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KOSH
Part 11

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Maan could not control the anger he was holding inside him. Yes it's wrong but those words was low! He could not believe what those man have spoken out. Anger burned him alive.
Geet sat there. Examining maans hand. It's bleeding badly.
Geet "you shouldn't have done that!"
Maan "then what I should have? Let those men insult you!"
Geet "it does not matter maan! The thing you have done is wrong!"
Maan "I don't think so! If next time I find them! Swear to you! I will kill them!"
Geet was shocked at this act. "maan! You won't do anything like this!"
Maan "oh yes I will! & next time I won't care!"
Geet left shocked. What's wrong with him she thought. His rude behavior! Its not something normal.

Geet went downstair. Maans parents were supper angry. Without knowing the reason they started to tell maan off. Geet did not like that at all. No matter what but this is not the way to behave.
Avantika "this is nonsense maan! Do you realize, how this could affect out family!"
Maan "I hard enough! & you know very well I won't take a single word against geet". Everyone left shocked specially talli. She did not like the idea maan caring for any other except her! She flowed maan to find her answer.

Maan drove off in his bike. Yes it's true that the anger of shorias death still there somewhere but te feeling e have for geet could not be ignored. & it seemed like the affection seems to get strong & stronger day by day.

Geet waited all night for maan. He failed to show his face. geet wasn't exactly sure why, but she did not like the idea of maan being way for so long! Specially with out telling anyone.

3am... Maan walks in...

Geet "where were you?"
Maan "outside!"
Geet "have you seen the time!" maan nodes. "do you know how worried we were!"
Maan "you shouldn't have!"
Geet "how could you say that maan! Shouldn't worry about you! If we don't who els will. You know how much everyone looks up to you. We have so much expectation from you. How could you ignore this simple thought!" geet almost cried. His words & ignorance heart geet the most. Specially how everyone was looking up to him.
Maan "geet... Please tu roh math!" it somewhere perched his heart. He couldn't believe how rude he have been for past 10 years to her. How his every second always surrogate by geets thought. Something he always failed to realize & when he did, he is worried how will she react.
He slowly wipes all the tears way. Geet did hesitate with his touch at the beginning but then, alright.
Geet "have you eaten anything?" maan nodes a no again. "cone take a sit, I will bring something."
Maan "have you eaten anything?"
Geet nodes for a no. "serve for 2."
Geet smiles & walks off in to the kitchen.
His words did heft her allot yet his one sweet word always melts her heart.
Both sat down ate dinner quietly.

Next morning. Talli walked straight in to maans room. He was sleeping like a dead body. Last night both maan & geet went to bed very late. Geet have tried her best to make maan understand how wrong is the situation. He should learn how to control his anger, but it seems like something he can not!
Talli "maan! Hurry! Get up!" he tries to ignore the voice but talli seems to ignore the thought how tired he is!
Maan "get lost!"
Talli "maan! Ut na!"
Maan "get lost! I went to bed at 5 am! & remember not to wake geet up ad well. she went to bed at the same time as me. Don't wake her up!" maan spike in half sleepy voice. Talli felt the needle in her heart again. Both going to the bed at the same time! Something she did not like.
Talli "why?"
Maan "get lost!"
Talli half sad walked out. Liked t geets room who was sleeping also. She did not disturb.


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YAAA HU... OYE OYE BALLE BALLE MUBRKA JE MUBARKA ...

IST TIME I M FIRST... MEEE ON NINTH CLOUD
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KOSH
Part 12

sorry for mistakes...



