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Hey guys Happy april fool's day.

I am posting Part 2 in few minutes

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~*Fate has the best in store for us*~

~ A Maaneet FF

PART 2

At Mussoorie:

Pinky, Geet have got ready and waiting for Sam.

Geet: Sam, dear, please come out .I have to put the make-up on you. Please open the door. We are getting late.

Sameera: O come on babes take a chill pill. Why are you so much worried? Wait for me a little more. Let me enjoy my kiss for some more time. Muahh it's wonderful. I want some more of it Richie please. (To Geet)Anyways I am going to win all of the appreciation .I am the best. You all know that. Right Geet?

Sam opens the door .Pinky and Geet see that Sam has worn her show stopper dress .Richie has his hand along her waist and kissing her bare back.

Sameera: What happened girls? Why can't you let me enjoy my good-luck kiss? It was so yummy.(does one more)

Richie smirks and kisses Sam carelessly.

Richie: O babes your kisses are so sexy and your lips are so wonderful. Meet you after the show .Good luck. Bye.

Pinky: (to Geet) (murmurs) Look Geet .See what I told you is proved .Besharmi ki bhi koi had hoti hai. Sam is out of the world.

Pinky and Geet giggle.

Geet: Sam this doesn't suit you. The grand-daughter of such a great respected person shouldn't do such things.

Sameera: Now you will teach me what to do and what not. (Burns with anger)

Geet: Ok Calm down. Let me put the make-up.

Geet puts the make-up. Geet, Sam and Pinky reach the venue. Sam goes inside the green room. She calls up Geet over phone.

Sameera: Hey Geet. Now only I came to know that they are going to ask few questions.

First, who is your inspiration?

Second, who are you grateful to?

Third, whom you will give your cash prizes?

Geet: Hmmmmm''''..

Sameera: What? I can't hear what you said .Have you ate frog or what. Speak loudly. Have I kept you hungry or what. Speak up you dumbo.

Geet: Let me think Sam.

Sameera: You know I think first one should be "Britney Spears". Second one," myself". Third one," to buy my make-up kits and rest on my numerous boyfriends. "What say.

Geet: Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa'..HAHAH Sam AHAHAhaha

Sameera: You are laughing. Wait I will show you when I come home after winning the prize with these answers.

Geet: If you say these answers they will think some wrong person has come and they will kick your butt and make you out. Now'.first one is your Dadu, second one God and third by giving it for charity among poor and distressed people. Got it.

Sameera: (thinks) Laugh as much you want Geet. This would be your last hearty laugh. Wait till we go to Sanya's house then I will show you what I am. You kameenii.(says to Geet) O.k. I would say all these answers .You pack our bags we have to go to Delhi to Sanya's house immediately after the show finishes. Don't dare to leave any of my things. Got it.

Geet: O.k. But please be ready after the show finishes. I am getting our bags ready and I will leave by say about 4:30 by the car sent by Daarji. Sameera please please be ready.

Sameera: (thinks) as if I do care.

Sameera: (Says) O.k. O.k. Sameera doesn't wait for anyone. Everyone waits for Sameera. You fool Geet.

Geet: (murmurs) as if you are the queen. You foolish ugly jealous chick

Sameera: What did you say?

Geet: Nothing .Best of luck and bye.

Geet's monologue:

Hai Babaji. When shall I get my freedom? When shall I do things what I like and enjoy? Why are you being so cruel to me? Am-I an unwanted human being on earth that you are treating me harshly and took away all those whom I loved? I loved my mom and dad and you took them away. I loved my friend Pinky now you are taking her away too. Do not I deserve little happiness? I too wanted to walk along the ramp, to be praised by everyone. Packing the bags was just an excuse. I can't bear the happiness that all girls of my age get. I am under the debt of Daarji who provided me everything more than my parents could. That is why I never answered back Sameera or informed Daarji about Sameera's wrong doings.

Geet closes her eyes and dozes off while tears roll down her cheeks.

She dreams.

She finds herself fighting with someone''.someone her own.

She looks at herself. She was wearing a golden attire of a warrior .She looks at the fort and finds someone smirking at her. Yes that's Sameera. Geet gasps. She regrets about not telling to Daadu about''.She looks at the sky.

She finds many people smiling at her and guiding her to reach her goal .She regains her strength. Someone strikes at Sanya's back with a sword. That was the last straw.

