Destiny's play-Last Part, Epilogue-Pg 74,81 (2/4)

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Kads

@Kadds02

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Posted: 14 years ago

#491

Noooooo u can't end it
Nw wht wud happen to my morning dose *sniff*

Jokes apart
This was 1 of the best endings Iv read.
Keep up the good work, n hope u start another 1 soon
Don't miss me in ur PMs

-Kads

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hopehot

@hopehot

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Posted: 14 years ago

#492

awwwwwwww

it ended ..........

irt was reallyt good . mann still calls them ice ,petel, ribby. dev and sam have a baby girl. u wrapped it up so welll........

I LOVED ITTTTTTTTTT

can u plz pm me on any new fan facs u start later

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Durga

@mrk-1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#493

wow wat a epilog yar ...awsome ending ..pls do come up with ur next ff soon

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#494

I loved the baby pics . Maan's prediction about the future of their babies was adorable 👏 specially his daughter drawing their picture ........ 2 circles & disconnected dots & lines ..... 😆.

Maan was very generous to treat Arjun that way , but I liked what he chose that Arjun's deeds would be judged by the Greater Force .👍🏼

Epilogue was fabulous ⭐️ . 3 couples with their children ..... loved the name revelation part ..... 😆 ..... the last scene was beautiful .

for a wonderful story .....

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

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Posted: 14 years ago

#495

Beautiful end to the lovely story!!!

wonderful update.................loved it!!!

Thank u for a beautiful and lovely story.

hope u come up with another one!!!!

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wajiha-1

@wajiha-1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#496

res
awesome ending
loved your ff
simply fantastic ending

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#497

Thanks a lot, Opti, for giving us a wonderful story to read and keeping us entertained for so long. It had a very solid storyline and wonderful characters. Maan is a character everybody can just dream of...and you depicted him and all his relationships so well.

I am so sad that this FF has ended...this was one story which I looked forward to reading every day and you had kept me enthralled throughout all its chapters without fail...I really admire all your works but "the strangers" and this one are my favorite...

I hope our appreciation gives you as much happiness as we have received reading your story...i wish this gives you enough inspiration to keep writing and making our days happy😳👏

You are a super⭐️

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afsha

@-afsha-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#498

That was superb ending

Jus loved it to the core

Their love Masti care for each other is fab

Hop ur strting new ff soon

Edited by -afsha- - 14 years ago

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Uthra

@Viji79

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Posted: 14 years ago

#499

Congratulations Opti, for the successful completion of destiny's play. I enjoyed reading maaneetified destiny's children. Now I am keeping my fingers crossed for Maaneet scenes or are you going to surprise us with Great expectations?

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jenny

@ajenn

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Posted: 14 years ago

#500

finnaaly maan knoes d actual truth
Luved d way Anwesha sounded him.
Maan's antics to make upwif his wife was so cute...
using his kinds as his trick.. i coudlnt stop smiling all d while..
D babies pic is damn cute. Esp d sahana & megha's... chubby chubby
i feel like pinching 'em once i saw d pic.. awww... but i cant do tat.
maaneet's interaction bout their kids future was excellent.
every parents would have their dream on it. But it all depends on wat future lead 'em too.
But i guess maan in hinting tat ishan will be like him n megha & sahana will b like geet.
Bof equally resembled..

Epilogue
Execellant Job.
Initially i got surprised reading on arjun's part.
But when i continue it. Den i realize its all cos of maan.. tat arjun is Out.
Maan is really kind in person.
Glad anwesha found her happy life within Yash. Happy Honeymooning!!!!!
maan still calls 'em on their nickname!!!
I think its fine for d gals even once 'ey grow up.. but for Ishan.. Ice... tats damn funny.
Poor geet. Its so embarrassing for her.

Opti,
I jst luv reading ur FF again n again.
Believe me i even read it occasionally. I always feels good to read it.
It like apart of my daily routine on India Forums.
I luv d whole package on dis FF.
Will u be writing any new one... Keep writing...