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Ok , I came across your Ff & read all the 6 parts together 😆 . Loved the way you are writing , the characters of Geet & Maan are very good ; the side characters specially Vicky is very sweet . The funny parts are awesome .

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chapter 7

Geet found her place, in heart of every khurana,except dadi who was mostly strict and rude to her.
One evening, geet went to dadi room,keeping her head on dadi lap she asked, dadi,do you hate me? dadi patted her head saying, how can I hate you, when u are the one who will give me 'waris'(heir of Khurana family)
But dadi, I don't have anything like waris,
well, you will get that from maan,then u give that to me ok.
Ok dadi I promise I will give you.
With that she went to her bed room and found maan helping Vicky with studies
maan and Vicky raised their head and found her standing in front of maan , with narrowed eyes and one hand on her hip, he sensed the coming storm , "Ab kya hua".
"mujhe waris chayeye".

maan gulped his saliva,waris?,yeh ladki meri jaan lekar rahege.
Vicky was thoroughly enjoying it.
vicky -bhai don't you think we should cut down our entertainment package, as we have "chalta phirta entertainment at home"but left room hurriedly with one angry glare by maan.
She continued 'Don't try to fool me this time, I already promised dadi',so you better hurry up. And if u doesn't have any, let's go for shopping and get that.
"Geet we will give that to dadi but at right time, pakka. You trust me?
Geet- 'haan."

Then, no more discussion on this.
she nodded, and he took a relief breathe.
He went back to his studies, while geet sitting in one corner and watching fish aquarium
Geet –suniyee
maan –huummm
what r this fishes doing, she pointed at two fishes who were kissing.
maan rolled his eyes"they are playing", and now plz let me study.
Trying to avoid more questions
She came to him, closed his books, and sat on his lap, he was very uncomfortable, by her close proximity and got tired of controlling himself, the more he is trying, more she is making it difficult.. Her, Deep seductive eyes her petal like lips, her white soft skin and her long hairs. Everything about her is teasing him, seducing him.
'Uff yeh ladki mujhe pagal kardege'..
She came up with her one more demand.
I am getting bored."mujhe woh fish wale game khelna hai".
He was not able to come up with any excuse or maybe he don't want too,
she gave a quick peek on his lips.
By her just one single peek, maan lost his control and looking at her intensely.
Her eyes filled up, saying 'You don't love me, that's why you are not playing with me', she tried getting up from his lap, when he pulled her back to him and smashed his lips on her, shocked by his sudden action of passion. she started protesting, pushing him, gaping him,but he was too strong for her, he pulled her more closer kissing her passionately, he deepened his kiss, seeing her protest getting weak. She moaned in pain,making his hard body burst out with desires.
His one hand was holding her head balancing her, while other hand rubbing her back, pressing her closer to him, Her eyes were closed in fear. he opened her mouth forcefully and entered, tasting her saliva and discovering every corner of her mouth in detail ,. She was continuously shedding tears, he was too lost in kiss, to notice her. But was taken a back feeling her whole body shivering under his. He left her at once and was stepping back totally surprised by his own action; he ran his hand on his head in frustration.

On there hand geet was shivering with fear. She covered her lips by her hand, and ran from there, without looking at him. Even he didn't tried to stop her. She went to jaya's room hugged her and cried. They questioned her, but she didn't utter a word, she slept crying.jaya got worried, but raj said might be she got scared of her nightmare. There is nothing to worry. They patted her lovingly and slept.

Whole night maan was phasing up and down in his room, cursing himself for loosing his control, How could you do this to her, she was protesting, crying but you showed no mercy on her, though it was out burst of your love not lust, but how will you ever explain this to her, she is too small to understand your feelings for her, what might she going through now, shame on you maan ,how could you so heartless to your love.


Morning he got ready and came downstairs and saw everyone on dining table except geet,he has no courage to ask about her, he noticed jaya taking breakfast tray for geet to her room, he skipped his breakfast. And went to his car waiting for her. to drop her to school, after few min ramu kaka came and said maan beta ' aaj geet aur Vicky nahi aarahe hai,tum jaaoo'.maan left heart broken, but was unable to concentrate on studies in college, he gave up and went home early to have her one glimpse, not sure would be able to face her, but was badly craving for her.

He came and saw jaya busy on phone with her friend, he went to his room hoping to find her there, but was disappointed,he came back and went to kitchen.
kaka geet kaha hai.woh neeche kyon nahi aaye
maan beta usse bahut bukhar (fever)hai
kya?he rushed to jaya's room and saw Vicky and geet playing chess and laughing, he got relief seeing her laughing.
As soon geet noticed maan she turned away .maan was hurt, she slowly looked back at him and Murmured "nahi khelna tha,toh keh dete,aise koi karta hai kya" ,katti, katti, katti, he looked at her pleadingly and as if asking her one chance, but she avoided his gaze, rejecting his plea. Vicky was surprised and confused with their silent talk.
maan left room with moist eyes, burning in remorse and cursing himself again and again. He spends one more sleepless night.
Morning he went to Raj and jaya.
Mom, dad I want your permission
raj – permission for what?

maan –Dad I want to complete this final year of BSc from Mumbai university, instead of Delhi university.
Raj- But maan, only 6 months left to complete your degree, why u want to change college now, and how will you get admission.
maan –dad you remembered Mr. sinha, your old client, his daughter samera was my school classmate and friend, she is studying there, yesterday I spoke to her and forwarded my doc and marks list to her, and with the help of her dad who is now trustee in that college, I got seat.
Raj and jaya were all shocked, but maan requested and convinced them saying he will be back soon after 6 months.

He started packing, Jaya went to her room and informed Vicky and geet about maan, and took Vicky with her to help maan in packing. As Soon as they left the room,Geet fell on bed, hugging her pillow and crying her heart out, though,she was not able to understand, her felling for him, yet felt bad?. pehle maa ,papa aur ab woh bhi mujhe chod kar jaa rahe hai. She cried and cried and fell asleep.
Late at night Raj jaya and all others were busy in packing when maan went and took geet in his arms to his room and laid her on bed. He sat on his knees by her side slowly caressing her hairs trying not to wake or disturb her from sleep. He muttered sorry many times with tears rolling down his cheeks. Seeing her tears stained face.
"jaan I am sorry, sorry plz forgive me,plz talk to me, I cant stand your indifferent behavior towards me, your scared eyes were haunting me all the time, I have no other option but to go far from you, I don't know how I am going to survive as I am addicted of you. he closed his eyes in pain, but this is my punishment and I have to go through it. I will return, only when I will be strong enough to resist you .till then take care shonna . He laid her bunny, besides her with a paper sorry written on it,. And left room, giving her one last look.

precap---Geet knowing about her marriage.


Hi friends,here is part 7,hope you like it.please comment,and sorry for mistakes.
will pm tomarrow.😊

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