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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART ONE


We see the city of New York the citys look busy even in the time of 6 in the moring. The camra zooms up to a house the door of the house opens and we see a guy sleeping on the sofa with the tv on. The guys face is barried inside the pillow we hear a girl laugh in the back ground .Then we see were the laughing is comeing from it is from behind the sofa. The camra scans the girls body and finilly we see the girls face and it is no other than Kripa ,in Kripas hand we see a bucket full of water and Kripa is giggleing.

Kripa Sharma: Kripa Sharma living in New York and going to Oxford to study. Kripa is a nice loving girl who loves her dad and her brother a lot. Kripa tells her brother every thing that happens in her life but Kripa has one secret that even her brother dosn't know about and Kripa has been hiding this secret sence she was sixteen and now Kripa is 21 and is in last year of Oxford. Kripa has never gone to India or meet Angad before but knows that Angad live in India and is one of her brother best friends.

k-bhai please wake up

we hear the guy on the sofa gron and says

g-kripa so ne dona

We see kripa smile more

k-please bhai wake up

the guy still has his face barried in the pillow on the sofa

g-no iam not waking up

Kripa having a evil smile on her face

k-ok as you wish

Kripa dumps the bucket full of water on the guy. The guy wakes up with a jurk and we finally see the guys face and it is Prithiv. Prithiv seemed realy angry!

Prithiv Sharma: Prithiv Sharam is Kripas loveing brother. Prithiv cares for Kripa alot and can do anything for Kripa. Prithiv is also in love with a girl by the name of Aliaya Khanna. Prithiv met Aliaya because his dad and Aliayas dad are best frineds. Prithiv has going to India with Aliaya before and met all of Aliayas family and friends. Prithiv's best friend is Angad Khanna Aliaya brother. Prithiv is 25 years old

p-KRIPA!!!!!!!!

Prithiv gets up and starts to chaseing Kripa around the sofa

p-i am going to kill u Kripa

k-aaaahhhhh DAD!!! DAD!!!

p-why are u calling dad for even he can't save you now!

Prithiv finilly catched Kripa and he grab Kripa's hand and twisted it realy hard

k-aaahhhh dad help me

we hear a persons voice from behind Prithiv and Kripa. Prithiv lets go of Kripa and looks behind him it is Sulben Kripas dad!

Sulben Khanna: Sulben Khanna is a nice and loveing father who love his two childred the same. Sulben's best friend is Dillip Khanna even through he hasn't meet Dillip in 20 years Dillip and Sulben call each other every week and keep in touch all the time. Sulbens whife died giveing Kripa birth and for that reason Sulben dosn't like talking much about how Kripas mother

p-dad look at me iam totaly wet and it is all because of Kripa

s-Kripa what did you do

k-nothing dad Prithiv is just framing me

p-dad Kripa dumped water on me to wake me up

s-ha ha ha...nice one Kripa I should try that next time

p-DAD!!!!!!

s-ok sorry...Kripa promise you won't do that again

k-ok i won't do it again

s-KRIPA!!!!!

k-ok I Promise I wont do it again

s-that better

p-well I am going to go take a long shower...I have a date to day

k-let me guess the girls name is Aliaya Khanna!!!

Prithiv stops and turns around

p-how did you know?

k-well Dillip uncle called dad yesterday from India to ask if you will marry Aliaya

p-what..and what did you say dad

s-well I said that I didn't know and I will talk to you about it

p-what!!!dad why didn't you say yes u know how much I like aliaya

k-like bhai.....I was thinking love

s-stupid I was jokeing I said yes and your engement is with aliaya is in one week and dillip and angad are both come to new york tommrow

p-dad your the best

k-oh dad don't for get to tell bhai the best part

p-what is that kripa

k-well bhai after your engement you me and dad are going to go to India for 3 months untill your marriage with Aliaya

p-to much good news at one time

Prithiv starts to jokeing around and pretends to fall on the ground as if he is dieing

k-well if you want bad news I have some for you

Prithiv gets up from the floor

p-what is that

k-well I won't be able to see your engement because I have to go to Oxford Universtity and take a very important test and I can't excape from it I have to be there

p-well then I won't do the engement with out my sister there

s-Prithiv stop acting like a kid..Kripa will come to india 2 days after we reach India

p-well at least you will be there for my wedding...so when are you going to Oxford???

k-tommrow at 6 in the moring

p-darn you won't be able to meet Angad and Dillip uncle

k-well at least I met Dliaya bhabi already

p-ya ya what ever and oh yeah don't call her bhabi or i'll kill u cause she is not that old

Prithiv takes a shower and gose to meet Aliaya

Aliaya Khanna:Is a student in nNew York she has a brother Angad and a father Dillip and is in love with Prithiv she know Prithiv becaues of her dad and Prithiv's dad are best friends. Aliaya is 24 years old. Aliaya lives in India but came to New York for studys and ever sence then Aliaya and Prithiv have been dateing. Aliayas best friend is Kripa Prithivs sister

