Mera Maan sirf mera hain! FF p156

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Absoluv

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

reminds me of Amitabh-Rekha chemistry....Loving it so do continue...

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Nikky

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Dude I am loving the frequent updatesss... keep them coming.. this is sooo goood! Loving it

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crazedfan19

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Posted: 14 years ago

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oye hoyye!! mujhe maan se dobara pyar ho gaye!! awesome job!! thank you for the pm! love love love it!

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Vibhuti Shah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

amazing concepts .

do continue plz

add me to yr pm list.

thank u

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

nice ff....keep up d good work...Cont soon n thnx fo d pm

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Desigirl144

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Am I being totally greedy if I ask you for another update😳

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nadia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Part 5

"Beta tumne acha kiya apna mood teek kiya aur mujra kar rehi ho. Tume pata hain jab aik tawaif ki umar dalti hain toh ye paisa hi usska sath banta hain".
"Magar maa muje Maan se pyar hain"
"Pyar karo beta par ye umeed mat lagana wo tume apni biwi banaye ga, aur waise bhi sunane main ayaa hain wo bara shareef hain, aur wo toh yaha kabhi bhi nahi aye ga"
"Haan yehi toh adaa muje unn ki pasand hain. Yaha har koi meri adaa pe marta hain lekin unne kuch fark nahin parta"..she smiled.

Geet started dancing...a bunch of men came in and one of them was Annie's husband😲 Geet was dancing that she saw Annie's husband and started imaginging it being Maan...she performed around him like this:

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yAR4Nj4rNJM[/YOUTUBE]

She faced Maan and was embarrased it was not him..it was Annie's Husband Arjun...she moved away and ran into her room. Arjun was awestruck by Geet's beauty..he became a regular at her mujra's.

Annie was distraught as Arjun told her he will be divorcing her for a tawaif called Geet and poor Geet did not even know she was in the equation. Annie told Maan she knew he was the only one that could this problem out for her.
"Bhai Arjun muje chor kar kisi aur se shaadi karna chahta hain"
"Koun hain wo?"
"Geet wo Culcutta main aik tawaif hain".
Maan was fuming..he got in his jeep and went with Adi to meet Geet.

Geet was dressed in a white dress and chooridar that she sensed Maan's presence, she was performing. Maan was breathless seeing her perform, she had such sweet charms.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E5-kspAuN1k[/YOUTUBE]

She finished performing and everyone left
"Meri ankhon ko yakeen nahi ho raha, ke aap mere paas hain"
"Mera tumse aik kaam tah"
"kaam?"
"Haan meri behn ka pati Arjun yaha ataa hain tumare paas usse apne chungal se nikalo"
"Arjun? haan Maan wo yaha auro ki tara ateh hain magar maine unne uss nazar se nahi dekha, aap yakeen karo, bas aapko dekha toh auro ko dekhna mere liye guna hain".
Maan was flustered by her words..oh my god she had a way with words.😳

"Main apni behn ke liye kuch bhi karsakta hoon, bholo tume kiya chahiye?"
"Soch lo Maan babu"
"Ye Maan Singh Khurana ki zubaan hain"
"Acha toh muje aapse shaadi karni hain manzoor hain?"
"Hhhmmmm"

Maan walked off, Geet smiled awestruck. Adi gave a high 5.
"Bhabhi maine kaha tah nah Maan dil hi dil main aapse pyar karta hain"
Geet smiled shyly.

Precap; Maan Kare ga poora apna vaada? ya badle ga apna iraada? (Will Maan fulfill his promise or change his intention?~)

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Edited by Mahi-Maan - 14 years ago