She fights back vigorously. She finds Sanya to be dead. A tear escapes from her eye. She looks towards Sam who still smirks. Sam throws a sword at her while putting fire to Sanya's body.

A man clad in black with shining armor rushes in her direction.

The man comes and pulls Geet by her waist while Geet mourns over not protecting Sanya and cries. Just as the man was going to unveil himself Geet wakes up.

Geet was heavily sweating.

Geet's monologue:

Babaji is it any kind of symbol or signal that you are giving me. Sam is my sole enemy. Is this what you are trying to tell? Now I would not step back. I would not bow down before Sameera. Enough of her atrocities. I would not allow her to torture anyone anymore. Thank you Babaji you have relieved me of my dilemma. I am ever thankful to Daarji but not to Sam any more. Yes I would be independent to do whatever I like. Thank You for giving the green signal to my thoughts.

Geet packs the bags and leaves with the car to pick up Sameera. She finds Sameera engaged in boasting about her skills. She opens the door and asks Sam to enter but in a stern tone. Geet bids a teary goodbye to Pinky and asks her to come to Khurana mansion at Delhi whenever she likes to meet her. They leave.

Sameera: Geet you wear so tacky dresses. You are so ugly.

Geet: At least be thankful to me. I have helped you with Answers and I am not your servant either. You should learn to respect me.

Geet shots an angry glare towards Sam but decides to remain quiet as she did not want to create a scene in front of the driver.

They board the flight and head off to Delhi.

At Delhi:

Sanya: Maan where are you? See we are getting late. They might have already reached. You are always late whenever I ask for anything.

Maan: Oh my Sweets calm down dear. This is for you. (Shows bouquet of red roses)

Sanya blushes.

Sanya: Maan you never leave a single opportunity right.

Maan: As you wish.

Sanya and Maan laugh in unison. They leave to welcome Geet and Sam at the airport.

At airport:

Sanya sees Geet and Sam. Sameera was adjusting her makeup while Geet waves at Sanya.

Sanya: Geet!!!!! I am so glad to meet you. Maan this is who I have been always telling who is close to my heart.

Sam looks on upset and Geet notices it while shaking hands with Maan .Meanwhile Sam on looking at Maan has a sudden spark in her eyes. Geet becomes apprehensive of the forthcoming danger. Suddenly Geet sees Dadu and waves at him.

Geet & Sameera: (Shouts and runs) Daaaduuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Geet and Sameera both hug Daadu.

Daarji: Geet beta how are you?(caresses her hair while Geet touches his feet ).

Daarji notices Sam had stood up and was busy staring at Sanya-Maan's direction. Daarji greets Sam with an uncomfortable look.

Daarji: Geet, Sam, Sanya, and Maan I will stay at Khurana mansion for today only since I have a business meeting at Hoshiyarpur. Dev called me yesterday and told me about Maan's plan to wish his Dad on his birthday today. I know it's a surprise. Since I and Maan's grandfather were friends I would wish him and leave by tomorrow. O.k. now let's go.

Daarji (thinks): I have to dig up the history once again. I have to find the root cause which I can only do at Hoshiyarpur. I wish Divyanka you had not done the deal. I just wish.

Daarji leaves too.

They all leave by Maan's car.

PRECAP:

All in unison: Happy birthday to you''''

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Sunil: Thank you for all the gifts. Though People would laugh at this statement of mine, but in my childhood I would crave for such surprise parties. Better so .Jo bachpan mein na mila who budhape mein hi sahi.

Daarji: Arey Billu hamara nahin in bachchon ka shukriya aada kar specially tere bete ka. Laakhon mein ek hai tera beta.

Sanya: (thinks) So toh hai.

Hey guys do tell me did you like it. Please do post a comment and press the like button .Tell me should I continue

And Happy April Fool's Day

Hey guys can you guess who was the man in black in Geet's dream

Love

Ananya

Edited by ananya95 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thnx a lot

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Posted: 14 years ago
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plzz continue and continue super soon .....

cant wait for Maneet to fall for each other...

love
Sana
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Originally posted by: sindu555

plzz continue and continue super soon .....


cant wait for Maneet to fall for each other...

love
Sana

I will try

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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice....👏👏👏👏
cont soon...😊
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