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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely part
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Beautiful part

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Posted: 14 years ago
great update
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nice update yaar...dont worry about the short update..Please take care dear..Inshallah..you'll get better soon..
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Pyaar main dacne


Chapter 12


Both went. They came to the mall but Geet by chance met Adi.

And Maan by chance met Pinky.

( What happen was tht Pinky and Adi had heard wrong and went to the oppiste mall what Maaneet had said)


G:- Hi Adi what are you doing here wansnt you going out with Maan?


A:- Oh yeha. We was going to meet here in the mall, but what are you doping here? Wasn't you going with Pinky somewhere?


G:- Yeha I was going to met her hear in the mall.


A:- But She went to the other Mall, she said tht she was going to meet you there.


G.- No I said to her tht we was going to meet her, oh no she heard wrong.

Both stood there and thinked what to go next.


On the other hand:


Maan came to the mall and saw Pinky there.


M:- Hi Pinks what are you doing here, get said tht she was going to meet her somewhere.


P:- Yeha she said tht she was going tomeet me here, but what are doing here Adi said tht you both was going meet each other?


M:- Yeha I was going to meet him here.


P:- But he said tht you where going to meet him here.


M:- Wait I will call him.


Maan called Adi.


M:- Hello, Adi where are you? I am wating for you here, and Pinky is with me too.


A:- Maan, wasnt you going to come the mall near HM ( Handa Manstion)?


M:- No I said near KM.


A:- oh god cunfustion, ok I am coming there and say to Pinky tht Geet is here.


M:- ok, wait its better if the both talk to each other.


Maan gave the phone to Pinky. Geet and Pinky talked. After tht Geet said to Pinky to set on the speaker, bcs she wanted talk to Adi, Pinky and Maan.


G:- Maan can I be with Adi bcs I think it better if he can hope it ok, bcs ineed his help. Sorry Pinky but I thinked Adi can help me better with this then what you can I don't want to be rude, but I think he can help me better.


P:- Its ok Geet you can take him, she said little jaelous.

On other hand Maan and Geet knew how jealous she was and smiled.


M:- Thts good bcs I also need Pinky help I think she can help me better with this then what you can with then yu can.


A:- ok, said little angry.

After they had discssed what to do, they ended the call.

Maan was not very happy with Geet being with Adi and Geet not so happy tht Maan is with Pinky ( I smell jealousy in the air)


M:- Pinks I need help with bying a birthday present to Geet and I don't what to buy pl can you help me?


P:- OK, I will.


On the other hand:


G:- Adi pl pl help me.


A:- Geet I can help you if you tell me what you want help with first


G:- oh yeha. Geet said little embaressed. – Adi I want buy I birthday present to Maan ut I don't know what to gift him. He is not like other guys like I can buy him a video game and he will be happy. Plus it his 18th birthday and I don't want anything wich he can have some day and then throw it, I want to give him something he can never forget and have probably he can have his whole life like a memory.


A:- OK lets go and look.


On other side:

Maan and Pinky is in a jelwry shop and looking at some jelwry.


P:- Maan I think you shud buy Geet a ring.


M:- Pinky I am not going to propse her, I am here to buy here a 18th birthday present. He said little scared and angry.


P:- Maan mom and dad allways says tht gift a person something tht she likes very much and wich she can use her whole life. And julwely is something tht Geet can use her whole life so why jot a ring?


M:- Bcs it feels more like I am going to propse her than gift her on her 18th birth day.


P:- OK, Mr. Maan Singh Khurana, I undertand. Pinky said folding her hands togther and bow down a little bit.


Maan and Pinky got split up and satred looking.

After awhile Pinky screamed after Maan. Maan came and everyone was staring at them.


M:- Pinky don't scream like tht next time. Bcs everyone is looking.


P:- Wait, can you pl do your work or do you want why I called my brother?


Everyone got embaressed and got back what they did.


P:- Mr. Khurana, I am not just your sister I am Geet hanads sister to, and the person you live with some way you get in the little thing what she does too.


M:- OK, meri Maa ab chup ho jao.


P:- Maan ma nahi bhen.


Maan sight and rolled his eyes and Pinky laughed


On the other side:


Adi and Geet was in a book shop.


G:- Adi what are we doing here shudent we be and looking for a persent for MK.


A:- Geet are you ok, why are you calling Maan MK? you never do it


G:- Adi, you don't know what MK means in my dictionary.


A:- What does it mean?

G:- Mr. Kardoo, and MSK means Mr. sardoo akrdoo. Pl don't tell Maan bcs tht is the only why I can tease him with out knowing.


Adi how was dying of laugh said


A:- Don't worry Geet I will not tell me, bcs he will kill me, if I say it I will start laungh and he will kill me.


He winked at Geet.


G:- But anyways what are we doing in the book shop.


A:- Geet I think we sud by him a book for his 18th birthday, what say?


G:- Adi, a book. I don't thinks so. Adi lets go to tht watch shop we could find something there.


Both went to the watch shop.


G:- Adi, dad says always tht a watch is something you can have your whole life and be a memory, so lets look for a good watch.

A:- He is absolutely right, you know I still have my dads watch which he had efore he died, he said little sad.


G:- Sorry Adi I shudent have said it, I didnt mean to get you sentiy.


A:- Geet, you are a sister to me and can you make me sad, he said with a smile on his face.


G:- OK, let tht be now lets look for a watch.


Both Adi and Geet started looking for a good watch. Geet didnt care how expensive it was, after it was Maans 18th birthday, she had saved up for this day.


After awhile she seream for Adi ( same way as Pinky). Everbody looked at Geets way but she didnt care Adi came to her.


A:- Geet, do you have same illnes as Pinky screaming for somody.



G:- Shut up Adi, she is my sister. Dont say bad thing abt her, ok.



A:- Sorry Geet, no one can win over you and Pinky you both are the same.



G:- Yeha I know cs she is my sister.



A:- I think its better for me to be quit.


G:- Adi, what are you gifting Pinky on her 18th brithday, you and Pinky have same date of birth as me and Maan na, so what are you gifting them both?



A:- I dont have thinked abt it.



G:- OK, lets buy this watch and then go to the julwery shop and look something for Pinky too.



A:- But Geet, you dont need too I will mange.


G:- Pl Adi, dont be so formal with me, first you call me your sister and then you are being formal with me, what is this. You can ehave the same way with like you bhave with maan. But fighting thing you cant sorry.

A:- You know Geet its really hard to win in words with you and Pinky bcs you both dont let anyone to talk.


G:- I know.


The shop ceper gave Geet the bag with the watch and Adi and Geet went of.

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Posted: 14 years ago
OK, hope you like the update.

I was thinking Getting Geet drunk and she start dancing on a song a tht she starts dancing on, and Maan come and stops her and start dancing on the song to, roblem is i cant come up with any song pl help me with tht


heres what Maaneet buyed for each other:


Maan brought this paayals for Geet.


And Geet brought this Rolex watch for Maan



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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update
loved it
continue soon
thnx for d PM 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update
Oooh seems lyk jealousy is spreading around
Awww love their gifts 4 each other
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful part. loved it.
continue soon.

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