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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

Sajan were so cute

loved them

n mayur......I really love their relation

lovely upd8

cont soon

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itzMYattitude

@itzMYattitude

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

finally u started another one

coooooool good going han

amazinggggggggg cc dear

really out standing

sorry for being late

but really m happy will read ur ff n tht too on mars

yupeeeeeeee party time

love ur writting style

i know u will rock

keep on writting

sammy roxxxxxxx n loved the cc alot

plzzzzzzzzz continiue sooooooooon

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mona-bg

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

cont soon dearrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr😛

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556195

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

hello guys..!!🤗
i am back with an update
thanks for all your lovely response...i am overwhelmed with your comments❤️
they mean a lot to me
thanks a ton for the encouragements😳

now pls scroll down for the next part

Edited by vampire_girl - 14 years ago

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556195

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

part-2

"jee suniye..!!" she said hesitantly… "kya hai??!!"… the person didn't een looked at her..just shouted without any reason…but she was used to his tudeness… "jee uo aaj hume maa ke ghar jana hai..app challenge na humare saath"… he furiously looked at her… "tumhe samajah nahi ata ya dimag nahi hai tumhare paas??!!…mai tumhare maa ke ghar chalun??…tumhare??…jinke paas mere bedroom se bhi chota ghar hai..tum mujhe uhan le jana chahti ho??…!! ..kya soch kar haan..bolo?"…she got sacred ..tears started coming in her eyes…this was her life…and this was her so called husband who just cant see beyond money…she never wanted to swim in money pool..just wanted love and care but alas! Her destiny didn't favor her…from outside everyone will say that she is the most happiest and luckiest woman on the earth but only she knew what a hell her life is!

"jee uo nupur jana chahti thi..aur uo chathi thi ki hum sab saath chalein..isiliye maine socha ki…"…she somehow managed to say this… "kya?…nupur ko jana hai..to pehle kyun nahi bataya..theek hai..mai bhi chalunga tumahre saath us jhopar patti mein"…he said and again got back in his files…this was ratna bhushan..and shahsi bhushn..and their so called stuoid and show off marriage…ratna was only toloarating all this for the sake of her children…she didn't want them to get hurt by their father's true face

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"yaar mayank tu kitna kanjoos hai…ek treat ke liye itna nakhra karraha hai"…samrat said bbeing irritated… "bhai ab treat de bhi do na"…gunjan said supporting samrat… "dekh teri behen bhi samajh gayi..ab tujhe kya problem hai"…samrat aksed him…. "acha maine kab kaha mai treat nahi dunga…par is bar treat mere gharpe hogi…ihan nahi ok"…mayank said with a smile… smarat took a deep breath… "chalo bhai hume to treat se matlab hai..ghar pe ho ya restaurant pe kya fark parta hai"…he said resting his back on the chair… "waise nupur kahan hai"…mayank asked looking here and there in the canteen… "bhai yea sawal hume tumse puchna chaiye..uo to humesha tumhare saath hi hoti hai na"… gunjan said with a bit taunt in her voice and samrat burst out of laugh…but stopped as he noticed mayank's glare.. "maine kaha tha na tujhse gunjan..is smarat ke saath mat raha kar..isi ka asar hai jo tu iski tarah saitan banti ja rahi hai"…mayank said casting an angry glare to samrat… "oye nupur uhan kya karrahi hai?"…they both looked at the direction samrat was pointing and saw two girls were trying to control nupur where she was trying to free herself to hit a boy…the three of the ran to her

"chodo mujhe…sale ki himmat kaise hui mera…nupur bhushan ka haath pakadne ki!!"… she was shouting badly…and the boy..well he was hell sacred… "maine… maine kahana galti..galti se hogaya…jan bujh ke nahi kiya"…he tried to defend himself…meanwhile mayank, samrat and gunajn came there… "nupur tune phir se laadi ki?"..gunajn said with a shocked expression… "nupur chodo use"… mayank and samrat somehow managed to let the boy go..they brought her to the table… "nupur tu yea kya karrahi thi..aise koi ladta hai kya?"… gunjan said giving her the water bottle… "arey uski himmat kaise hui mera haath pakadne ki?"… she said furiously… "wahi to mai soch raha hoon"… mayank said in a surprise tone… "kya matlab?"… nupur said angryli… "arey use to pata hi hai ki Nupur Bhushan…the great jhansi ki rani hai…yea jante uye bhi usne aisi himmat ki..very bad..!!"..he said and the three w=started lauging loudly while nupur was boiling with anger

