OMG itnaa LAMBA part, i luvvv u Tashuuu for this!!! I woke up in the morning, i felt to sit with my lappy for some reason, N here i got a beautiful gift from one of my fav writer😍, so i decided to read this first before i go and take shower😛 N i must say this was worth reading even without taking shower, u knw😉 The way u started with Ridzi's Flashback was beautiful, N i never thought she might have gone through so much in her life , bt poor girl had gone through a lot cox of that selfish shanky panky😡 ufff i hate this man, he never understand Ridzi's feelings, he will always think abt his reputation and his dreams his fame n all, USELESS!!! N favoring bwt two daughters, ufff hw shameless😡 okeyy let's leave him, cox wat more can we expect from that man🥱... U have put every feeling n thought of Ridzi so beautifully!! Luvved the part where Ridzi just outburst at her dad n left the house , it's nt at all worth to live with him, who doesn't respect her feelings n dreams, i like her courage there, a 👏 for Ridzi!!😆 N i luved the bond Muski and Ridzi shared.. OMG wats "Kaankajhoora" ?🤣 N Rahul calling Muski "Jungli Billi" 🤣 that part was really hilarious, the typical Muskaan Rahul wala convo, calling each other by names n pulling each others leg!!🤣🤣 Ridzi falling for Armaan on their v first meeting, that was really wow!!😍 N the way she admired every feature of him, haaye !!! N the way they confessed their luv was really sweet!! baarish mein, haaaye😍 Armaan is just unbelievable,😆 Ridzi itne baar story bataaya, lekin he was nt listening to her all the time, thank god he listen to her this time, warnaa we never got to knw hw they fell in luv with each other😉😆😆
So overall i must say this part was a full package,it involve action, Comedy and Romance (like Armaan said😆).. Luvved reading it, i must say u have presented it so well, cox after an emotional moment u bring something else like Muski's n her Kankajhoora's fight🤣 so i was really enjoying reading this!!! N Tashuu itnaa chotu font kiun bhaii?? i was too lazy to grab my glasses, bt the need of a glass didn't arise in this part cox it was so interesting n i was so much involved in the story, i completely forgot abt my glass😆 !! Brilliant writing skills!!⭐️⭐️ It was Amazingly presented 👏👏👏 Itna lamba part bt i was enjoying every bit of it, i didn't realize it till i finish reading it, cox after reading i was like wooh!! kitna lamba part hai😲!! u dnt have to ask me for lamba comment, cox i can't stop myself when i see ur writing, u r so amazing dear👏!! Keep up the Awesome job!! 👍🏼 N i will nt ask u to Update soon, cox i wanna read Lamba parts like this, so take ur time n surprise me with a Lamba update, okeyyy😉
Bst wishes With lots of Luv <333
Edited by shasha_kajen - 14 years ago
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