n finally they did give in to the pure bliss of their love...expressing their pen-up desires for each other...waiting to see the next update eagerly...

...thank u hai ji!!

.what u meant by Tip Tip Barsa Paani😛😆😆...I think I know that but will be happy to read it from ur POV😆...so jaldi kar...tip tip barsa pani means rain is falling chama cham cham aur kya?? ganda ganda mat soch!! chi chi babaji!😳😳😳😳

Waise glad to read that first point u wrote for Muskan...I would have been the first in line to murder u with my bare hands...n I think u know that...😉😆...

are HK tere hi darr se to maine option badal diya!! i value my life😆😆😆

Chalo update soon now kamini...n make ur kaminis more n more proud of u with each update...🤗...wuuww juuu...mmuuaahhh !!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: euphoric

Kamini Vicky ko chura liya😕... Sasha ka kya karu ab yeh bhi bata de😆 are sasha ke liye mai dhoond te hu..uski tension mat le...😆😆😆😆

chal update ki baat karte hain😃

when the eyes talk... wht else is left for the words to convey and when the heart talk rhyme... could the soul defy its purpose😳... the opening lines perfectly describes what they feel in the moment and also the knowledge tht the other one knows all too well😳..mujhe lag raha hai ke you are writing poetry..beautifull lines soni!!😃😃

Admiring her with his eyes, worshipping her with his hands, loving her with his soul.

👏👏👏👏👏

maybe she just wanted to lose herself in him''.With him'...Within him''!!!

👏👏👏👏👏

Her life may be a gift FROM him, but her soul was a gift FOR him.

👏👏👏👏👏

loved these lines😳😳😳😳..thank u!! me too love thme😆😆😆😆

you know babu... you made the onset of this union so celestial and divine that the update emancipate only purity of their love..aisa laga?? that was my aim!!😳😳😳

needless to say this was sensual and beautiful... i could feel my heartbeats going faster with this😳..hmmm kiske liye??😉😉😉😉

Maan knows wht he wants now... when he opens his arms... it is to engulf the whole world and when he embraces her in his tight hold he knows she's the whole world for him... he was naughty... loving... caring... as he conveyed her that this was the night they that would unite them in all its glory.....u think so??? keeep thinking...moi is chup bilkul chup😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

she knows what is in her man's heart and is aware of his desires as she feels the same feeling building firm inside herself... she can't tolerate a second away from him coz she knows thts where she belongs to... thts the end of her world and the beginning of their love😃..

he indulges her and cherishes her ... while she worships him and acknowledges his love and companionship in totality... beautiful!👏..your lines are perfect..shayad next me dall do😕😕😕😕😆😆😆😆

now looking forward for whts to come☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ ..lal tamatar..zyaada mat look forward kar!!

Wuuwwws Juuu Ashuuu😳

thanks for the soulful writeup😳

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

missed you kaminiii🤗 badhaiyaan ji badhaiyaa...mera msg ka reply bhi nahi ki tu!!

mai to tickets bhi book kar li meri aur soni ki😭

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

.well all these words will summerize my feelings for this update...u really did justice to the romantic plot of the story aashu👏👏👏... the scenes between Maan n Geet were yummylicious...like that chocolate desert u described😛

jijz ko bolu tujhe chocolate khilane??😉

Originally posted by: esha143

yeh tujhe bolne ki jaroorath nahi hai...😉😆

Originally posted by: Anita1118

Hey aashu!