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ansah

@SahSah

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#361

That was just awesome...really beautiful...so loved it

great job done Keya 👏👏👏

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#362

Why cant Geet stop asking for that Dushyant

Im hating her so much depended on him

Update was cool

Liked it

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Supriya

@priyanka86

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Posted: 14 years ago

#363

nice update..

loved possessive maan..

already a love traingle between geet maan n talli and now mina

planning for a love square hmm?

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#364

I'm glad Maan gave back to Dushant 👍🏼

Maan lost in Geet 😍

Loved it ...

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aali

@18mypride

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#365

arre yaar keym... aaj ke din toh bahar hi baharrr hai... updating updating updating...

still i was enjoying reading remorse & siski again and again... aur ab yeh ...wooow

me waiting...😍

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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

@FireSafireFiree

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+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#366

KOSH/Aaghosh
part 7

Maan forgot to blink. He looked at her with great concentration. Just couldn't get enough. He was blessed.. He felt like he was blessed. As she spoke elegantly... Her lips... Uff.. Something.. He could not believe this was the same geet. He could not believe how can he not notice this before... She... She was his wife & no matter what there will be no obstacle in there way. He wanted to confront he wanted ask about shorias death... He wanted ask why she have done this. He knows well how much geet loves shoria. What he means to her... Then why?
Vikram "beta!" maan was brought back to the reality with his voice. Came out of the dream world...
Maan "yes.."
Geet "tea!" maan nodes & takes it from geet. He was sill in deep thought.. Thinking everything through.. Over & over again...

As the evening came to an end... One of khurana servent brought maans bike. He was planned to visit some other place while everyone back home. Mina & one of her friend hena also wanted to come along them... To see the khurana house for his brother & stay there for few days... & not enough set in the car.

Geet "to talli ko lke ja!... We will go by car!"
Maan "wy? Do you problem coming with me?" talli felt guilty.. Geet could't say much as all anis sasural was there. Geet looked at talli who felt very uncomfortable.
Geet " nahi! I will come wiith you. Talli make sure everything is right back home."
Talli "ok geet" ...

Geet was petrified of going on the bike with maan. Last time she went on was 10 years back with shoria. She felt uncomfortable... She did not want to give his space to anyone but here there was no option. She went.
Maan "hold me tight! Other wise you will fall over!" geet looked round. Really uncomfortable.. As she slides hand round his waist he could feel this is not the small maan any more. He have grown up. He is a grown up man... She just didnt want to make him uncomfortable or make the situation any wars.
Maan " tujce ho ka gya? Hold me tight. With both hand.. The car left... Leaving the both.. Maan & geet flowed. Taking a very different root.
Maan "why are you so quit... You never leave a chance to scole at me!"
Geet " tu bath band khar aur bike carefully chala!"
Maan " I am not going to listen to you!"
Geet " then stop talking! Whats wrong with you? Why didn't you let talli come with you?... Becari kitni exited thi!"
Maan "if she was exited! What could I do?"
Geet "what type of question is this maan? & wats exactly your problem... I have seen in the car & now! What you trying to prove... There are place & time to show your anger!... You cant just shower yur anger anywhere!"
Maan "have I brought you here to listen to your lecture!"
Geet " yes!... If you have brought me! You have to listen to me!..."

Maan stops the bike near bal puri!...
Geet "why have you stopped here?"
Maan "those food wasn't a heaven dish anyway! I am hungry! & don't act I have seen you not eating properly as well. I want moms cook!"
Geet "then go home na! Why are you wasting time here?"
Maan " tujce khana hi to kha... Don't disturb me!"

Geet just gives him a disgusting look. Kitni beshram hi!... Maybe I have done a mistake to send him to the boarding!
Maan "uff.. This are amazing!"

Geet smiled at his childish behavior... Remembering how she & shoria used to do this!... She have so forgotten her likes & dislikes.. Maybe everything... Uff!... She ignored & wapied her tears off which was fighting to come out. That did not go unnoticed by maan!

Maan "mu khol!..."
Geet "ka?"
Maan "OPEN your moth!"
Geet "ku?"
Maan "there something !" he points at her lips.. Geet quickly opens her mouth to chek & maan shoves a bel puri in! Geet screams... Which did not work at all.
Maan " ab kha!"
Geet "ae kasi batamiz hi!" she gives maan a angry glare...

hope you like it
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do lv comments
loved reading them...
xxx
will PM 2 night after i update enigma... :D
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aali

@18mypride

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#367

wowww...me first!

i loved this possessive MSK...

muh khol... kya...ku... ab kha😳

Edited by 18mypride - 14 years ago

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ninavi

@ninavi

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#368

loved it

uff yeh geet bhi naaa

kab Maan ko bachchaa samzna band karegi 😕

cont sooon 😊

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Avani

@avani_9

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#369

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hey sorry m too late i kno bt congo on ur new ff...i wasnt able 2 cum ol so didnt read it...just read it now in 1 go n i love this ff...it's going gr8...though i dunt lyk gulaal dat much coz itz too much family drama serial n all senti types bt i loved it coz maaneet r der n i kno dat maaneet r going 2 b 2gether...thnx 4 d pm n sorry again

Edited by avani_9 - 14 years ago