Ripped Apart ~5~ (Maaneet) teaser ;) pg 130 - Page 99

Originally posted by: swetha10

wow nice update.. finally maan got to knw tht geet is not married.. continue soon

Originally posted by: janu_2006

Hey

gr8 part..

cont.sooon

thanks for pm dear..

Originally posted by: maanujaanu

Soni sweety sorry couldn't comment earlier

bcoz my computer has some problems

but i got it fixed now

n would like to thank u 4 giving us such wonderful updates

Luved d way Maan found d truth bout Geet not being married

n Geet finding help from Tejji

but Arjun now got a lot more hints n hope he doesn't hurt Maan or Geet n d process

well thanks again 4 such amaing n awesum updates

Originally posted by: ansah

Thanks for double updates...sorries for being extremely late

not my fault exams talwar on my head...😆😆

loved it like anything...so maan finally know the truth..

thankuuu babaji...😆😆

can we have arjun killed plz...would love to do the honours

Originally posted by: acjanfeb1

missing RIPPED APART from last 15 days ,read at one go .

so , much happened .loved it

She looked up at him as tears trickled down her cheeks. He searched her face, waited for her to say something but nothing happened. She looked at him as if he was a dream. Gulping the lump in his throat, he gently cupped her jaw and called again, "Geet"... and then she leapt forward and flung in his arms as she broke into gut-wrenching cries. He held on her tightly as she clutched onto his collar, seeking the warmth of his embrace.

atlast ,she is in maan arms . feeling content .so, loved this para , i can't tell u

.

Originally posted by: sukklover

dear...😊

1stly ...4 PM me hunn...

u really done n

...👏👏👏👏.

4 that to u..👍🏼.

... ......n really .😃😉...

4 donn't comment regular but also late n short.becouse of my exam.....

4 ur update tons of n ..🤗.

again 4 ur update..😃..

lov,❤️

Tama

Originally posted by: ssree

lovely FF, great work 👏

Originally posted by: jnawaz

he he...so...todays menu...salad / avocado ranch dressing, chicken kabob, rice, humus, coke, and for dessert...caramel apple parfait...😃...its Sunday afternoon, lunch time at work...he he...best time to read!! lol...

Chapter 33

i had totally forgotten that you'd left off with Gurinder coming to Geet and Maan being all...well...Maan like...ha ha...😆😆😆...i bet its KILLING him!! 👏👏...that prolonged exposure line that Geet said...ha ha...that was too funny...it was awesome!! lol...loved it!! 🤣...i wish Dadi was more like Dadi on the show...not that her concern for Maan is unwarranted...but...after knowing some of what happened...how can she not side with Anu and Vicky? bechari Geet 😭...my hear broke when Maan said "Geet toh Maan ki thi"...🥺...but then when she went off on him...omg...that was beyond awesome!!! i was all sorts of cheering...ha ha👏👏👏...oooh!! defiant tears! 😲...im so gonna steal this line from you!! that was awesome!!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️...

Chapter 34

i knew it was bound to happen...it was only a matter of time before Maan kicked or attempted to kick someones butt!! bechara Gurvinder phas gaya...😕...and bechara Adi!! 😆...Maa aur biwi ke beech mein phas gaya...tauba!!! 😆😆😆...PInky my luv!! i loved how she told Maan Geet wasnt married...at least someone did!! that was awesome!! been waiting for that for ages!!! 😳😳...im actually giddy now!! ahhH!! "nothign will happen to her"...haye...Knight in Shining Armor syndrome!! of course...he' can pull it off as well!! 😉😉😉...omg...the part that KILLED me...was when Maan gulped the lump in his throat...his reaction to Geet being in tears...wow!! flawless!!!

great updates luv...cant wait for next one!
JAZ

ps: about how i came to read your ff...well...you'd been PMing me...and the title seemed good...but i kept putting it off...but then my coworker told me about it...she uses like three id's so not sure which you'd know...but her name is Raman...once she told me...i read it...

pps: still waiting for a reply to my first SUPER LAMBA comment 😛

Dadi here has known and liked Geet but she's hearing it all from Anu... neither has she met her yet nor has she got a first person account besides we know Anu is more biased when Geet is concerned😉😆 hmm u wanna use the line... no probs... but mujhe kya milega😈😆

Ps.. Hmm i know Raman😃 glad to know u guys r colleagues and i m humbled tht she recommended RA to u... love ur comments

pps... reminds me i have work on hand😆 kal pakka

Originally posted by: cutee987

omg! both updates were awesome...

finally maan got to know the truth...

thanks for pm.

Originally posted by: sweet coco

Part 33

WHOA!! Double update'.so awesome'Love ya Sonia'you're the best!!

thanks a bunch Hetu😆

Okay loved this part'.the song sequence was beautiful and so perfect for the situation. So finally Maan is asking the right questions, YES!

some thinking in place... munda using his akal u see😉... thts one of my fav numbers😳

I love that line that Geet said'what a backbone this girl has'so impressive! Jealous and sad Maan'.oh but it's getting good!

she finally gave him the piece of her mind... she's compatible to Maan... how can she be any less😃

Arjun'.when will he die'can someone strangle him! I hope Maan, Geet and Anu get to slap him'he totally deserves it!

soon enuf... maan and geet and anu won't spare him

Vicky-Sasha'.so uber cute and I love the protective nature of Pinky-Adi'.Geet in such safe hands!

Pammi and her family whole heartedly took Geet as their own na... it wud have been so difficult for her to otherwise stay by herself😊

Hoping for some beautiful Maneet moments and soon!!!!!

sure😉😆

Excellent work babe'love this FF so much, you always exceed expectations!!!

thanks a loads sweetie😳

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My favorite line in the whole part: "his insides blazed causing his blood to boil. Responsively, his fingers curled to fists as he fought the urge to tear her apart from that man's hold"'OMFG! His possessiveness over her'.me so dead!

ohh i know... i love his possessive instincts too... tht just adds spark to his him, his love and his passion😊

And then the ripped the world apart line'.classic!! Loved it!

thanks dear😃

And he knows now'YES!!! So happy more of the truth is coming out'finally!!!

he had too... i promised a roller coaster, didn;t i?😉😆

Maan crying'.OMG'this is getting better and better'.so glad this happened'he knows and he regrets!

though he'll regret more... Khurana papad company in making😆

EMBRACE'.YIPPPEEE!!!!! This was one of my most favorite chapters'.I'm dead again! Thank you for something good'now she has to spill the truth'I'm so happy!!!!

oh it had been the most crucial ones and the difficult to write as well😊 glad u enjoyed😳

YOU ROCK BABE!!!!!!!

😳☺️😎