FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13

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Antares

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Posted: 14 years ago

#801

Wonderful update! That was sizzling yet tasteful...no editing is needed.

Do continue soon.

Edited by Starry_night - 14 years ago

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punjabi.princes

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Posted: 14 years ago

#802

hey hasini!

just read the last 15 parts right now, as i was on vacation for the past month!

loved the advances in both maan-geet and rishabh-naini's relationshi[p.

OMG naini's pregnant again!! yayy

what about geet?,... don't send her back to SF yet!

con't soon

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Tyro

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Posted: 14 years ago

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hasini..🤗...i am back...n now i will make sure that i catch up on all ...😆

ok...haan my comments might be short on all...😔...as my focus is on completing the parts i have left so that i can come to where the story is now...😉

Part 91 (1-5):

omg...they both r saying things that they dont want to ...but want to...as in u understand naa...deep desires r coming out in open...😉😆

In the short period of time she had been married to him, he had rubbed off, a few of his not-so-fine qualities on her😳😳

even maan has a fear that this distance will get to her...n to some extent he is right...only their love can save them...n still keeping them together...

the silent n cold treatment started...again...

what r they upto...toe...then...headache...sari...uff...stop all this...we know what u need..😆

i am loving the foreplay...maan is too much...but geet is also not far behind...😉

peppermint patty n mittens did the trick what others could not...☺️

Part 92 (1-2):

lovely...geet in a bath robe...maan in a towel...hugging...running...n dadi n naini staring at them...😆

bechari geet...with all the things scattered around...she surely must have wished to be invisible...😆

n now to face them when he is gone...she will be all...☺️☺️

they heard the name misti..😆..geed is surely going redder n redder...if that is even a word...😆

geet is surely getting bolder...☺️...loved it...all of it...☺️

dadi is really tensed abt naini n maan...especially naini...glad maan understood it n tried to make it better from his side...

the color scarlet was deep etched in her...not just in her cheeks, but in the core of her that shimmied with every time she found him close.😳👏

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jazzerette

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Posted: 14 years ago

#804

Loved the updates!!

Naini is pregnant ...awww!!

Beautifully written!! Absolutely amazing!!

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640638

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Beautiful writing. I wish I had started this FF when you started writing it. I have read it from the beginning in the last 4 days. Love the characters, depth and inter personal relations amongst each. I like how you paint the picture with the words, choice of pictures and vms. Truly appreciate that someone could so dedicatedly put a part of themself out for others to read and feel.

Looking forward to more of your writing. Please continue. Sometimes silent readers are like me, just shy so don't feel we are not out here waiting for you.

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jenny

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Beautiful part Hasini.
Rishabh was in cloud nine with the feelings of being a father.
Naina sounded really cute when she said she wants Rihabh to company her for her medical check-up.
Loved the way Rishabh's asked her to come back to their house forever.
Rishbah's uncertainty to get close with Naina and the way Naina starts to undress afta he spilt the water was really beautiful and passionate.
Thanks for the amazing part.
Eager to read next...

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Tyro

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part 93 (1-3):

naini was checking out rishabh...n wondering y he didnt compliment her...😆

geet had her insecurities ...but was glad she voiced it...n maan was able to make her understand...that she is his love...😳

dev...seems like both of the guys were about to burst out...loved the way geet handled it...

dev was scared that geet might slap him...😆 ...at least he realized that he is no longer imp in her life...

the men left...maan it seems wanted to talk with rishabh...n naini knew that it is not the right time to oppose him...

what did maan want to talk abt...even rishabh was confused...bechara dev...thinking what is going to happen...😛

i am so happy that rishabh punched him..😃...maan seems like was in control...or at least trying his best not to let his anger out...otherwise no1 could have stopped him...

maan surely knows how to tackle the situation...making rishabh act drunk...n seeing the look on nainis face,,,rishabh knew...

i was thinking right...when i read the 2nd part...the only conclusion i thought was that he was gay...n part 3 confirmed it...😃

loved the talk between naini n rishabh...he indeed is very possessive,,,,...

Part 94 (1-2):

naini took rishabh coz of geet...she understood that geet needed maan at the moment...

Like the fall of a pebble on thin sheet glass, she felt the crack disperse in blinding speed and just like that her will to budge disintegrated. 👏😳

naini dent want to wake him up...but it seems like she didnt want to let go...

both of them held onto each other,,,...😳

loved that she has no feelings...but still she is unsure of herself...as she thinks that she wasnt able to c the signs...

Part 95 (1-5):

naini n rishabh r in love with each other since a long time...

loved the flashbacks...the stalker...the possessive new bf...her first kiss...awesome...

he was trying to make small talk n she was not even looking at him...

by watching maan n geet...she is remembering her moments with rishabh n that is making her go mad...😆

lol...again checking rishabh only...😆...no other man can ever take his place...😳

omg...she wasnt even doing anything...but another man touching his wife...no way is rishabh going to tolerate that...

she wore a sari...😲.he surely was surprised...😆

finally she let her facade fall n told him what she wants...n that is never to leave him...😳

PS --- yeyyy...now only part 96 is left...which i think is still going on...will comment on it later...again sorry for the late comments...was busy with exam n project...😳

Edited by jyoti_l - 14 years ago