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Posted: 14 years ago
loveeed it, amazing update.plsss update soon.
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THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF MY SS FOR UR LOVE AND SUPPORT

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Part 32

geet:(monologue): jo sawal maan ne poocha..uska jawab nahi hey mere paas...maan ka bhi yahi haal hoga na...aise sawal ko koi bhi kya jawaab dhenge...maan sahi kehraha tha...woh bilkul bakwaas sawaal tha...aur mein bina soche patha nahi..kya kya bath kiya unse...unka dil dukaya ...ab mein kya karu...kaise manao...jo bhi ho...woh mere maan hey...mere liye unse dur rehna...sirf moth hi hoga...

having said these words she got up from bed and ran downstairs to see maan...

Thinking about geet...maan closed his eyes and fell asleep. When geet came downstairs she saw maan sleeping on the couch. She walked slowly towards the couch looking at maan. Her eyes were full of tears blocking the vision. she wiped her tears to get a clear image of her husband. she reached the couch. She wished to kiss him all over his face and say sorry thousand times for that silly fight.But maan was in sound sleep. Sleeping like a baby with a calm face.She moved her hand to touch him...but took back when she remembered her words...she was ashamed of herself for pushing away maan when he tried to pacify her anger.She sat down near the couch looking at maan with tears in her eyes...she leaned on to the couch..she fell asleep looking at maan...

Early in the morning when maan woke up he saw geet sleeping. her face was pale and there were tear marks all over the cheeks...her eyes were swollen...maan's heart wrenched looking at geet's condition. He cursed himself for sleeping like an idiot when his geet was in need of him. Gently he took geet in his arms and walked towards the room. He kept her on the bed and lied beside her hugging tightly...he didn't want to stay away from his geet for a moment also...then he heard geet talking in sleep...

geet: maan...mujhe maaf kardijiye...mein ne aapko kamaka pareshan kardiya...mujhse dhur math jayiye...mujhse dur math jayiye...

When maan listened to those words he felt the geet's turmoil in her heart before she slept...he couldn't control his tears...he hugged her more tightly...geet was still asleep

maan: geet...mein yahi pe hu...tumhare paas...mein kahi nahi jaaongi..kahi bhi nahi...aaj ke baad iss tarh ke sawal hamare zindagi bhi mein nahi aayenge...yeh mere waada hey geet...

maan held geet in his embrace the whole night...geet slept in his arms peacefully...

next day...

Geet woke up and looked around...she tried to recall the last night incident...

geet: mein maan se milne gayi thi neeche...aur mein yaha kaise aagayi...maan...maan...kaha hey...

having said these words she got down from bed and started looking for maan...then she got a message in her phone...

" good morning Mrs.maan singh khurana"

The only word left her mouth was "maan"...she then looked around for maan...again there was another message...

" muskurao geet...woh muskaan hi mera zindagi hey"

she smiled and again looked around saying "maan..aap kaha ho"...again another message came...

"dil pe haath rakh ke dekho geet...mein wahi pe hu"

geet was geeting desperate to be in maan's arms, to say sorry...

geet: maan mujhe patha hey..aap yahi per hey...plz bahar aayiye...

beep...another message

"tumhare sawal ke jawab dena ab bhi baaki hey geet..."

geet couldnot take anymore...

geet: koi zaroorath nahi aise bakwaas sawal ko jawab dene keliye...aap pehle mere paas ajaayiye...

maan slowly came from behind and hugged geet...she felt as if she was in heaven...when she was about to turn back...maan whispered in her ear...

maan: geet...aise hi raho...aankhe bandh karlo...

geet did what maan said...maan kissed her cheek...slid his hand around her waist sending chills all over her

maan: geet...sirf maan keliye bana hey...aur maan geet keliye...

geet got her answer...all her insecurities vanished with that one word of maan...she couldnot control anymore...she turned back and kissed him on his lips...madly...maan although intially got surprised later kissed her passionately...After few min...

geet: iam sorry maan...(making a baby face)...iam really...

she couldnot continue...as maan closed her lips with his...giving her another passionate kiss...maan then took her in his arms and looked at her seductively...

maan: geet...kal shyaam ka aur raath ka...quota rehgaya hey...

geet couldnot understand what maan was saying...

geet: quota?

maan: haan...quota...(pulling her towards him)...geet understood his intention and blushed...that blush was enough to make maan more wild...he carried her onto the bed...placed her gently on it and jumped over her...for another love making session...that morning became wild,passionate morning for both of them...

