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Aanya

@Aanya.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#431

Installment 2 is up on Page 60!

Read. Like Comment <3

Goodnight :)

xoxo

Aanya

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Zarqaa

@cant.be.assed.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#432

armaans past is sad :( i wish riddhima can forgive him soon and i hope demtri doesnt do anything

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belle_moi

@belle_moi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#433

Yes ma'am, so when do u plan to update?

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Aanya

@Aanya.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#434

Originally posted by: belle_moi
Yes ma'am, so when do u plan to update?

LMAO have you read Installment 2? 😆

Erm Imma try and update LI tonight...so the update for Isa will take time :)

xoxo

Aanya

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

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Posted: 14 years ago

#435

Read both the installments and Loved it to the core...Riddhima's so called article is treat to read...Love the way u write..try to complete the part soon...take care

GEET.

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belle_moi

@belle_moi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#436

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr

LMAO have you read Installment 2? 😆

Erm Imma try and update LI tonight...so the update for Isa will take time :)

xoxo
Aanya

lol! I commented too =) Something you still have to do btw, my part is complete:)

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Saniya786

@Saniya786

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#437

Omgshhh That was soo saddd. What kind of mother does that to her son! :( Ughh Please continue soon! :)

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Pooja

@ObodroKargosh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#438

EDITED:

AHAKDMFKADJKFADJFKAF are you serious?? I think you write this much better than Love Is 🤣 I think I should go hide somewhere after I am done commenting! I might have just said something that will make you want me dead instead 😆

but ADLFMAKDJFAKDFD this was so good!!! ahhh so much happened man! I absolutely loved it! did I say the last part was my favorite?? psshtt scratch that! this one just became my favorite 😳
and you've made me speechless ONCE AGAIN!!! like helloo are you allowed to do that?? tereko comment nahin chahiye kya 😛 har time speechless karegi toh comment main meri sirf bakwas padhni padegi 🤣

FK man so much happened in this 😳 Is this seriously Aanya writing 😆😕 since when did you start giving us an update where so much happens 😆 but I guess if this is a short 5 part FF you need to do that 🤔 but but but still!!! AHHH from his memories to him telling everything to Ridz and then her comforting him and just leaving him like that!! AHHH I was just in a different world for the entire time I was reading this

I am a freaking Salman Khan fan and I loveee listening to his songs <3 and I had that going on in my iTunes right now! my entire playlist of SK songs are playing and I have no idea what songs were playing when I was reading this part 😲 I might have even missed songs from my favorite movies and I don't know 😆 I was so into it!!!

AKDMFKAJKDFJA can I say that the meaning of Isa really surprised me!!! I never thought it would be Rainbow! aww that is such a beautiful meaning <3 It just made this FF an even more special FF because the title itself is so nice <3 aww I feel like I'll use it somewhere and will never forget to credit you 😳 tehe I love it!!! It makes me cringe <3 imagine getting a name from the person you love that is different and unique <3 awww that is just too good to be true!!! but that's what non fics are for right 😉😆

Armaan's past 😭😭 OMG his mom was such a horrible person 😡😡🤢 how could she be so cruel! YUCK it disgusts me! and the thought of him sleeping on the streets makes me so sad 😭 and then after that if things weren't supposed to get worse they do as he gets Dmitri as his guardian 😡 and he has no shame in saying that he sent the bloody car 😡 ughhh that is just 🤢

aww man I hope Armaan doesn't have to endure too much when he goes back to Dmitri to finish it all!!! and Ridz was so understanding!!! it just made me wanna go and hug her! the words she used while comforting him and just saying that he's a good man prbly made Armaan so happy! I mean all your life you live as a person who is bad and then after saving the person you loves life you hear them say they are a murderer and just minutes later hearing that same person say he's a good person is so overwhelming <3 and I loved how she kept saying I love you!! I don't know why but it reminded me of their last scene 😕 like there is no similarity yet there is 😕 do I make sense 😆

anyway LOVED THIS PART!!!!! 😳

PS: your an amazing writer :D but I am sure you already know that 😛

Edited by Dr.BasketGupta - 13 years ago

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Jyo.

@Jyo.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#439

AANYA! OH MY GOD! This installment! :O FAR OUT! I loovveee it! Argh, I wanted to cry for Armaan! How can you be so good at this age? :O I could freaking visualise every single thing mentioned in this installment! The emotions. it's like.. I could feel them! So from today onwards.. I officially love your writing! :D You are too good for words! :D I just cannot explain how good this installment was in words.. My fav. lines:

I let my body ease itself on the cold marble floor, closing my eyes as the exhaustion sunk it's claws deeper into me.

The personification u used is amazing! :D Claws of exhaustion.. top job!

Going up to her, I hugged her from behind, hoping that for once, she would hug me back and then kiss my forehead as I had seen so many mothers do to their sons. But she pushed me away roughly and looked at me demanding the coins.

😒 I wonder why his mom was like that :(

Turning the other way, I curled up under the street light, it's bright luminescence, and the hard pavement, not letting my tired body sleep.

I don't know what is so good about this line.. cannot put a finger on it.. but I love it! :D

And so I walked straight, back to the living room, willing myself not to let the floodgates, that had locked away my memories for years, open.

Same for this line.. really cannot put my finger on wat i like.. but i like it! :D

Update sooonnn! :D

Lots of love

Jyotika

🤗

PS: You are amazing! :D

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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#440

Originally posted by: ..Jojo..
AANYA! OH MY GOD! This installment! :O FAR OUT! I loovveee it! Argh, I wanted to cry for Armaan! How can you be so good at this age? :O I could freaking visualise every single thing mentioned in this installment! The emotions. it's like.. I could feel them! So from today onwards.. I officially love your writing! :D You are too good for words! :D I just cannot explain how good this installment was in words.. My fav. lines:

I let my body ease itself on the cold marble floor, closing my eyes as the exhaustion sunk it's claws deeper into me.

The personification u used is amazing! :D Claws of exhaustion.. top job!

Going up to her, I hugged her from behind, hoping that for once, she would hug me back and then kiss my forehead as I had seen so many mothers do to their sons. But she pushed me away roughly and looked at me demanding the coins.

😒 I wonder why his mom was like that :(

Turning the other way, I curled up under the street light, it's bright luminescence, and the hard pavement, not letting my tired body sleep.

I don't know what is so good about this line.. cannot put a finger on it.. but I love it! :D

And so I walked straight, back to the living room, willing myself not to let the floodgates, that had locked away my memories for years, open.

Same for this line.. really cannot put my finger on wat i like.. but i like it! :D

Update sooonnn! :D

Lots of love
Jyotika
🤗

PS: You are amazing! :D