"shut up..!!"… jao tum sab ihan se bhag jao..mujhe tum logo ki shakal bhi nahi dekhi"…she said getting up… "arey nupur suno to sahi"…mayank also ran to her…leaving gunjan and samrat behind… "nupur ko itna gussa ata hai…mujhe to uski badi fikar hoti hai"…gunajn said with a serious expression…samrat laughed seeing her expression… "arey fikar mat karo…usko smabhalne ke liye tumhara bhai hai nai"… he said as he laughed out more loudly… "dekho samrat uska mazak mat banao..samjhe"…she said warining him… "ok baba nahi urata..waise ek baat batao aaj mai kya pehnu?"…he said showing and dude expression… "gunjan faked a cough… "kya hua?"… he said angrily… "kuch nahi bas tumhara yea attitute na mujhe hazam nahi hua…bade aye handsome banne…jao aur kuch bhi pehen lena"… samrat mouth hang open… "chashmish!! Tumhe mai handsome nahi lagta?"… he said with amusement… gunjan shook his head… "ahan!"… samrat got up angrily… "thik hai thik hai…dekhlunga mai tumhe sham ko party mein…bye"… he said and left… he stopped and lokked behind to see if gunjan wants to stop him or not but gunjan was sitting care free… as if she didn't hear anything… she was gunjan Sharma.. jo keh diiya so keh diya…samrat dissapointedly went away while gunjan was laughing in her mind

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"arey nupur ruko to sahi na"…mayank some how manged to stop her… "mazak tha baba"…he said pantingly… nupur started laughing loudly… mayank got confused seeing her… "ab has kyun rahi ho??"…he said with all confussion on his face… "to mai bhi to tumlogo ko ullu bana rahi thi"… she said between her laughs… "god nupur you are too much"… he said taking a sit beside her on the stairs… "I know"…she said wirh a wink… "waise tum party me arahi ho na"…he asked her… "kaunsi party?"…she said shocked… "arey tumhara bhai…usne jabardasti li hai mujhse…match jeetnee ki khushi me… mere gharpe…sham ko 7 baje"… he said with a smile… "oh acha…haan haan mai to jarur aungi…aur tum puch kyun rahe ho…taki mai na aun…aur tum us sheena ke saath flirt kar sako hai na"…she said in one go… "oh god nupur phirse tum shuru hogayi…kitni baar kahun ..mai flirt nahi karta..uahi mere peeche peeche ajati hai..ab mai hoon hi itna handsome"…he said with a proud look… "shut up…!! Tum handsome nahi ..chindi chor ho chindi chor samjhe"… she said with a big smile… "mai tumhe chindi chor dikhta hoon"… mayank said amgrily… "ofcourse yes"… she said with full confidence… "thik hai..ab party me bataunga..mai chindi chor hoon ya ranbeer kapoor"…he said with a angry glare… "jaroor jaroor kyun nahi…mai bhi dekhti hoon tu aisa kaunsa teer amr loge"… she said mockingly… "ja raha hoon mai…huh..!!"…he left while nupur also left blabbering something in her mind

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at evening…Sharma house

"maa mai theek to lagraha hoon na"…mayank asked lookinf at himself on the mirror… his mother looked at him with a mischevious smile on her face… "waah..!! kya baat hai…bada saj sawar rahe ho …koi khaas anewala hai kya?"..she said with a wink… he was actually looking handsome in his blue jeans, white shairt …dashing as ever… "arey maa tum phir se shuru hogayi…batao to shai"…he said still looking in the mirror…his mother came infront of him… "handsome..!!"…she said crossing her arms… "sure?"… mayank asked her… "koi shaq?"… she said … "ahan no..chalo ab theek hai"…they were enjoying and giggling when gunjan came with a confuse look and lots of dress in her hands… "maa dekho na mujhe kuch smajh nahi araha …mai kya pehnu?"…she said trying to set her glass… "shilpa smiled at her childrens…she was happy with her small life but she wished her husband would have been there with them to wnjoy these little little happiness…

"dekhao mujhe"…she checked all the dresses and finally chose a light blue dress… "haan ye theek hai"…she said handing her the dress… "thanks mom"…she said and kissed her cheeks… "mai ready hokar ati hoon"…and she flew like a bird…mayank and shilpa both smiled at their cute princess…she was the "jaan" of this house…
she got ready wearing the dress and light make up…her hair were half tied…she looked like an angel… her glasses couldn't hide her beauty

