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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
u r an awesome writer i have raed ur all fictions more than thrice times u got a brilliant mind and the way u write and convey the message and different stories is just out of the world
GOD BLESS U
i have learnt and know alot from ur stories
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow!!!!! amazing kinzu!!!!!!!!!!! so well writtn and with such deep thoughts!!!!such heart wrenching story!!!!!!!! i had tears in my eyes ! i have no words!!!!love u!!!!
Edited by mulan. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
🤗kinzuuuuuuuuuu!! what a surprise that was! u dedicated it to me! 😳
u have no idea how much i was looking forward to thsi os and yes as usual u have done it! amazing !!! it was fabulous!!!!!! 👏👏👏
such a cute and romantic part it was !!!!! 😍
mayank and nupur were sooo cute!!!!!!😃
love u kinzuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!1 u r teh best bestie anyone could ever have!!!!!!!! 🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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mind blowing os

thx lot for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
a huge huge sorry. I know i'm the worst person when it comes to replies and i'm terribly sorry😭 graduation's coming up have no time to do anything😭
coming to the os's. Feeling complete is so so cute😍 i always wanted a morning scene, either after PBM, sajda or their first date anniversary but we got nothing again👎🏼 even SaJan had a morning scene after ZDP then why not MayUr😡 seriously did gunjan have to get shot that day🤔 coming to the update loved it so much, its so incredibly beautiful and well written😍 you write romance with such innocence that it makes the reader blush without even writing it in too much detail😳 i was bright red while reading it😍 the way you described their emotions is so adorable😍 their shyness and love is very well portrayed😍
classroom romance has mayank nupur in every word and sentence. Love her hatred for history personally i love that class😆 poor nupur has to go to class because of mayank. you included shukla love that teacher🤣 especially his reaction of seeing nupur alive in season 2🤣. gaurav ek aur kabab mein haddinupur's shahrukh obsessionmayank is cuter someone tell the buddhu that😆 love their ending convo and nupur telling him to make a run for it is really funny so like nupur😆 ending is so mayurish. Nupur is a pro at blushing isnt she☺️
thanks for the pm sorry for being so late🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
thank u sweets..*hugs*
Random OS
Beyond Reach

There are incidents in life, that move with you, no matter where you go and how far you travel, they never leave you. That is what happened with HER. She was a normal ordinary girl, happy with her family. A perfect home, a perfect life, small joys, some tantrums and a very few sorrows.

It was a December evening when she was sitting in the library, intently going through the book "The Oxford dictionary of Quotations". She loved reading quotes, so she totally lost track of time.

It was almost evening an d It was snow falling, she realized as she looked out of the glass door of the library. Automatically a smile crept her face, she loved snowfalls.

She was from Asia, and here in Canada, she was for her vacations and snowfall is one thing which all Asians miss their entire life.

Seeing this rare gift of nature, she got up from her seat, and occupied a seat near the glass wall of library. She was seeing small flakes of snow, as if cotton buds, flying in air and settling on the road. It was a beautiful sight. She kept on staring outside the window. She thought of going back to her apartment, but then decided to spend more time here.

She opened the "L", section of the dictionary and started reading Love quotes, it perfectly suited the weather. All of them were beautiful, her cheeks were turning pink and she was smiling on her own, reading those words of wisdom about the most beautiful emotion on this world.

She kept on reading when she sensed someone staring her.

Her eyes stopped in between the words and she felt a rush in her veins. She ignored and concentrated back to the book , but somewhat it remained divided. She tried seeing from the corner of her eyes, without turning her head and her fear was right. It was a male staring at her. She felt her hands going stiff, she slowly turned her head and a man, maybe in his early 30s was staring at her. Constantly. As she looked at his face. She felt her heart would stop beating.

A woman can read through a man's eyes. His eyes show with what expression is he looking at the woman. Respect, love, flirt, or lust. And the expression she read in his eyes shook her within. She got up from that seat and went to the other far corner of the library. She again sensed his eyes following her.

For a few moments she kept her eyes close, she wanted to get out of that vicious trap of eyes.

Reciting all the words of God she remembered by heart, she opened the book, making her believe that she was over reacting. She started reading but the fear was not decreasing, she decided to go back to her apartment, it was enough for today. She closed the book when she heard the a chair by her side being pulled away, she turned her back and the same person sat beside her, so close that she could directly look into that wicked expression of his eyes. Her breath started panting and in a matter of seconds she got up from the seat when he held her arm.

If something as fear exists in the world, then that was what she experienced at that moment. She again turned her neck towards him, her eyes were brimming with tears, she wanted to free her hand from his grip, but it felt as if all her energy was wasted in widening her eyes. His smirk was penetrating through her heart, and then he left her her hand.

It felt as if breath came again.

He took out a paper from his pocket and again placing in her palm, he whispered, "do read".

His voice made very cell of her body shiver with fear. She saw him going with her breath panting and she read the paper..

"hello beautiful

Please no need to get scared, it is just I think we both know each other. 5 years back I was married to an Asian girl, but she left me, last year, and since then I am just finding her,. Today after 5 years I have seen her glimpse in someone, I know it's not you, but still if u give me chance, I promise not to disappoint you. Or if u don't agree then..

She felt earth shrinking beneath her feet, she tore the paper, in a million pieces, making sure it couldn't be read again. Throwing it away, she rushed out of the library.

There was no tear in her eye, just a fear, which kept her feet moving. The wind was chilly. All her mind knew was the turns she had to take to her apartment, she was walking with a numb mind when again he feet stopped.

He was standing at the corner of the road, and she could sense he was waiting for her.

May be she was lucky that her weak side didn't take her over, her mind was still working. She rushed into a shop nearby and pretended seeing things around, but only her heart knew the extent of fear. She could feel all the energy finishing, as if she may collapse anytime.

She peeped out of the shop many times but he was still there, but it was the 20th time when the corner was empty!!. Without wasting second she ran out of the shop, straight to her apartment.

Thankfully, all her family was busy in a movie, they asked her to join, but telling them about a headache, she went in her room and closed the door. She fell one her bed and tucking her head in the pillow, she cried. The whole night. She didn't even blink her eyes. Not for single second.

After that day, she didn't step out of her apartment. The fear was still there. She didn't tell anyone, she couldn't understand why?. But her lips used to get sealed on her every attempt.

That day and today, the fear is still there. She came back to her county, her home, but she couldn't move on from that fear. She thanked God endlessly for saving her, but that fear..she didn't know what to do with it.. She hates him, till her last breath. She knew she was beyond reach, that person couldn't get her, but STILL..his fear haunts her every night ..and she knows it will haunt her all her life.

Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
res:)
oh m so srry had completely frgttn abt this res, u kno na how bad m in this😆
anyways angel, i love ur wrk....wonderfully written:)
love u angel..🤗 tc kep smiling:D
Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
wow!! it was so..... real
its a fear that every girl possesses inside... some are able to get over it... some can't...
awesome kinzu

~jiya~
Edited by jiya_angel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
Hey Kinzuuuuuuuuuu
Nice OS dear
i can understand nups fear- even i have faced this type of prob.
i dont know what was his intention - may be something good or may be something bad- GOD knws abt it.....

beautifully written- Kinza
loved it
keep it up



Edited by -Faria- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
Nice attempt
its really a scary & misterious 1

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