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Posted: 14 years ago
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i guess its arrange marriage..continue soon..can u add me to ur PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
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HEY AWESOME PART
AND PLS ADD ME TO UR PM LIST
CONT SOON
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey guys im back ye i said no update till April 13th but i have a lil bit of time so heres part 4 :D.. and also casue INDIA won the SEMI finals so i got super happy lol ;p...
sinces im kinda busy i will reply to all ur lovley comments later but till then happy reading and keep posting your lovely thoughts and

Criticisms :D

Part 4 : Parents = Trouble for me

*Knock on the door*

A: come in 'turn's around and is shocked' Anni!!! You!!!... what are you doing here?

An: Armaan ( rolls her eyes) so much for saying hi'. And I don't understand why you are so shocked to see me'. relax I'm your mother and I can drop by my son's office to say hi'

A: (ya right I'm sure there's a catch you never have time to just drop by and say hi)

An: Any ways, I need to talk to you'

A: (rolls his eyes) what is it mom?

An: not now I don't have time to talk to you now I have a club meeting to get to ( smiles to her self)' so You and Atul come home at six' because your father and I have important matters to discuses

A: ( I knew it ugh what is this time)'.. what?... What's so important that you and dad need me home at six for?...

An: only time will tell ( gives her mysterious smile) ok boys got to run' me and my club members are going to be discussing about the new insurance plan.. so toodles'. And be on time ( and leave with that)

A: ( you never have time for anything but your club meetings mom' ugh' just once I wish that you and dad would realize that money and business is not everything' slumps on the chair and is super sad)

At: Hey buddy don't be disappointed ( knowing exactly how Armaan feels about his family)'. Come on get up were celebrating remember???

A: look at him and then back down' no Champ not today yaar I don't feel like it '. Anymore''.

At: too bad were still going ( and drags him out )

Mean while in Gupta residence''

Hurry up mom she will be here any moment now'.

P: yes Anjali, just give me a minute beta'

*door bell rings*

She's here yay!!!!!! ( anji runs to open the door)

Anj: Ridziii!!!!!!!!!!! Your finally here '. Omg I missed you so much.. and gives her a big tight hug'. How are you and how's Sid, abhi and muski' gosh I miss them and Paris''

R: diii I also missed you so much'. You have no idea'..and I'm fine and everyone there is fine as well.. and'. ( before she could continue her mom stops her)

P: Riddhima beta.. did you forget your mom while talking to your sister' hmm? Smiles at her

R: mommm!!!!! Psst' of course not' why on earth will I ever forget you' goes and gives her a big hug and both mother daughter shed some tears ( of course of happiness)'.

Anj: oh please no crying I hate tears'.

P: sorry I forgot' does Riddhimas arthi and brings her in'

R: smiles at her moms antics' hmm I feel like a new bride now all this arthi and all heheheh'.

P: Riddhima ! gives her a glare

R: whoops sorry bites her tongue.. looks around in her house and memories start to flash in her mind.. wow this place is exactly the same as it used to be' nothing changed at all'( talking more to her self)'. OMG mom where's NANI!!!???... is she is her room?...

At the mention of nani both Padama and anji look down as if hiding something'.

R: guys is everything ok? .. Slight tears forming in her eyes'

Anj: Ridzi' of course everything is ok'. Don't worry ok 'forget that right now you look so tired you should get some sleep and then we will talk later right mom?...

P: haan beta, go..go rest for a while'.

R: but.. but.. nani?

P: Riddhima ( in a strict voice)

R: fine '' (Ridzi comes out of the shower and is still very confused as to why no one is allowing her to meet her nani)' I mean what is wrong ' why cant I meet her?? Not fair'.. (She lies down on her bed and starts to think for possible loop holes in the whole nani is sick conversation she had with her dad)'. Oww all this thinking is hurting my head ' I will just go and ask mom and dad the reasons' but after a nice long nap'..( and with that she dozes off awaiting her answers)'''

Preview: Six o clock meeting''

PS: IF anyone wants a pm please add me to your buddy list... and hope you had fun reading wating for your lovley comments...slient reader plz hit the LIKE button :D
pss: if anyone has any questions feel free to ask :D.. and sorry for any mistakes didnt have time to proff read :p
Edited by sejal719 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
wonderful part!! like the suspense u added to it!! thankz for he pm!! waiting for you to continue!!
Edited by CT247 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
nice part ⭐️👏
loved it 😃
continue soon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56

nice part..

nw y his mom callled him..

n where is nani...

precap is interesting..

thnx for the pm..............

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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
great part!
lovd it =D
continue soon x
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
hey lovely ff
continue soon
pls add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey! awesome part!

plz add me to your pm list :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it...
thanks for the pm..
continue soon...

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