Friends with Benefits~ AR FF IMP.note p.151 2/10

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fathima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#521

great part..well..ridhimas situation is really bad...but i think she is a strong woman tat she wil try movin on rather tan cryin over her heart break...🤔

While tying her hair in a messy bun, she couldn't believe she actually cried. "That was unintentional too" she said to herself and forcefully let out a laugh. But'she thought to herself, she didn't cry because of a heartbreak! She cried cause she was so dumb! She felt so mad at herself, that if she could, she would beat herself up right now.

i loved tese lines tat shows she wil not cry for wat had happnd...!

n yes waitin to c how armaan wil gradually fal for her...😳

Edited by fatzfathi - 14 years ago

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Zarqaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#522

comment edited on page 75 :)

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Medha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#523

Hey Simmy! That was an awesome part. Loved it. That was kinda sad, but hope he falls in love with her soon. Thanks for the PM and please continue soon.

-Medzi-

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aditi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#524

aww...

feel sad for ridz

but overall nice part...'

cont soon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#525

aw loved part a! super amazing!

hm but i wonder what's going through Armaan's head..

poor ridz!

and love you too! cont soon!

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Aanya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#526

Imma comment after school :)

So, reserved <3

xoxo

Aanya

*EDITED*

Hey :) Sorry for the late edit, was busy with schoolwork :|

Coming to the update, it was AMAZING! :D Although it was sad, I adored it! Riddhima's hurt was shown beautifuuly <3 You managed to make it real and not too Meena Kumari [she was a Bollywood actress (old), famous for tragedies :D]

Pfft. He doesn't love her yet! YET being the crucial word here 😆 I liked how you portrayed his attitude towards the whole thing in contrast to hers! Fabulous job :)

All in all, the update was LOVEE :D

Continue asap!

xoxo

Aanya

Edited by Aanya_taanu4evr - 14 years ago

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Shivani Dhawan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#527

it almost made me cry... it was wonderfully written, and in this situation i am angry at armaan but i know he couldn't help it and he doesn't know the he has feelings for rids.. i recon rids should try to leave again and then ammy stops her in time and gets mad at her and ask her why and she yells "becos i love you god damit" even though its not his fault i feel like slapping ammy???

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a.vaishnavi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#528

u knw ur this part made me remember band baaja barat scene.. where anushka n ranveer ( dun remember their character names.. ) make love n the next day same kind of thing happens as u hav shwed here.. or sum wats imilar.. teh situation is similar...

n e ways nice upd8...

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Aakansha Agarwal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#529

awesome part!!
poor riddhima...feeling bad 4 her..
cont soon

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Sanaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

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ARGHHH!!! Armaan..!!! ARGHHH Riddhima..!! you complete NUT HEADS!!! I feel like frying both ur heads in a saucpan with full heat!!! Idiots..!! HOWWW can you not notice the amazing chemistry you share?? and HOWW can you not notice that to both of you..the kiss meant so muuchh??? How?? really how?? Please help me comprehend this wierd thing called a brain inside both of you..!!

Ok..enough of my lecture..soo..I lvoe how you portray the confusion..though i don't like it (AS in dnt like AR in confused state)..but i loveee how Riddhima reacted..veryyy realistically..!! She wasn't crying too much...and only cried properly when she got home..and then like probably I would..start blaming Nikki for making me think it's love..!! lolx.. But the part that broke my heart is when she stood at the place they kissed 'last night'..

AWWHHH!! =( =( =( =( =( I hope they sort things out..and REALIZE!! Idiots kahinke..!! ANd i have a feeling Armaan will realize only when Riddhima starts avoiding him..:S :S

PLease cont sooonnn.,.!!

Love,

Sanaa