@MAAHI VE@#2 MG ff-12th JUN,chap- 42, pg 81 - Page 30

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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely part...

geet said it all n seems like maan didnt even realize...

continue soon,..

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful updates. vn will maan come to know that it is geet who is sending him the letters n troubling him??? pm plz
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Posted: 14 years ago
great part dear
but so liitle
hope next one ll be bigger dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
hw can maan miss her words???
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowww loved it
geet revealed that she only sent all those letters
hope maan realises it
n geet shouldnt let go of her love
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey everyoen...😊

there u go as promised, here's the update...
thanks to knirwal aka khushi for sending PMs everyone on my behalf, love u dear😳
thanks to one and all of you for liking and commenting on my updates. i am really sry for not being able to reply to them, i am very busy!!! i hope u r liking how the story is shaping out. plzzz give me ur feedbacks. it makes me write my updates in a better way and also to direct the story line accordingly!!!😊😊😊
Chapter 36

Prem was driving the car with heer next to him. Pari sat in the backseat silently looking at the 2 love birds getting cozy with each other. Prem put his left hand on heer's right hand, she smiled and leaned on his shoulder. Prem kissed her forehead and leaned on her head. Pari's eyes widened in horror and amazement, she coughed. Prem and heer suddenly realized of pari's presence and got separated from each other. Heer bit her lip and prem smiled crookedly at what pari might be thinking of them.

Pari: u know I still think I should drive the car'.

Heer: and why do u think so???

Pari: that's coz I am not drunk like prem and not acting like a love sick puppy like you!!!

Heer: pari!!!

Pari: what??? Prem is my would-be jiju, so what's the big deal???

Heer: tum nahin sudhrogi!!!!

Pari: sudarna kaun chahtha hai???

Heer: pari ab chup bhi karo'.

Pari: really??? If I become silent I will have to watch love story right here infront of my eyes.

Prem started laughing at her comment, heer hit him hard. Pari started laughing and this time even heer joined in.

Prem: pari, saali ho tho tumhari jaisi ho!!!

Pari: obviously!!! Free entertainment jo dethi hun tum dono ko'.

Prem: aisi baath nahin hai'.

Pari: achcha??? To phir kya isliye ki main aadhi gharwali hun???

This time pari got hit from heer.

Heer: kya bhakthi rahthi hai hamesha??? Kabhi thon a samaj ki baath math kiya karo pari'.

Pari: jeeju dekhlo tumhari biwi mujhe maar rahi hai, police kardungi tho, samjhe na??? tumhari biwi ko bolon mujhe na chuye'.

They all started laughing in unison.

Pari: achcha tho tum dono yeh bhi bataoge ki nahin ki tum dono ki lovestory kab start hui aur khatham???

Heer: pari, idiot!!! Abhi tho shuru hui hai aur tu abhi abshakun bhak rahi hai??? Zaroor maar khayegi ab!!!

Pari: bas kar heer, as if I don't know what u can do!!! U cant do anything to me'.

Pari put her tongue out to heer, she started laughing. After some time heer and prem shared their part of the love stories how heer was junior in the college and how she became friends with maan during the college fest. Then how she started talking to prem as well and how they started liking each other's company but never dared to reveal thinking the other might break the friendship!!! Then how things turned out when heer's father announced abt heer's marriage and heer lying to prem abt loving someone and everything until today.

Pari: wow, that's a nice story, why not make a movie out of it???

Prem: I wish I could only if u could produce it, I don't mind at all'.

Pari: what the hell!!! Jiju u r equally mean'..booo!!!

They all laughed and reached there homes finally content and happy at the turn of events.

On the other hand maan reached home still not realizing what has been done!!! He parks the car and gets inside'

Vikram: maan bte itni der kaise ho gayi??/

Maan: daadu aap abhi bhi jag rahe ho??/

Vikram: tumhare liye'.

Maan: kuch nahin dadu who geet'

Vikram: geet ko kya hua??? Who teek haina??/

Maan: daadu chinta math kijiye who teek hai bas thodi si peeli thi usne'

Vikram sighs in relief, maan doesn'y understand what's with him and geet anyway???

Maan: daadu aap geet ko itna pasand karthe ho kya???

Vikram: kyun? Tumhe who pasand nahi???

Maan: asisi baath nahin hai daadu, aap jaanthe hai ki who brij ki behen hai and aur who meri dost bhi hai. Maine tho bas aise hi puch liya'.

