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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: tere_liye_10

Thank youu,u Gave Long Comment😉

Errmmm...I Think I'll Update On Tuesday,Need 2 Do Other 5 FF's Noww😕😳

its wednesday
can we plz hv update
Edited by hopehot - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~THIS FF IS CLOSED~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I Am Very Upset😭😭😭
My work Is Being copied And posted On Other sites And Even On IF Itself😡
How Is This Fair?
i Spend Time And effort Writing This And it Is Not right That My work Is Copied.It Is Not Fair on Me!!!😕😭😭
Now I Am Not Updating Just So That Other people Can Copy My work and update Their"so called FF's" as i update🤢😭😭😭
I Dont Know When i will next update,maybe when i think i can trust that my work will not be plagiarised😭😭
That is all i want to say but i am very hurt and upset😭
I mean i dont get y sum1 wud wana copy MY FF,Theirs nothing specail bout it😕
Sorry for mentioning other names but it was muskanp or Firesaf which are very popular then i wud get y sum1 wud do it but it wud still b wrong😡
I am very upset😭
Sara
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: tere_liye_10

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~THIS FF IS CLOSED~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I Am Very Upset😭😭😭
My work Is Being copied And posted On Other sites And Even On IF Itself😡
How Is This Fair?
i Spend Time And effort Writing This And it Is Not right That My work Is Copied.It Is Not Fair on Me!!!😕😭😭
Now I Am Not Updating Just So That Other people Can Copy My work and update Their"so called FF's" as i update😭
I Dont Know When i will next update,maybe when i think i can trust that my work will not be plagiarised😭😭
That is all i want to say but i am very hurt and upset😭
I mean i dont get y sum1 wud wana copy MY FF,Theirs nothing specail bout it😕
Sorry for mentioning other names but it was muskanp or Firesaf which are very popular then i wud get y sum1 wud do it but it wud still b wrong😡
I am very upset😭
Sara



please dont end this FF...i really like this... you caan carry on with it on blogspot that way ppl cnt copy please x even i'm a bit worried about carrying on with my own FF's ... but im not too s... please carry on with it xure
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Posted: 14 years ago
plzzz dont stop this ff 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
yaay!! looking forward 2 it :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
how much longer yaar???????//

waiting eagerly
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Posted: 14 years ago
yippe waiting sara😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
😉Everyones waiting But Saras Not updating😆😆😆
No seriously Sorry guys,Ive only managed 2 write 3 pgs in 3 hours and Thats All Maaneet romance But i Dont give a damn so Here😉
Have it😛
This is the draft version though so Beware!!!😳
And yh i missed out your precap bit wid annie nd the truth but if i do that it'll be another 3 pgs and another 3 hours and i need to sleep cos i aint well😭😭
No copying Or I Will Not Write Ever Again!!!!😡
And No PM's,Will Do 2moz,Me Off 2 Bed.Gudnyt😊
EDITED,IVE WRITTEN MOREE😆

I Dont Want any plagiarism issues,Ive had enough recently so Credit to The Twilight Saga:New Moon For A Dialogue, And Basically Twilight For A Thought Geet Has.Twilight is A Big Inspiration For me.Although Ive changed it a bit,Im still Crediting So heres the original dialogue:

Part 62

I Rested My Head On His Chest And Wrapped My Arms Around Him,Intertwining Our Fingers.The Perfect Shape Of His Body Matched My Petite Figure Perfectly,I Was Able To Mold Into Him Like A Glove,As If I'd Been Made For Him.Just Him.

Maan:Geet,Dont You Want to Sleep?

Geet:No,I Want To Be With You.

Maan:And Tomorrow,You'll Like Look Like An Old Woman With Big Bags Under Your Eyes.Hmmm...Ill Have To Find Someone Else To Be My Wife I Think.

I Looked at her face,contorted with rage and anger and a wide grin spread on my face.She Wacked me on my chest.

Maan:Oww!!

Geet:Why Did You Do That?

Maan:What? Its True!!

Geet:First rule Of Marriage,Only Compliment Your Wife.If What you say will offend her Then keep Quiet!! And Definitely don't laugh After Hurting her!!

