Abhiya FF: Entwined Bk-1 .Ended. - Page 5

Originally posted by: RB81

hei shalini,

that part was nice..friends throwing surprise party,,family members playing as if they dont remember her b'day..poor girl..got hit by speeding car..continue soon..

Originally posted by: pari_smart

OMG Abhay save Piya

Awesome start

Thanks for d PM

Originally posted by: mijanur

gr8 start of this ff.piya get hurt on her birthday.waiting for abhay's introduction.pleas update soon.thank for pm

Originally posted by: N_NS

<font color="#9900FF">Nice start sweetie...I'll give a detailed comment after the next or maybe two updates when I understand the story a bit more...
Love,
Nidhi.😊🤗
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Originally posted by: ilove99

awesome😛

Originally posted by: Gals_11

Hey Dear Amazing Update.. Loved d Bday Part.. Wat is gonna happen on Piya's 18th Bday.. Everything is gonna change forever n abt illuminating d dark soul.. Waiting for dis Mystery.. D Mysterious guy must b Abhay.. Eagerly waiting for d next part.. Continue soon.. Thanx for d pm..lol.

Originally posted by: ifrah.

very good update:)

Originally posted by: yanice15

yes...it was amazing...

Originally posted by: mino1997

omg!! pia met with an accident and i abhay saved her ... plz make the nxt update a little longer😳 ... u write very good ... loved ur start and continue soon😊❤️

Originally posted by: rach2012

lovely update. thanks a lot. eagerly waiting for the next one :)