Mayank&Nupur:With You...Last Part Pg 33

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kirti123

@kirti123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

😊wow

just superb writing

loving the story😊

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

aww... sajjal!

cute update....

aww.. poor nupur.... she's sufferin soo much!!!

Mayu.. already fallin 4 nupur..

luvd it!

continue soon!

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#53

fabulous update

gunjan was sooo naughty n caring...luved nupur n gunjan bond

the way u describe nupur n violin part was amazing....luved mayank eagerness n restlessness

beautifully written...

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

its been narrated beautifully ....seems like a classical story n tht im loving abt it

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Sania

@dynamic_doll

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

brilliant update Sajjal!

very well written 👏

Gunjan is soo naughty 😆

Nupur in mayank's arms 😳

waiting for the next update

continue soon

nd thnx for the pm 😊

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Gul

@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#56

Beautiful Really so beautiful

Must say amazing piece of writing

I am really feeling Nupur pain feeling so sad for her

Mayank is start Liking her interesting

Love gunur bond

thanks for Pm

cont soon

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#57

oh my God Sajjal what fabulous update hun

loved gunur bond

gunjan is such amazing human n sis

loved her wen she says thee words to her mom

'and you know why because i have come to realize that blood isn't the only way you get bonded to someone, there other ways also..like the heart and in my heart that same girl you despise is my elder sister so i will not have you bad mouthing her right infront of me.

thnks for quick update n the pm

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saraaa.

@saraaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#58

WOW! What a chapter .. Im speechless!!

The way youu ended it was ahhmazingg

Mayank's anxiousness is soo cutee and i like his relationship wiv Gunjan

The beginning was intense though!! Really wanna know more about Nupur as her current state is quite depressing .. im suree Mayank will be her man in armour <3

Ahh soo excited for the next chapter .. keep it up x

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MrsJaimeFraser

@MrsJaimeFraser

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Posted: 14 years ago

#59

i read both the parts right now Sajjal.......as cudn't get time earlier..............itz a FANTASTICALLY beautiful n heart-wrenching piece of writing....................nupur...what must she had gone trough that makes her try this drastic step evrytime............n the second part was LOVELY.............Mayank n his staring..............i bet he was taken in by her enigma n beauty..............seeing her in person was even more wonderful for him,isn't it??n i loved Mayank-Gunjan friendship too........adorable it is.........😊

do update soon ...............

waiting...

Debz.......