Oh my lord Jaz...this is quite the update! And I thought my quadruple dose was heavy lol :P Alright let me get started:
- oldest of Handa daughters...I just like the way you write certain things. This is one of them.
- Brij...and Naintara? Teji...and Meera? Adi and SASHA?! Extremely strange but I like the way of switching things around instead of keeping them normal or making new characters.
- Savitri HANDA! Now you've caught my interest. :D
- I like how Mohinder and stuttering and is flabbergasted (?) in front Savitri.
- Awww the Bhabhi's! And the relationship of the family...it kind of reminds me of a certain someone and her Di's :)
- Arjun...woah. Now the couples are really mixed up! Notice I said mixed up not messed up :D
- OMG! PINKY's character! :D I LOVE IT!
- Zamana badal gaya...Geet's character is still the same and true! And of course, her family is too. They don't agree. Amazing how the situation has changed but the characters from the show have not. Well...it is kind of like the time where they forced her into marrying Dev, but here its Arjun.
- Woah the Maan bomb and he turns out to be an associate? Beautifully written and placed!
- And Maan's still the angry young man...typical...lol. Whatever, it just makes us love him even more :) I don't know what to make of it though. I'm going to take it positively as you've always taught me. Because he can't stand that someone hit her, even if it was her own brother.
- "Main dua karti hoon, ke tum dono jahaan bhi raho, jaise bhi raho…kush raho," Sasha said.😭
- LOL that was so random...out of nowhere they start talking in English. But still enjoyed the dialogues just as much :)
- Wow...I swear to God,,,that fighting scene in the street was SO REALISITIC. It's like it was unfolding right before my eyes, and I was Geet. Shouting at them to stop. Like the words were coming out of my mouth...I almost started crying. I also find it interesting how you chose Teji to hold the knife...I would have figured it would be Brij.
- Placing a kiss on the mangalsutra, Geet looked in the sky for the star that shone the brightest. The star was twinkling, as if it was talking to her. Geet looked at the clock on her night stand – it read 3am. It was no longer today, it was tomorrow – a new day had already begun. A small, weak smile broke on Geet's face. She gathered the mangalsutra in her hand and held it close to her heart.
"Happy 7th Wedding Anniversary Maan," Geet said as she stared of at the dark sky.
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Beautifully written...now THAT has to be my fav piece of writing yet...although it made me want to hurt you at the same time..thank god its an FF. But sigh...as the banner says on the FF forum, it is after all, the home of the creative. Everything you write is completely up to you. Now I'm just getting off track.
I see why you had to update so much! It makes alot of sense to put all these scenes together rather than post them seperately. Makes a MUCH more powerful impact. MUCH MORE. It already has such a powerful impact. It reminds me of those old songs where the girl's heart is always broken because her brothers have killed or taken her far away from her love. Forget about cheating and divorcing and all that. We've taken it old school...HAHA. I'm losing it...
It was refreshing...something that really ties into the actual show of Geet with its traditional values and also has the same type of family but wow...I still can not picture Mohinder to be that cruel! The only way I could get through that scene was to picture him as Darji. Okay, before I rant on and on and on, I'm going to leave. I hope I left a nice long comment for your nice long post. Enjoy it Jaz, I doubt its going to happen again :P My gosh...I'm tired.
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