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bhushan mansion

nupur hand messed the whole room and after a lot of yes and no she suddenly she noticed a dress… she shouted… "arey mail gaya… "by god ise hi to dhund rahi thi mai"… she kissed the dress and finally wore it… she looked breathtakily beautiful in her green salwar suit… she never wear slawar suit…she cant handle it…but today something strucked in her mind and she wore it…she put a light kajal in her eyes and lipglose…simple yes beautiful… she checked herself on the mirror and took her purse and left

samrat finally checked himself on the mirror and said "perfect"… he was finally satisfied with himself…he looked handsome in his grey jeans and black shirt… anyone would faint seeing him ofcourse with his hotness… "waah..!! samrat kya ada hai tere…aaj to chashmish ko dekha hi dunga ki samrat bhushan kya cheez hai"… he was blabbering something when his mother came there… "samrat beta…aaj tumahre papa busy hain…hum sab kal tumhare nani ke ghar chaleinge theek hai na"…she said hoping that samrat would take it normaly… "huh..!! unke paas humare liye time hota hi kab hai…sur waise bhi kahin jane ke liye mujhe aur meri behen ko unki jarurat nahi…ap karti hongi unki ji huzuri..par mai nahi karta…aur hum mayank ke ghar ja rahein hain…late hojayega"… he said taking his watch…his mother watched him helplessly… "beta uo tumhare papa hain"… "isi baat ka to dukh hai"… he said sadly… "par samrat…"his mother tried to say something… "maa mai abhi ja raha hoon bye"… he said and left withput any further disscusion"

her mom watched at him with tears in her eyes... how helpless can she be!...and her clidren...may be they are going away from her and she cant do anything at all...

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gunjan came down ... mayank and shilpa both looked at her...a big smile crept on their faces...they always knew that she is the most beautiful girl in the world but today she proved it... "maa mai kaisi lag rahi hoo?"...she asked them nervously... "bikul pari ki tarah"...mayank said side higging her..."haan pari ki tarah"...her mother also supported...gunjan blushed a bit while mayank burst out with laugh... "tu sharma kyun rahi hai"...gunjan got embarassed...
happy life with happy persons

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"bhai tum to hero lag rahe ho"...nupur said with amusement... "haan haan i know sis"...he said proudly..."kise flat karne ka irada hai"...she said with a wink... samrat looked at her... "uski behen ko jise impress karne ke liye tune jeans chod slawar suit pahen liya"... it took some time to nupur realize what he meant... "bhai..!!"...and their cat and dog fight continued till their car reached before sharma house..!!

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phew finally update😆
next update full with mayur and sajan moments 😳
pls do press the like tab and pls dont forget to comment
suggetions are more than welcome😊

love
tasfia

Edited by vampire_girl - 14 years ago

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umaima

@cutiepie12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

yay...me first to comment...🥳

ergh...😡 i hate shahsi bhushan...no wonder samrat thots abt him r soo true...hw cn he behave in suc a way wid his wife...poor anti...feeling soo sad for her...😒

awww...jhansi ki rani nupur kumari ko kisi larke ne chehrhne ki himmat ki..bechara...😆

awww...all four of dem r soo perfect...😃

dey all r geting ready n trying to look best to impress others...how sweet😳

tczzz

loved da update tasfia

cont soon

loads of love😉

Edited by cutiepie12 - 14 years ago

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#87

very cute update dear...loved it sooo much...

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jiya

@--jiya--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#88

wow!! update after so long!!

but it was fab👏

poor ratna aunty... i hate shashi bhushan😡

but i loved Shilpa aunty, Mayu and Gunjan's moment😳

and wow!! Nupur is wearing salwar for the first time😳

loved it buddy⭐️

waiting eagerly for next part

continue soon

~jiya~

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#89

Tasiii
wow it was amazing update...
fantastic...

i really hate Shasi Bhushan- how could he rudly behave with Ratna bhushan... its tooo much. feel bad for her..😭😭😭
hahahahaha our jhansi kirani Nups kumari-poor gyu ...he was hell scared whe nups shouted on him...😆😆😆...

Love mayur and thier cute convo as usual
wah wah- Nups wore salwar suit to impress maynk-baat kuch aur he lag rahe hai...😆😆😆
hehehehehehe0 sam was right- nups ye maynk ko impress karne k liye kiya hai...

loved ur update tasfi
it was totally mind blowing👏👏👏
plz do cont it and update ext art soon

take care