Now It Was My Turn to have Some Fun!! I Smiled And Blushed.Slowly,i Started Moving Closer To Him,His eyes widened as i traced my finger up his arm,His Signature Move ON Me!!I Stood up and Moved on his seat,on his lap.I Moved Closer To him Until the distance between us was closed,Our Lips Brushed Together.I Smiled And He Closed His Eyes.I Digged My Hand Into His legs,Slowly progressing to where i wanted to be.I Pressed my hand slowly and lightly on his groin and a moan escaped his lips. I Repeated this action,increasing the pressure everytime just by a little bit.

Maan:Geet!!!

He Opened His Eyes And I Smiled Cheekily At Him.

Geet:Youre Not the Only one who can play at this game.So,Mr.Maan Singh Khurana,Understand This!! Never Mention Leaving Me Again Or I Will Never Talk To You Again!!

My Eyes Filled With tears And I Was Overwhelmed With The emotions that rushed Through Me.

Geet:Do you Have any Idea,Even The slightest Notion Of How Important You Are To me? Maan,I Love You.More Than you Ever know.And if You Ever Leave Me Then I Wont Live Anymore.I Mean It Because If Youre Not With Me,Then this Life And Me Living Is Meaningless.I Want To Support You In Everything You Do,Be Your Strength,Your Guiding Light,Someone Who Before Being Your Wife Is Your Friend.

Maan:Im Sorry Geet

Geet:Why do You Always Say Sorry? Not Everything Is About saying Sorry You Know.

I Bent Down And Kissed Him.A Few Seconds Later,He Pulled Away With A Throaty Chuckle.

Maan:Do You Have Any Idea Of How Much You Are Tempting Me?

Geet:Whats Tempting You More;My Beauty Or My Body?

Maan:Both,Everything About You.But Mostly Your Innocence And Cuteness.If It was Up to me,I Would Take You Home Right Now With Me

Geet:Soon,Very soon.I Promise.Then,It Will Be Just me and you.A New Life.A New Beginning.Together.

I Yawned And Maan Stroked My cheek.

Maan:Youre Tired.Go Inside and Sleep,Geet.

Geet:I want To Be With you.

Maan:Should I Come Inside With you?

Geet:Yep,Come On,We'll Both Go sleep In My bed And Then tomorrow Annie Will Just wake Up And Smile seeing us together right?

Maan:Geet,Im Serious.Go To sleep,the Rains stopped aswell Now.If you Want,Ill Stay Here All Night Outside.But Please Sleep.

Geet:Ok,Ill Sleep

I Rested my head on his lap and stretched my legs out.

Geet:Goodnight Maan.Wont you Give Me A Goodnight kiss?

Maan:(laughing)I Regret even asking you to sleep.

He Bent down And pressed His Lips Softly on My Forehead.I Closed my eyes and tried to drift off into the world of my dreams but he was running his hands through my hair and that was very distracting.Sometime Later,I fell into a peaceful,Deep Slumber.

EDITED:I decided To Write Moree😉

The Next Morning:

I Felt Someone Waking Me Up.Soft,Gentle Hands Pressing Softly Against My Arms.Uff!! Maan Was waking Me So Early!! I Groaned With frustration.

Geet:Maan!! Let Me Sleep!!!

Maan:Geet,What Are You Saying? Go Back To sleep

His Voice was Droopy And Full Of Sleep.But Wasnt He Waking Me?

Geet:Maan,Arent You Waking Me?

Maan:What?

Geets Mum:No,Maan Is Not Waking You,I Am

Geet:Oh Thats Fine.Maan,I Love You.Now Lets Go Back To Sleep.

Slowly,The Words Came Into Sense In My Mind And My Eyes Shot Open.My Jaw Dropped and I Looked At Her In Shock.She Grinned At Me And I Looked At Her Sheepishly.I Thought I Could Read Her Mind And I Had A Pretty Good Idea Of What Thoughts Were Scattered In Her Already Overfull Mind.I Sat Up In A More Modest Position,In A Way In Which I Wasnt Relying On Him Quite So Heavily.I Shook Him But He wouldn't Open his Eyes.When I Moved Away,He Pulled Me Back And I Struggled In His Grip.

