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Posted: 14 years ago
very romantic update...
loved it to the core☺️
waiting for the sr☺️
do cont fast...
luv u lots bro🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
ooh it was a Dream.
glad tat it did made some realization on geet.
Loved d way she declare her love.
Eager on maan's plan...
thx for d pM
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Posted: 14 years ago
now maan gonna surprise her !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome
superb
plzz add me in pm list
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

variety in sr wow hw romantic geet is

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesummm!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
finallyyy they r one nw...
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update
finally Geet admit she in love
loved her demands for their SR
I am sure Maan is able to fulfill her dream
but what you prepared to give us dear?
waiting
thanks for pm

Edited by abina03 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF MY SS FOR UR LOVE AND SUPPORT

THANKS FOR COMMENTING


Part 25

maan: chalo maan beta ...tayyari mein lag jao...geet hey tho aisi...sabse hatke...har kaam nein variety chahthi hey...aakir SR mein bhi...hmmm

Maan came back to his laptop and went on searching different honey moon spots with beaches...Finally he sorted out few places...

maan: geet...ab mein bhi dekhlunga ki tum iss baar mujhse kaise bachthe ho...everything is ready geet...full moon in 2 days...be prepared...

Maan smirked...went to his room...found geet sleeping happily...slowly without making any noise he got into bed...and slept after kissing geet..."good night"

That whole night maan had naughty dreams about his geet and their SR...When maan finally woke up it was 10 am...maan jumped from his bed...he looked aside...no geet...

maan: oh no...iam late...waise geet kaha gayi...

maan came down searching geet...finally he found geet in mandir...geet was busy in praying to god...she was doing all kinds of special poojas...

maan entered mandir sat beside her...sniffing the scent of her hair...geet gave him an angry glare and pointed towards the idol of god...

maan: hmmm...chalo teek hey...mein dur hi rehtha hu...waise ek baath batao geet...tum aaj ithni dher tak mandir mein kya ker rahi ho...

geet showed him with hand signals that she is doing puja...maan looked at geet confused ...

maan: geet...yeh tum kya kar rahi ho...bol nahi sakthi ...

geet again showed hand signals ...this time by nodding head..."no"

maan: kyu ...kya hua?

geet took out a paper and wrote..."moun vrat"

maan: moun vrat...kisliye...ab yeh kya hey?

geet again gave him an angry glare and took paper from him forcibly...she kept praying not paying attention to maan's words...but maan was on his mission irritate geet...to make her speak...

maan: ab vrat rakliya tho teek hey..kam se kam bathao tho sahi..aaqir yeh vrath kis liye...

Maan went on irritating geet with many questions and interrupoting her prayers...when geet lost her patience...she finally pushed him out of the mandir and locked from inside...

maan: geet...apne hi pati ko tumne bahar bhagadiya...isse paap aur kuch ho saktha hey...

geet smiled listening to maan's words and continued her prayers...

maan(monologue): geet...aaj mein bhi dekhlunga ki tum iss vrat kaise rakogi...tumhe yeh pata hey ki...tumhare awwaz sunne ki bina mera din nahi chaltha...phir bhi tu ne vrath rakhliye...aaj tho mujhse baath karna hi padega

maan came nera the door and shouted...

maan: geet mujhe coffee chahiye...

but geet didn't opened the door...she already made arrangements for coffee and informed nakool by writing on paper...that she is on vrat...and it is his duty to take care of maan...

After hearing maan's shouting...nakool came running with a coffee cup...

maan: oh..tho geet khurana ne aaj saare tayyariya pakke se kiya...taki unhe koi disturb naa kare...

maan took coffee cup from nakool...dragged him to kitchen...

maan: nakool...sun...agar tum dubara aaj mere samne aaya kisi bhi cheez lekar...tho mujhse bura koi nahi hoga...jao..aaj mein tumhe chutti de raha hu...kal aana...

nakool: par saab...

maan: nakool...(in low voice)...ek aur shabd nahi...jao...geet ko kuch math bathana...samjhe...

nakool nodded in fear and left the mansion running...

geet got confused for sometime as she didn't heard maan's voice...she wanted to check whether he had his coffee or not...but when she remembered her pooja...she again continued her prayers...