After several hours...both got tired and slept...when they woke up it was 11.00am

geet: maan...11 bajgaya hey...

maan cuddled close to her...kept his head on her cheek...

maan: tho...

geet: maaan...bhook lagraha hey...

maan: mujhe bhi lagraha hey...

geet: tho chaliye na...fresh hoke kuch khayenge...pehle mein neeche jaakar kuch banathi hu...

maan: nahi..nahi...koi zaroorath nahi..hum aaj bahar jaayenge...aur wahi pe kuch khayenge

geet: teek hey...

said these words she tried to get up...maan was keeping her hand on her waist stopping her from getting up from bed...

geet: lekin pehle mujhe utne tho dijiye

maan: nahi..

geet sighed

geet: maan

maan: teek hey...lekin ek sharath hey...

geet: isme bhi sharath...kya hey...

maan: mere saath shyaam ko volley ball khelna hoga...

geet: maan...yeh kaisa sharath hey...aur yeh achanak aap ko volleyball khelne ki idea kaha se aaya...

maan: mujhe yeh sab nahi sunna...tumhe utna hey tho yeh sharath manna hi padega...

geet: agar nahi maana tho...

maan smiled...giving seductive looks

maan: kuch nahi hoga...bas mein ek aur quota pura karoonga...

geet got shocked...

geet: kya...phir se...nahi...mujhse nahi hoga...

maan: tho sharath maanlo

geet was left with no choice...

geet: achcha teek hey...

maan smiled and let her go...geet ran to washroom covering herself with blanket

maan: (monologue) geet ..tumhe zara bhi andaz nahi hoga aaj shyam ko kya honey wala hey...

maan smiled thinking about his naughty plan...by then geet cameout from washroom...and stood before maan...

geet: maan...aap jayiye ab...

maan: jaatha hu..ithne bhi jaldi kya hey..pehle tum dress tho change karo

geet: isliye mein aapko jaane keliye keh rahi hu...

maan: aise kaise hosaktha hey geet..mein tumhe apni haathon se ...

geet interrupted...

geet: bas...bas..uska koi zaroorath nahi...mein khud karlungi...aap pehle tayyar hoke aajayie...

maan: geet...yeh bahuth galath hey..apni hi pati ko aise bhaga raha hey...

geet: haan..haan mein jaanthi hu...aap jayiye jaldhi...

having said these words she pushed maan into washroom...

After few minutes both maan and geet got ready and went outside for lunch...they reached a famous restaurant...geet was making faces by looking at the menu card...

geet: yeh kya hey maan...isme aisa kuch bhi nahi hey jo hum khaa sakthe hey

maan: tho chalo doosre restaurant jaathe hey...

both maan and geet stood to leave...just then one young lady came before them...

maan looked at her in surprise...and said "nainatara"

nainatara: thank god...hum yaad tho hey...

maan: kaise baath kar rahi ho...aur tum yaha kaise...

nainatara: tum nahi...hum...dev bhi aaya hey mere saath...

geet looked at them confused...maan smiled looking at geet...

geet: yeh meri cousin hey "nainatara"..nainatara...yeh...

nainatara : geet...mein ne photo dekhliya...bahuth sundar hey tumhare biwi...

she then hugged geet...

geet: aap se milkar bahuth kushi hui didi...

nainatara: me too geet...

maan: kaha hey tumhara patidev?

just then dev came near maan and hugged him...

dev: koi mujheyaad kar rahe hey kya?

maan: yaad ke baath chod...yeh kaunsa naya shok hey...din mein bhi sharab peena...

nainatara turned her face away from dev...hiding her tears when maan said those words ...dev noticed this and tried to change the topic..he then looked at geet

dev: so u r geet right?

geet nodded and smiled...

dev : maan..u both are really made for each other...

nainatara wiped her tears and tried to be normal...

nainatara: chup hojayiye dev...kahi inko nazar na lage...

she then kept kala tikka on both maan and geet...

maan: lekin aap dono yaha kaise?

dev: mein yaha pe hotel business shuru kiya...isliye thodi din yaha rukhna padraha hey...

maan: teek hey dev..hum baadh mein milenge..hume kuch zaroori kaam hey (he was thinking of only volleyball)

nainatara: ok..ok..mein samaj saktha hu ..woh zaroori kaam kya hosaktha hey...hum aapko disturb nahi karenge...lekin ek baath kal raath ko aap dono humara ghar dinner keliye aana hey...

both maan and geet agreed and left the restaurant


to be continued...


next- love is not a bed of roses💔



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Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
n am first again!!! 2 comment on ur ff!! 😆
very very nice update.. dev seems 2 d a lil😕.. i wonder what maan's plan is.. looking forward 2 d nxt update..
Edited by luv_GurTi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
😳😳😳
Nice update!!! Maneet have become a real understanding couple.
Ab yeh new entries todasa pareshan kar rahe haiin donoka kya kaam yaha...
Volly ball😉 naughty naughty Maan ka naya plan kya hoga😍😍😍
Edited by maanhar - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it loadz
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
Muahhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update but the precap is scary

continue soon

love
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
geet got her answers...
man maan is becoming naughty these days...
well wats this volley ball game secret...very eager to know it...will wait for the nxt update to read it
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome
But I dont understand pcap its confusing n it looks something bad wil gona happen
Thanks for pm

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