It wad 12 noon when geet jumps up. Found avantika.
Avantika checked her forehead. "are you alright beta! You sleeping for ages! Just thought of checking!" geet jumps up.
Geet "what time is it?"
Avantika "12 noon!" geet holds her forehead! Just couldn't believe she have slept this long. I did not realize!"
Avantika smiles "just get freshen up. Lunch is ready." geet nodes. Everyone left.
Maan looked at her as she walked out of the shower. Her wet hair. It seems to seduce him allot lately. She indeed wad one of the most beautiful lady, but something about her always attracted him since young! Was it the fact she was his wife or the fact since he learned the meaning of the word love, it's always been geet. But no one attracted him the way she does. Her every gesture seems to drive him to insane. He smiles as the last thing she does, put the pallu over her head to cover her hair.
She jumped as geets eyes cough maan.
Geet "tu! What are you doing?"
Maan "au me! You still haven't eat na!"
Geet smiles.. "let's go!"

Everything seems to go smoothly for maan while a storm of talli building up at the back.

JK have been taunting talli about her living of family for free. Something it started to effect her greatly. & that's why everyone thinking about maan & Tallis marriage soon.

Avantika "I am really worried about talli & jk!!"
Geet "ku? Hat happen?"
Avantika "she always taunting talli!"

Geet feel in deep thought about everything. She was not sure what exactly to do now!
Geet "I will talk to maan! Let's see if he agrees to merry now!"
Avantika "per!"
Geet "let me talk na!"
Avantika smiled.

Maan walks by as geet started get ready to ho somewhere.
Maan "where are you going?"
Geet "just here & there!"
Maan "where!"
Geet "why you asking this many question!"
Maan "I was planning to take you somewhere!"
Geet "acca! & where exactly!"
Maan "umm somewhere!"
Geet "get ready! & let's go!"
Maan "where?"
Geet "me, talli & you going somewhere!"
Maan "where!"
Geet "stop asking me where! Where! Uff! Can't you just do what I say!"

Maan pula a face & walks way. He did not want geet to be a dominant wife. He wants to take the control! Actually what wife! She shouts at me! Tells me off! Only thing left was the punishment. I felt like I am in a school again. Uff!


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KOSH
Part 13

sorry for mistakes


Maan pula a face & walks way. He did not want geet to be a dominant wife. He wants to take the control! Actually what wife! She shouts at me! Tells me off! Only thing left was the punishment. I felt like I am in a school again. Uff!

Talli "tujce ka hua!"
Maan "tujce mathlab!"
Talli "just wondering!"
Maan "get lost!" he shouts.

As he was about to walk way a brilliant plan came in to his head! Maybe tell talli to do something then she will leave him & geet alone. That sounds like a good plan. He smirked.
Maan "talli! Why don't you go & visit your old house today!"
Talli "na baba! Na! Geet have told me to be ready! So I have to!"
Maan "geet have told me not to bother. She is not going anywhere!"
Meantime geet walks in...
Geet "who is not going where?"
Maan "nothing!" he jumped with her sudden appearance! Oppsy there goes his little plan.

At last geet managed to come out with talli & maan! Maan who was hating Tallis present! & geet kept asking question to link them up. Somewhere in back of her brain the thought of maan & talli marriage was still present.

Whole journey was a digester. Maan was not sure where he was going!
Geet "drop me off to my friends house & then take talli to town!" maan looks at geet in shock.
Maan "I don't know you have friends who lives here this far!"
Geet "you dot know anything about me! So shh! & take talli!"
Maan "no!"
Geet "are! Ae kasi bath hui!"
Maan "you have not mentioned anything about you going to your friend house!"
Geet "ha! Now I am saying!"

As the car stopped in front of geets friends house, maans true color came out!
Maan "off! Both of you off!"
Talli made a face..
Geet "no! Take talli!"
Maan "both of you off! " he dropped off both & drove off.

Maan seems to be in more anger then usal. He was planning to take geet out him self but it seems like she have some other plan. He went in deep thought why she always tries to link him & talli! He ignored the thought, & worried about how can he show his affection!

When he went to pick them up again talli left early. Geet stood by the road with arm cross. Looking at his car angrily.
Maan "talli kha hi!" geet snaps sits next him but no word.
Maan "ab mane ka kia?" geet ignored. "kuch toh bolo!"
Geet "ka bolu? Her waqt tu apni man mani karti hi! Now look she is upset!"
Maan "tu me la karu! I know she needs a bf to make her happy... Like someone flows her like a puppet!"
Geet "you are the perfect one!"


