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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#631

awwwesum prt ☺️☺️

updt sooon yaar

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Sammy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#632

amazing yaar loved it

omg shez acting not to remember him...gosh

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Anu

@DulceAmor

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Posted: 14 years ago

#633

Wow guys, that is one of the best pieces I have ever read!!! The way you described the dream was so hot and so wonderful. I could totally feel Shilpa's desire for Armaan. Loved the flashback so much...the way you described Armaan sitting there with his head in her lap and the way it made him feel was amazing. I really felt like I was inside his head then. And I simply adored the guitar bit...I actually felt as if I was seeing it happening in front of me, you described it so well. The last part was just the cherry on the top. ☺️ It was brilliant. Most passionate scene I have ever read. I can't believe she was just pretending memory loss😲 What a clever twist!!! It was fab guys, I really loved it. 👏

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Jyoti H S Mani

@Jyo_Ksg

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#634

Ossummm!!!!😃 Too Sentilating guys! 😛😆 Keep It up!😳
Thanks for the pm..😊 do update soon!😉

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Rupa Roy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#635

it was hot very part...
luv it...
waiting 4 next update...
update soon...

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naureen

@Norz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#636

awesome update

so shilpa was pretending

wonder y ???????????????

con soon

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malose

@malose

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Posted: 14 years ago

#637

grest jobb gys

that was hot and awsume

update soon =)

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firoza malik

@dimpledsmile

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Posted: 14 years ago

#638

hey..

really very nice part..

continue soon..

thnx 4 da PM!!

tc.

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riddhan

@riddhan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#639

the part was awesome thanxs for the pm😃

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ritu

@janu1610

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#640

Rida her dream was so wild nd passionate .even i wanna her to surrender herself in him at that very moment . Loved the way he dug his head in her stomach ,that fervidness was a very close call to forget all and to surrender in his desire .
Song ahhh Apt for situation.
Dil ne KASH ko chunn liya hai
Tum b [KASH] hum ko chuuno na .
God when we 'd get them back ...
well last part was totally out of the world . loved it when his inflammation burned her also .

thanks for pm.
love
ritu

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