Tamanna - maaneet (ss) part 12 pg 62 pdated - Page 30

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Posted: 14 years ago
LOVED THE UPDATE &
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb part
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part...
love it...
geet reacts this way coz she know that maan is engaged...
there is a big trouble for geet...
cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb one... pls continue it soon... eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome...

i just hope geets family treats her well after she returns...which i doubt will happen...

geet n maan...all alone...in his house..n geet got out...

continue soon...

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update. Hope Geet's does not treat her badly when she returns home.
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THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF MY SS FOR UR LOVE AND SUPPORT

THANKS FOR COMMENTING


Part 12


geet looked at him with tears and fear in her eyes which made maan to realize what she did with her...maan at once released her wrist from his grip...geet freed herself from him and started running towards the door...before maan could think what was happening..geet opened the door and ran outside of maan's room...maan got shocked with the sudden act of geet ...and ran behind her ...

maan ran fastly and caught geet's hand before she reached main door...he got angry...geet tried to free her hand from his grip..but his grip was too strong that all her attempts were invain..

geet: dekhiye mujhe jaane dijiye...warna...

maan gave an angry look...he moved towards her saying

maan: warna..kyakarogi?

geet got scared with maan's anger...her voice shaked in fear...

geet: chilllaongi..jor se...

maan: chal chillao...

geet looked at him with horrified expresssion wondering what he was upto...her voice got stuck in her throat due to fear...even though she tried to scream..she could not...

maan: kyu bolthi bandh hogayi...ab tak badi badi baathe kar rahi thi...chal chillao...

saying these words maan moved closer to geet almost crushing her between him and the door...she lost herself in his proximity and she kept looking into his eyes ...as if she was under his spell...Just then maan's father who was sleeping in his room which was in ground floor woke up when he heard some noise at the main door...he then started shouting..."kaun hey waha..darwaza pe". when maan heard his father shouting..he immediately opened the door and came out the house dragging geet along with him...geet came back to her senses and snapped away maan's hand...which made maan more furious...

maan: tumhari problem kya hey..huh..ek ..mein tujhe help karne ki koshish kar raha hu..aur tum mujhe thevar dikah rahi ho...

having said these words maan turned away from geet...clenching his fist trying to control his anger...geet got hurt with maan's words...tears rolled down her eyes...she lowered her head saying..."mujhe ghar jaana hey"

maan lost his temper...

maan: teek hey...tumhe ghar hi jaana hey na...abhi chod detha hu...

maan then held her wrist and dragged her towards the car...

maan: baito...(in anger)

geet got scared and did what maan said...maan sat in the drivers seat and looked at geet...when he saw tears in her eyes his heart shattered and he realized that he was harsh towards her...he closed his eyes in disgust for his behavior towards geet...

maan(monologue): maan..yeh mein ne kya kiya?..geet per gussa dikha raha tha...kya yehi hey mera pyaar...usko samajhne ki bagair usper zabardasthi kar raha tha...chi...mujhse galathi hogayi...bahuth badi galathi..uskeliye mujhe geet se maafi mangna hi padega...

when he opened his eyes and looked at geet...he saw geet in shocked state with eyes wide opened...he got confused ..

maan: geet..kya hua?

geet looked at him and signalled him to look at front...maan got shocked when he saw his father,nainatara and adi standing before the car with serious faces...

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delhi

savithri devi was pacing restlessly in her room looking at the watch...

savithri devi: ithna time hogaya hey...yeh nalayak ladka abhi tak ghar nahi aaya...

just then she recieved a phone call...it was a new number...she thought for a second and answered the call...

"hello...mrs.savithri devi"

savithri devi: yes...

"ji..hum...noida police station se baath kar rahe hey"

savithri devi got shocked...

savithri devi: police station se...

"ji...aapke potha jay...ek rape attempt case mein arrest hua hey"

savithri devi got shock of her life...she calmed herself...

savithri devi: teek hey..mein abhi waha araha hu...

having said these words she cut the call and called her lawyer..to make necessary arrangements ..for bringing jay out of that case...

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Hariprakash sat on the couch looking seriously at maan and geet...nainatara was looking at maan with a worried face...maan stood before his father lowering his head not knowing ho to escape that situation...geet stood with blank expression on face not knowing how to react to that situation...after few minutes of silence...

hariprakash: maan...yeh sab kya hey?

maan looked down and remained silent...

hariprakash: maan..mein tumse kuch pooch raha hu

nainatara: papa...chodiye na..bahuth raath hogaya..hum iske baare mein kal baath karenge...

hariprakash gave an angry glare to nainatara...she got scared and stopped talking...

hariprakash: bathao..maan...kaun hey ladki..aur iss samay humare ghar mein kya kar rahi hey...

maan finally decided to speak up...

maan: papa...yeh ladki...geet hey...radheshyam ki pothi

hariprakash got shocked...nainatara looked at maan in disbelief and adi was about to faint...

hariprakash: kya? radheshyam ki pothi?

maan nodded...geet looked at maan with a horrified face...


to be continued...

Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loveee the part!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part...thanks 4 pm...cont soon
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wow lovely part...
loved it...
nw wat maans dad will do...
continue soon...


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