Aliaya is siting at a cafe waiting for Prithiv finally she sees Prithiv coming

al-Prithiv what took you so long

p-sorry(kiss aliaya on the cheek)but Kripa dumped water on me and then dad took such a long time to tell me about are engement and all

al-finally you found out about our engement

p-wait you already knew about are engement

al-ya i knew it about it for about a month

p-what??? how come no one ever tells me that kinda of stuff

al-(start laughing)let me guess you also didn't know that kripa isn't going to be at the engement...right

p-did you know that one month ahead too

al-no Kripa called and told me last night

p-god i really need to know whats going on in my family god i am sad

al-dont worrie about it

Prithiv and Aliaya had some coffe and then Prithiv droped Aliaya at her apartment then Prithiv went to the office

hope u like this part
night girl


Edited by night girl - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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lovely part...gr8 story...
plz cont. soon...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Yaar you were so rite...i definitely do like your surprise...now continue soon!! 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pooja922

Yaar you were so rite...i definitely do like your surprise...now continue soon!! 😆 😆 😆

glad you like the suprise 😛😆😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: night girl

glad you like the suprise 😛😆😃



yea i do...not continue naa?😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pooja922



yea i do...not continue naa?😭

ok ok no need to cry😆next part comeing in 2 min😃😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART TWO


while prithiv was in the office kripa was at home packing to go to Oxford after kripa was finish packing she when on the computer and started chating with someone by the screen name playboy and kripas screen name was kripaUSA

PLAYBOY-what up kripa

kripaUSA-hay its been along time sence i last chated with you

PLAYBOY-u live in the usa right

kripaUSA-ya

PLAYBOY-well iam going to new york for a week thought to ask you if there is any place fun to go to

kripaUSA-well there is the "night club" that place is fun

PLAYBOY-thanks

kripaUSA-no problem

PLAYBOY-hay we have been friends for a long time how about we meet in realy life

kripaUSA-i would but i am going to Oxford for a week and then India

PLAYBOY-how about we meet in India...iam going to the usa for a week and then back to india

kripaUSA-but i dont know any place in india i have never been there

PLAYBOY-well then after a week i will e-mail you were to meet me ok

kripaUSA-ok

the camra zooms out of the computer screen and we see that we are no longer looking in kripas room but we are look at the room of the guy by the screen name of PLAYBOY!!!! as the camra zooms around the room we see that the room is painted blue the room is realy messy with clothes all over the place then the camra faces the guy in frount of the computer screen and it is no other then angad. angad is are loving PLAYBOY!!!!!

angad khanna- angad khanna is a rock star just like in KYPH. angad love his sister and father a lot and can do any thing for them. angad is also just like a PLAYBOY always has a new girl friend every day. the longest angad has gone out with a girl was 48 hours (lol). angad knows the girl kripaUSA sence he was seventeen years old right now angad is 22 years old. angad knows every thing about kripaUSA . are loveing PLAYBOY also knows kripaUSA big secret that even prithiv dosn't know about. but still angad dosent know who kripa is were she live or any genral information about kripa like her last name or any thing like that

we hear someone call angads name from down stairs

person-ANGAD!!!!!

a-comeing dad

angad quickly say bye to kripaUSA

PLAYBOY-gtg chat to you later

kripaUSA-bye

as soon as angad logs off so dose kripaUSA. Angad quckly run down stairs and over there we see angads dad dillip khanna

dillip khanna-nice and loveing father who loves his children the same. dillips best friend is sulben sharma who lives in new york. dillips whife passed away 5 years ago around the time angad started chating with kripaUSA.

a-what happend dad

d-well i just got off the phone with sulben and he said that the sharmas are come to are house for three months untill aliaya gets married

a-thats great me and prithiv are going to have so much fun

d-ya and you will get a chance to meet kripa also

a-dad are you and sulben uncle trying to set me up with kripa

d-(has a o god how did he find out look on his face)maybe

a-dad!!! if i end up likeing kripa i will tell you ok

d-promise

a-dad you will be the first one to find out ok

d-ok

a-well dad i have to go to the recording studio to finish some work before we leave tommrow

d-come back soon you still have to finish packing

a-ok i will try to come back as soon as i can

angad runs out the door in to his red sports car (lol i thinking about buying my brother a car just like angads)angad reachs the studio were there are a lot of fans waiting to see angad come out of his hot shot red car as angads car enters the studio all the fans go run up to him yell "look there he is" angad greets his fan. most of the fans were girls. after about 10 mins with the fan angad finily gose inside the studio. there angad starts to flirt with one of the dance girls the girls name was sonia

a-whats up my darling sonia

s-nothing(shocked that angad the rock star is talking to her)

a-well if you are doing nothing then how about we go for luch togather

s-sure i love to(couldnt speak well because of angad so close to her and plus angad had his arms around sonia)

a-thats great (kiss sonia on the cheek and go to talk to his friends)

as angad left it looked like sonia was going to faint because of angad kissing her on the cheek. angad on the other hand was look around for his frined to tell him that he was going to the USA for a week. as angad look around for his friend we see angad looking at a guy flirting with a girl we cant see the guys face because his back is toward the girl. angad sees the guy and gose up to him as angad puts his hand on the guys shoulder angad says

a-what up yaar flirting with another girl

the guy turns around and it is no other then......

hope u like this part
night girl


Edited by night girl - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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another lovely part...
plz cont. soon...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow i lub u yaar that was amazing and i think its josh lol hmmm but lets see!continue soon! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: sateera_angad

wow i lub u yaar that was amazing and i think its josh lol hmmm but lets see!continue soon! 😊

how did you know 😆

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