Maan:Geet,Lie Down.Your Bodys Keeping Me Warm.

Geet:Maan!! Wake Up.

Mum:No,Its Fine.Let Him Sleep.I'll Just Wait

Maan:Whos That?

He Slowly Opened His Eyes And Blinked As The Light Reflected On His Face.I Smiled As recognition Dawned And He Jumped Up.

Mum:Are You Awake Now?

Geet:Ermmm...Yes

Mum:Good.Geet,What Childishness Is This? Sleeping Outside All Night? And Maan,I trusted You But This Is What You Did? What If Someone Finds Out? Geet,What Will Your Best Friend Go Through? You Were Never This Selfish Before.

Maan:It Was My Fault,Im Sorry

Geet:No It Wasnt Maan.

Maan:Geet,Just Listen to Me For Once

Geet:No,Im Not Going to let you lie For me Maan

Maan:Geet!!

Geet:What?

Mum:Ok Both Of You Shut up!!! I was Just Pretending To be Angry With You AND Youre Both Fighting!!! Seriously!! But You Need To Be More Careful.What If Annie Woke Up Early And Looked Out Of The Window?

Geet:Sorry

Meanwhile...Annie Wakes Up

I Rised Out Of Bed And Looked Around.Geet Wasnt here So Where was She? The Curtains Were Drawn Too.She wasn't The Sort Of Person to Wake Up Early Either.Anyway,Never Mind.I Got Up And Went To The Bathroom.Oh Shit!! I Was On My Period And I Didnt Even Have Anything On Me.Geet Must Have Though Must She? But Where Would She Keep It? I Looked All Around The Room But I Couldnt Find Anything.Then,My Gaze Fell on the Large Red Suitcase Lying In The Middle Of The Room.There Would Probably Be Some In There,She Must Have Taken Some With Her To New York.I Walked Over And sat On The Floor Next To It And opened It.Lying On The Top Were Piles Of Clothes,Tops,Shorts,Dresses.I Moved ThemTo the Side And Near The Bottom,i Found A packet.I Began To Put Everything Back Inside But A Piece Of Paper Fell Out.I Went Over To Pick It Up And The Words Marriage Certificate Leaped Out Of The Page.Curiosity raged Inside me And I Looked At It.Across The Top,The words Marriage Certificate Were Emblazoned.

Annie:Marriage Certificate? Geets Married? But To Who?

I Read further On And What I Saw shattered Me,Broke me Apart.Again.This Certificate Marks the Union Of 2 Souls:Mr Maan Singh Khurana And Miss Geet Handa.They Are Now Husband And Wife And Bound In Matrimony For As Long As They Live.

Maan And Geet Were Married? How Could She Do This To Me? She Knew I Loved Him So...I Burst out Crying And Went Over To The Window.I Wrenched The Curtains Way And Outside,I Saw Maan And Geet Hugging.They Then Both Pulled Away And Smiled.Maan Kissed Her And She Turned To come Inside But He Stopped Her.Tears Rolled Down My Cheeks But I Wiped Them Away As I Ran Downstairs And Outside Where They Were Stood Holding Hands.When They Saw Me,They Both Quickly Let Go And Looked At Me With A Sheepish Expression.Geet Started To Walked Towards Me.I Looked At Her With tears Streaming Down My Face.

END

PRECAP:

Geet:Annie,I Didnt Mean It.

Annie:Oh You Didnt mean It? You Didnt mean To Marry Him? So How Did You? Geet,We Were Friends And you Dont Just Go And Marry The Guy Your Best Friend Loves And Then Sleep With Him.

She Laughed A Bitter,Harsh Laugh.

Annie:Well,Unless Youre A s**t Called Geet Handa You Dont.Oops,I Mean Geet Khurana Now Right?

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Edited by tere_liye_10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sara this is Awesome Part Totally Loved <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey, great update... it was awesome! Continue soon
Saba xxx

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