Bhageeratha- maaneet(ss) part 16 pg 63 updated - Page 23

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow!!! I read part 8...it is just superb...
So many ppl after Geet's money...hmmm
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Posted: 14 years ago
SUPERB!!!!! VERY NICE FLOW...THE STORY IS GOING VERY SMOOTH...👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
read part 10...awsome...👏👏
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Woww...great...

So both brothers are cheat...in their own way...kahan phass gayee Maan aur Geet bechare...
Superb👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG awesome i jst read all the parts one after the other...they were AWESOME...!!!
the twists and turns are great and i'm luving geet's charecter she is so caring , lovely and independent😊❤️
and i'm also luving maan oooh he is sooo sweet !!!
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and the vm was also tooo good!!!👏👏
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and the music chosen for ur vm is also awesome!!!
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THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF MY SS FOR UR LOVE AND SUPPORT


Part 12

Avinash turned back...there he saw a 28 yr old tall guy...dressed in formals...

stranger: jyada intezaar nahi karvaya na

avinash: aap?

stranger: myself arjun...i am the person who called you this morning

Avinash: how do you know that iam searching geet

arjun: as i told u iam your well wisher...iam only helping you...

avinash: i don't think we met before...and how come u became well-wisher for me?

arjun: look Mr.avinash...u r a well-wisher of geet...working hard to protect her property...and her...being her fiance...it is my duty to help those who are protecting her...

avinash looked at arjun confused...

avinash: fiance?

arjun: yes Mr Avinash..u heard it right...i and geet are going to get married...

avinash got shocked...

avinash: why should i believe all these things...what if u r saying lies...

arjun gave an evil smile...he then took out his laptop and showed some of his photos and videos with geet along with her childhood photos and documents...avinash looked at those in disbelief...

arjun: now i hope that all ur doubts got clarified...

avinash: but why u r showing this much interest on her property...

arjun: kounsa insaan paise se dhur bhaag jaatha hey?

avinash: that means u r after her money...

arjun: i don't think there is any need to answer this question...if u r not willing to take my help...leave it...i will have my own ways to make this property mine...

avinash thought for a second...

avinash: teek hey...what should i do now?

arjun: i will be back with geet in few days...by then u keep all papers ready...

having said these words arjun left...

avinash immediately took out his phone and called...to one of his personal private detectives..

avinash: abhi woh gaya hey yaha se...woh kaha jaa raha hey..kis se mil raha hey...yeh saara details mujhe chahiye...even if he leaves the country...u should follow him...

having said these words he cut the call...

avinash: arjun...mein ne tumhare jaise log ko dekha hey mere zindagi mein...geet tumhare fiance...what a big joke...i know her very well...she hates love and emotions...she prefers to die rather than getting married...and now here u r telling that she is ur fiancee...iam sure u know geet very well...now i will find out geet by tracing you...yeh tho teek hey...ab iss rachna ka bhi kuch karna hoga...

having said these words avinash left the hotel and drove his car towards rachna's residence...

Arjun was finally happy that his plan worked out. His dream of becoming richest is going to be fulfiulled now. Although he was in a good position ...still he wants to become the richest person. He met geet 6 months back when sunny introduced her in his birthday party. geet's friend ambika was arjun's girl friend. Through her he came to know that geet is millionare's daughter. He gathered all her details. later he came personally to india for further details. He bribed one of the employees of yaswanth group of companies and came to know the inner turmoil regarding geet...he got the avinash number from the same employee and contacted him to execute his plan.

Arjun went to the hotel packed all his things and left to airport to catch early flight for sydney. He had no clue that the detectives appointed by avinash were following him...

Sydney, australia

After dinner maan and geet went to their respective rooms. Geet slept as she was tired with her lab work. But maan couldnot get sleep as he was worried about his future.

maan: yeh sunny ab tak aaya nahi...aur pata nahi mujhe kithne din yaha rukhna padega...geet ke nasdhikiya mujh mein azeeb sa ehsaas jaga raha hey...mujhe apne aapko unse dhur rakhna hoga...

maan lied on the bed...he closed his eyes...geet's smiling face flashed before him...he suddenly opened his eyes and got up...

maan: yeh kya ho raha hey mujhe...mein iss halath mein aisa kaise soch saktha hu...mujhe apne aapko rokhna hoga...

then maan decided to leave geet's flat next day morning at any cost. He packed all his things and waited for next day morning...when it was around 5.30 am...maan got ready and came out of the room with his bag...he sat on the couch and waited for geet.

after one hour...

maan: ab tak tho utna chahiye...lekin abhi tak bahar nahi aaya...kya karu...unke ke room mein jao..nahi..nahi..teek nahi hoga...thodi dher aur ruktha hu...

another hour passed...

maan : ab lagtha hey ki mujhe andher jaana hi padega...warna aur dher hojayega...

maan knocked the door...but there was no response...after some time he opened the door and entered the room...

maan: geet...geet...

there was no response from geet...

he came near the bed and again called her...

maan: geet..geet...

still no response...

maan not knowing what to do turned back to leave the room...then he heard geet moaning...he immediately ran towards bed...

maan: geet..geet..kya hua...

geet didn't respond...maan then patted her cheeks...she had high temperature

maan: lagtha hey tez bhukaar hey...patha nahi kya hua..kal raath tho teek thi...aur yeh achanak bhukaar kaise? geet...geet...ankhe kholo

geet moaned in pain...maan ran to the kitchen...brought a bowl of water..dipped a cloth in it and spread it on her forehead...he then started searching for medicines...but he couldnot get any...he started to get worried...he prayed to babaji to take care of her health...he went outside and knocked the door of adjacent flat...a 50 yr old woman came outside giving a suspicious look to maan...

oldwoman: what do you want?

maan: madam my friend is sick..i need to take her to hospital..plz help me...

to be continued...


next:

geet: maan u r going to stay with me...that's it😊

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