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KOSH/Aagosh
Part 14


Maan "me! Are you gone crazy!"
Geet looked at him with great concentration. He surly did not have any affection for her! She needs to do something to bring them close.

At home geet sat down with avantika thinking how this could be carried on. Ani joined.
Ani "what are you talking about bhavi?"
Geet "about maans mArriage!" ani looked at geet in confusion! Fist time she is hearing a wife thinking about her husbands wedding!
Ani "why? But he..."
Geet "yes! " she distracts. "one day he have to merry. & I am thinking talli is the perfect match!"
Ani "does bro like her!"
Geet "why not! They are best friend. I am thinking of how to bring them close!"

Ani slowly left as geet & avantika started to talk. Not sure how this will be done! But it seems like bro is fine with it! Other wise why would she go through this..
Ani knocks on maans door.
Maan "ani! Come in!"
Ani "I never knew you like talli!"
Maan "ha... She is very good! Anyway what do you mean!" maan was busy with some gifts that he have brought for geet for past 10 years...
Ani "have you brought ten for talli!"
Maan "why I will bring it for her?"
Ani "but you like her na!"
Maan "yes! But this is not for her! This are for my wife."
Ani looked at him in shock. She was not sure how to react now. Talli walks in...
Talli "owo! How beautiful are this gifts. Did you buy it for me!" she was about to touch one when maan in one jerks holds her hand.
Maan "don't touch them!"
Talli "but they are for girls! & I only!"
Maan "don't you dare touch them! They are not for you!" talli felt heart & walked out. Ani stood at the background... She slowly whispered out... "are they for geet?" maan smiles & nodes...
Maan "who els is my wife then!"
Ani "do you love bhabhi?"
Maan "what a stupid question!" Ani quickly walks out to find geet. Who still talking to avantika!

Soon after maan saluted everything out he paid visit to the police station to find exact truth about his brother death & why he closed the file. The thought geet knew the whole truth about dushant being the killer! Why she decided to hide! There must be some strong reason!

Dushant watches him as he disspeeared.

Ani "bhavi I need to talk to you!"
Geet "ha Bol na!"
Ani "nahi bhavi! Private!"
Avantika looked at them confusingly... Geet flows ani.

Geet "why is it?"
Ani "maan bro does not love talli!"
Geet "I know! Thats why I am thinking about how to bring them close!"
Ani "no bhavi! That won't work. Bro likes someone els!" she spoke in a worried tone. Geets eyes widens.. "who? & how! Talli have been waiting for him past 10 years!"
Ani "and e have been waiting for someone for past 10 years!"
Geet "he still waiting! That's good then! He loves her! Not that girl!" she took a shigh relive.
Ani "you must have forgotten you are married! But maan haven't!" geet looked at him in shock again. "he is in lie with his wife." geet went mum! "he have been waiting for you for past 10 years. Every second. Every moment."
Geet "no! No... That's wrong!" geet spines round worriedly..
Ani "why is it wrong? He is in love with his wife!"
Geet left in shock. The word wife did gave her shock.
Ani "don't try to fix his marriage with someone els without knowing his real intention! You know how week his anger is! I am afraid something wrong na happens!"

Maan on the other hand found a big bluff in the case! He was not happy! He left for home instantly.

Geet walked down slowly. Worried. Avantika who could clearly read while other couldn't.

Arjun "beta, anis sadural is coming today. Make sure you and maan is ready on time." maan walks in. Geet looked at both!
Maan "yes dad!"
Arjun "remember I do not want any anger today!" geet smiles & nodes. Walks off. Avantika took ani to ask what she exactly told geet. Why she is so worried now.


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a lovely one
finally gete knwe that mann loves her...

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