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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
OMG nupur adhiraj's widow
this is amazing story
a bit curious abt the next part
do pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

yay... maria... new ff...🥳
i totally luvd d concept...
aisa kya hoga MN ke beech! hmm interesting...
cant wait 4 d next part!
continue soon!
luv ya!🤗

@Pariii🤗 Thank u sooo much sis🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: ruchi89

OMG😲

nups is adhi's widow...mai to
adhiraj ko bhul hi gayi thi...nice concept...
cont soon..i want mayank's entry soon😃

@ruchi
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: drmaha

whn will 2nd part come...?

@MAHA
I ll update very soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

awesome starting

luking forward

Thanksss dear🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti

Nups adhi's widow??

N mayank is nupsi's friend

cont soon

lovely update

@sariska
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Mitali...

OMG nupur adhiraj's widow

this is amazing story
a bit curious abt the next part
do pm me

@Mitali
Thank u sooo much for liking it🤗
ll continue very soon😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
Thank u sooo much friends for liking 1st part...THank u sooo much for ur beautiful comments...🤗🤗🤗
Love
Maria
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Part 2

Flashback'

Both were standing in Mayank's room balcony'where they used to meet..but today everything was changed'she was not same Nupur,his Nupur..she was going to get married with someone else..

Their were lots of things,lots of wishes,dreams that they want to share with eachother'everything was seems broken,their dreams'but they couldnot share with eachother'They had fear in their hearts,fair of separation,fair of loosing each other'fear of not to meet each other again..

They were standing their,quite,silent'just wanted to feel that moment,those last moment which they were spending together'

Nupur I m going to USA'finally he broke the silence'she looked at him with blank eyes'her heart was sinking to think about separation'tears were rolling down from her cheeks'

Mayank'she said in low voice as tears were coming down from her cheeks'

He turned her face towards him'he knew how much he was hurt to see tears in her eyes..he wished to stop the time'he wished to enveloped her in his arms for forever'no one can separate them..but sigh..it was not possible..

He wiped her tears while some tears coming out from his eyes..and kissed her on her forehead..she closed her eyes to captured that moment forever in her heart..

Nupur I cant see you with someone else'please don't try to change my decision. I have take decision for our betterment'

I cant see tears in your eyes'He said while tears coming out of his eyes..

She could feel immense pain in those words'and she accepted his decision as she could not see him in pain

She hugged him tightly and cried out her heart infront of him..Mayank enveloped her in his arms'may be for the last time..both were standing there for many hours'to feel eachother touch last time..

It was their last meeting'.

Flashback Ends

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He should not come here'Nupur thought

Bhabhi what are you thinking..?Gunjan shaked her shoulder

Hun'nothing?Nupur replied while trying to control her tears'

Where is he??she said in low voice as it was difficult for her to control her emotions'

He is in guest room'Gunjan told her

I m coming'.Nupur replied

Gunjan nodded her head and walked out of the room'

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Mayank was waiting for her in guest room..he was going to see her after 3 years..

He was waiting for her in guest room when his eyes fell on her'she was coming downstairs..she was wearing white simple dress'her face was pale and dull'there were no emotions on her face'her black eyes were blank'it seems there were no dreams,no wish,no happiness in those eyes..

He felt pain to see her like that'

Flashback'

Mayank was watching match between India And Austrailia'

When their door bell rang'.

Mayu dekh na kaun hai'..a voice came from kitchen..

Maa..Ap ki pyaari Nupur ho gi'he said sarcastically..

Mayu..batain na bana aur jaldi se darvaza khol..she said in ordering tone

Gusa kyun hoti ho.,..abhi kholta hoon..he said and walked towards the door..

He was lost in her beauty..she was wearing green anarkali frokwith her hair open'she was like angel..

Beautiful'he murmered

Ab youn hi munh khol ke dekhte hi raho ge ya ander bhi ane do ge'she said while pushing him back'she entered in house

Mujh se milne aye ho'he said naughtily while leaning towards her face..

Nupur blushed'

Nahi'Aunty se milne aye hoon..woh kya hai na'main ne aunty ko apna new dress dekhane aye thi'she told him pushing him little back..

Aunty kahan hain'she said while looking here and there'

You are looking beautiful in green dress but my favourite colour is white..i want to see you in white dress'he whispered in her ears'while a red colour crept on Nupur's face..

As she was blusing'

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Flashback Ends..

But today he felt pain to see her in white dress

Nupur I don't want to see you in white colour..he thought and trying to controlled his tears..

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here is next part...plzzz do comments n press like tab if u liked it😳

Edited by maria-soniarti - 14 years ago
--jiya-- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
nice part maria
why did mayur separate?
feeling bad for both😭
continue soon
thnx for the pm
~jiya~
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
Mayur separated, but what was the reason??
and Now Feeling bad for them specially for Nupur..
Really Nice update Yar..
Thnx for the pm..

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