maan: yeh mera ghar hey kya...pichle 10 min se chilla raha hu...ki mujhe coffee chahiye...no one is listening (showing fake anger)...

for a moment he looked at mandir's door...it was still closed...

maan: achcha teek hey...maan singh khurana ko coffee banana aatha hey...woh apna coffee khudh hi banalega...

said these words he went to kitchen singing..."hum honge kamyab"...geet started to worry...

geet(monologue): mein ne nakool se kaha tha...sab kuch dekhne keliye..woh kaha gaya...

maan pretended as if his hand got burnt while making coffee...

maan: ouch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(screaming loudly)

Heard his scream geet came running to kitchen...she held maan's hand...

geet: kya hua maan...jal gaya kya...mein ne kaha nakool se...aapko coffee bana keliye...ab dekhiye..meri wajah se aap ki haath jal gaya..mujhe maaf kijiye(with tears in eyes)

maan lost in her eyes...he kept looking at her innocent face...

geet: aayiye...aap hall mein baitiye...mein burnol leke aathi hu...

maan was still lost...geet thought that maan was feeling severe pain...

geet: maan dard ho raha hey kya...(with tears in eyes)

she kept kissing maan's hand gently...maan was enjoying every moment...finally geet' mobile rang interrupting them...maan forgot about pretending...he took geet's phone and gave it to her...

geet: rehene dijiye...pehle ointment le aathi...

she stopped looking at his hand...maan got scared to look into geet eyes...

geet: tho aapka haath sach much nahi jala..aap natak kar rahe the mujhse...

maan ran to his room...geet followed him...maan laid on his bed ...geet started hitting him with pillow...

maan: arey geet chodo na...mein mazak kar raha tha...aah

geet: mazaak..ha..ha..ab mein bhi maza le raha hu...

maan: geet...geet...

but geet was hiting and punching him continuously...finally maan pulled her with force...making geet to land on him...

geet's anger vanished...maan's arms started to embrace her...drawing her closer and closer to him...until their lips met...after several min...geet finally got up...and started crying like a child...

maan got confused...

maan: kya hua...tum ro kyu rahe ho...

geet cried still more louder...maan could not take anymore...he closed her mouth with his hand...

maan: chup...geet...chup...

geet silently sobbed looking at maan...

maan: bolo ab...tum kyu ro rahi ho?.

geet mumbled some words as her mouth was closed...

maan: oh sorry...

he then removed his hand...

maan: ab batao...

geet: aaj meri results aane wale hey...

maan: achchi baath hey..iss mein rone wali baath kya hey?

geet again started crying...

maan: geet agar iss baar tum rohna shuru kardiya...mein zabardasthi tumhe kiss karunga...samjhi

geet suddenly kept quiet...after hearing such shocking words from maan...

maan: ab tho batao...

geet: mein har saal apni results ke din aise hi vrat rakh thi hui...taki achche % milsake...lekin iss baar aap ne saara barbaad kardiya...ab mujhe darr lagraha hey ki mera result ka kya hoga...

after listening to geet words maan couldnot control his laugh...geet looked at him angrily...

geet: aapko mazaak suj raha hey

maan was still laughing...

geet got more infuriated and stood up to leave...

but maan held her wrist and pulled towards him...

maan: tho kya karu geet...hawa mein deep laga key...bhagawan se prarthna kiya tho...kya woh jaltha rahega...nahi na...phir...agae tumne exam achcha lika tho ...u will get good percentage...aur ...i know that...meri geet exams mein top karega...i have that confidence...

geet kept looking at maan lost in his words...just then she got call from brij...

brij: geet...tumhara result aagaya...

geet tension increased hundred fold...

geet: veerji..jaldi boliye...kounsa rank aaya?

her hands were shivering while talking to brij...maan noticed this...he came closer to geet...hugged her and took her lips into his...giving her a passionate kiss...geet who was lost in the kiss ...without any tension finally heard from the brij that she topped the entrance test...

to be continued...

Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Maun vrath for exams . . 😆 Geet ek dam jhalli hai .. 😆
But Sooo cute . . Loved it!
Continue soon ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update!!
love maan n geet
ur an amazing writer.. keep up d good wrk!!
update nxt part soon plz

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