Vikram: who bachchi bahut achchi hai maan, kisiko kyun pasand nahin aayegi???

Maan: sach kahan daadu aapne par ab aapko jaakar sona chahiye!!!

Vikram: teek hai beta, main chaltha hun tumm bhi jaake so jaana'

Maan: jee daadu'

Vikram leaves for the room and maan walks towards the stairs thinkin "yeh daadu bhi na, patha nahin inke dimaag main kya chaltha rehtha hai hamesha!!!", he whistles on his way and reaches his room. Freshens up and changes!!! He sits on his study table with those letters in his hands, smiles at them and gets to bed. He closes his eyes only to see geet! He suddenly opens eyes and shoo's away the thoughts and sleeps.

It's 4am in the early morning in khurana mansion. The whole mansion is silent and maan is sleeping peacefully!!! All of a sudden maan gets up and sits and says "SHIT!!! What the hell have I done???"

Next morning at handa house:

It's 7.30am in the morning!!! Geet wriggles in her bed like a small kid and tries to gets up from her bed but only to find that her head is aching a lot! She sits up on her bed, her eyes still closed. She sighs coz her head is hurting real bad. She opens her eyes ans looks up only to find brij holding a glass of lemon juice in front of her. She takes it from him without a word and drinks it and keeps the glass on the bedside table! Brij just stares at her, waiting for her to start speaking'.

geet: bhaiyya main yahan kaise aagayi???

Brij: tujhe kuch bhi yaad nahin hai???

Geet: jahan tak mujhe yaad hai, maine bahut pee rakhi thi aur heer aur pari se baath kar rahi thi, bas'

Brij: itna peene ki ky a zaroorat thi??? Maan ke saath bet lagane ki kya zaroorat thi??? Maan ne mujhe sab batha diya. Shukr hai uska, warna patha nahin mujhe tumhe kahan dhoondna padtha'

Geet: sorry bhaiyya'.

Brij: geet maine tumse kabhi bhi kuch nahin kahan hai, par yeh sharaab peena tumhe shobha nahin detha'

Geet: sorry bhaiyya who main'

Brij: geet, koi baath nahin, main samjhtha hun par agli baar dhyan rahe, agar papa ko patha chalega tho problem ho jayega'samjhi na???

Geet: ji bhaiyya'

Brij: ab jaldi karo warna office keliye der ho jayegi tumhe'

He gets up to go but geet holds his hand and says'

Geet: thanks bhaiyya,'

He smiles, pats her head and leaves the room. Geet sighs in relief!!! She then starts wondering what actually happened after she became unconscious while talking to heer and pari. She tried real hard to remember but it seemed like forever for her to do it 'coz she couldn't remember anything. She dint even know when and how she reached home in all that chaos??? Then suddenly she started weeping remembering the events that happened yesterday.

She had never thought that maan and heer were together, she felt ashamed of trying to make her best friend's beau to fall for her. She felt cheap.she felt she needed to apologise to heer but then she dint want their friendship to end. She thought it was time to end the game with maan and just be happy with what she had. Anyways none knew what was going on, she could just send maan a letter saying that was all a joke but she knew better than everyone what would that mean. She knew it wouldn't be easy for her to back off like that and still working with him everyday. It's only going to be hard for her. So many twists and turns in just one night, she had never imagined it to be this way. She finally decided that she would resign from the job and also end the chupa-rustham game. But the qn was how could she do all this together??? It definitely wont be going to easy for her'.

Precap: god knows!!! Seriously I have no idea why maan got up early in the morning??? If u know and can help me out then PM me or just post a comment!!! i am very sleepy now🥱🥱🥱!!!!!

u all know what to do right??? comment and like plzzz😳😃😆😉😊

Edited by samaira39 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update. Maan lied to Brij that they had a bet, is liye Geet ne pee lee. Waise did he realize what Geet had said that he got up early in the morning?
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Posted: 14 years ago
Is she really gonna end the game...???😲
me is in a state of shock here...
plz update soon..!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh no geet is going to end the relationship😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
sorry for late comment di..
but ur updaate is to much good...
plz yaar maan ko relise kara do plz...
i hope u think same which i have in my mind😉
geet want to break all relations😭...and also want to leave the job...
but wait for what u have for us...
cont sooon
waiting eagerly
love u alot
xxx

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