-Remorse- M&G- THREAD 6 - Page 7

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"You cannot be forgiven if you don't show remorse. And you cannot show remorse if you never had a guilty conscience to begin with." - J.H.C.

a quote by rohine20

Life couldn't be simple in any other way. It's a war pool. Tany seems to go well with Geet. She seems to be eased down.... But my remorses. What's this remorses? Every point of my life I was reminded. Non stop. I looked at Geet just observed her. Life was nothing simple. Nothing abrupt. Nothing that I could explain. I have done countless mistakes. Mistakes that is impossible to forget or to forgive. I knew Geet haven't forgiven me. It's not easy at all. It could never forgive me. I could never forgive my self. I have tried. I am looking for ways where I can repent this remorses. I am looking for ways to calm this painful heart. A unknown remedy that could only be given by Geet.

This journey! I don't know where it was taking me. I don't know where this will end. Where this will lead to. I am just going as the flow will take me. Where it wi take me? I wondered. Janat! Not a janat. That's not somewhere I belong to. I sadly smiled. I am all alone. I am in a point where I could possibly not look back. Where I could possibly not no where I am going. I have one aim. To make geet happy. Give everything back I have stoled. Can I? I knew I can't. It's impossible. I could never redo the damage. Fatal damage I have done. My family. My so called family was after my happiness. My so called family... It's true. Sometime I wish I had my blood. Sometime I wish there was my blood. To understand my pain. To ease this pain. To ease my mistake.

Geet walks towards maan- ap ko khana nahi khana?
Maan- that depends if you feed me.
Geet- Ap baca nahi ho!
Maan- per Ab to Hu. Apki Samne.... Maan expected a blush. Instead he received a blunt look.
Geet- "hum apki liye khana ready karti Hu!" Geet walks off. Maan just observes her weird behavior. Was she really easing with him. Was she really forgiving him. First the hug! Now her talking to me?... He couldn't care less. There was some feeling that was eating him inside. A odd feeling that was killing him within. Just geets spark was keeping it alive.
Maan sits on the dinner table. Geet serves him. Awkward situation yet again. Geet wasn't sure what to expect. What to do or how to serve him. They have never done this with love. They have never dreamed about this day. Yet again here she is... Geet was about to walk way when maan pulls her to his lap. There observation of one another eyes was breathtaking. Nor Geet could remove her gaze or maan could let her go. She was in love. Madly. Somewhere her heart won the battle & offered him a second chance. Now depends how he uses this chance to win her back. She reminded her self again & again.... There are no place for forgiveness. No place for anything but for now she wanted to be lost in his eyes. What was about him that made her love madly? There was nothing. It's simply unexplainable. Maan holds his hand with food in front of her mouth. Geet failed to realise.
Maan- "hamari hath Se..." Geet looks at his hand then the food.... She was hesitating. What to hesitate? She is sitting on his lap but Hesitating to eat from his hand.
Geet- "ham kha lange"
Maan- "nahi!"... Maan was in pain of her refusal. Pain in her denial. There was odd feeling. Odd atmosphere. He was falling in love with her where she was already in love with him. Since forever. Maans realization of love couldn't be defined. He didn't like to define. The realization of love in his remorses. He felt selfish. He felt undeserved. Will he be ever to open his heart to her. Will he ever to tell his inner feeling. Will she ever able to read this pain with out words....

Geet looks back at his eyes. There was glimpse of pain that she possibly couldn't understand. He wanted her. Here she is. Then what's the pain? Why there is pain? There eyes spoke silently. Maan still held the food for Geet. She have completely forgotten as she was observed in to reading his eyes. Analyze in detail.
Tany knocks & cough.

Geet snaps out instantly. Stands up from his lap. Embarrassed. Her cheek went all pink. Trying to hide it with her dupata. Taking to calm he self down- "tum bati na!"
Tany- nahi yar. I have to go somewhere.
Geet- kha?
Tany- Bas! Per hum jaroor bapas aynge!
Geet- pakka!
Tany smiles & leaves the couple alone. Geet was about to flow when maan holds her tight then brings her back in to his embrace- "Ap kha ja rahi ho?" Geet felt confused with his behaviour. His grip round her waist was only getting stronger... Geet relaxed after few secon realising he will not free her any time soon. She stood There like a statue but maan knew his way to melt.
Geet- Ap Ae....
Maan puts his index finger on her lips. Preventing her to speak... - Abe to mujce Kuch karne do.... Always I only gave you pain. Nothing els.
Geet- you never gave me pain.... There lips was close. Very close. He stops instantly. Looking at geet with his painful eyes. He knew well she was only lying to comfort him'

He knew well how strong is her love. It's beyond his imagination. It's beyond his love. His love was mere nothing in front of his love. His desire. She knew what exactly he wants. When e wants. When what emotion playas through him..... Maan rests his hand against her cheek. She looks at him with painfull eyes. It was his pain... Was it. The pain I have given her. Was he misreading... He breaks there awkward silence...

Maan- chalo.... Shopping pe chale.
Geet- ham tayer hoke ate hu.... Maan kisses her forehead.

KM

Dadi- ham to bohot kush Hu. That son of no good named the haveli in our name.
Dev- this is ridicules! I want...
Dadi- bas. I don't want to here that filths name ever again.
Ani- but he is our brother.
Dadi- if you are so much in love why don't you go & live with them.
Dev- Dadi! I want to join the business. Dad have left us equal share right. & I know exactly how to get geets sign on the paper.
Dadi- if you can it will be amazing.

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