Ripped Apart ~2~ (Maaneet) part 22 updated - 28Mar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1111

Originally posted by: nahtani88
fantastic
cont soon

Thanks Nahtani

glad you enjoyed😳

Originally posted by: janu_2006
hey
gr8 part..

cont.sooon

Thanks Janu

I'm glad you liked it😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1112

Originally posted by: Teenage.dream
Yay! Finally you updated! OMG! I freaking LOVED IT!! ❤️
Throughout the beginning.. All the memories of his kept haunting her, giving the sign that he's here; giving the sign of his presense near her. simply WOW! 😃
Even Maan felt it as He saw all those flowers.. It reminded him of her!
And coming to flashback.. OMG! His words.. to take the promise from Geet to wait for him. All those dreams of getting married to his love are going to be shattered after only 2 months.. 😭
OK! I literally had a lump in my throat thinking about the separation.. I dont know If I'll be able to handle it once it happens.. 😭
Coming back to Present again.. The hotel scene! Their restlessness, their urge to have just one sight of one another!! IT's like beyond Wow!! LOVED that scene! ⭐️
OMG!! The ending.. THEY MET!! Ofoooo How will I be able to wait for the next part Sonia..
OMG! What If he missunderstands her!!? How will his reaction be!!? What if HE says something to her!!? She has just started to live in present.. OMG!
MILLIONS questions are going around in my head.. And I'm just DYING for your next update!!
I desperately wanna read the next one..
PLEASE Soni.. Plzz update soon..
And OPPS! I forgot!! What an update!! Beautifully written Sonia.. Just Superb!!! 👏

Hey Dearie...

thanks a ton😳

when two ppl r so bound to be connected with each other... they tend to sense each other's presence na😊... and so did Maan and Geet

the promise in the past was a sign of his insecurity... his intuition... the nagging ffeling of his heart about being away from her... so there it came from sometimes times and circumstances don't spare anyone... but then here they'll be together in the end...

the separation has already happened na dear... the past will now just show wat and how the MUs crept up😕

his reactions and hers too will come up in the next part... will try to post it soon😳

glad you enjoyed the update

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1113

Originally posted by: puth
lovely update Sonia.......
finally maaneet met.....but gal you stopped at the cliffhanger we have been waiting for😭

Thanks dear...

glad you enjoyed😳

wat could i do... it was running so long😆

Originally posted by: ashvinisharma
Yaar i waited for a whole week for ur update it s nice no words its excelent. Waitin for next update

Sorry Ashvini to make you wait but i was really not up to it😕

glad that u enjoyed it finally

Thanks a ton😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1114

Originally posted by: sakadafi
And they meet!!!! Let's see what the confrontation brings forth....I expect there'll be one or will she simply run???? hmmm 😍

Yes dearie... they finally meet😆

lets c wats in there for the confrontation...

glad you enjoyed... thanks😃

Originally posted by: Miss-Riz
That was Awsome but continue soon with the next part :)

Thanks Riz

glad you enjoyed😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1115

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever
Ohhhhhh my master of emotions is back.....yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy 😃
as always u have kept a perfect combo of happiness and sorrow with the past and present...

ok...we shall talk about the past first cause that's my favourite part....

firstly...the sunset was so so simple yet perfect...u probably know my weakness for sunsets due to Blind Love but this scene was just...perfect...i don't know how to explain but it was my fav scene in the entire update...

and second fav was when he proposed...oh..i loved it...

and then the scene with Nt when Maan walks in and tells her off...seriously..i was grinning like a fool.....

now coming to the present...

i loved the way they could feel a connection...u know how they felt a change in the atmosphere even though they didn't know the other was there....

i was so disappointed when geet fainted and she couldn't meet Maan...and i was like Sonia is so dead if they don't meet...

but they did meet....i love Vicky for that...

OMGGGG...did i tell u how excited i am about the next part?? i can't wait...

p.s i am not pulling ur leg...i chose the name : master of emotions very seriously.......but i won't use it if u don't like it...

Hey Reya...

thanks a loads dearie😳

hmm the perfect balance is going to go for a toss for the next couple of updates as u see the past is all moving towards the sad end and the present... well there's lot of water under the bridge😆

yup... blind love😍... this couple brings on the magic😆

yea i wanted to see that scene... enjoying comfortable silence is as important as talking na😃

i have no suicidal tendencies dear... i knew i would be signing a death pact without letting them meet in this one😆 thanks for the such beautiful comments... i m humbled😃

Love you Reya😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1116

Originally posted by: punjabi.princes
awesome update
they finally meet

hope they don't he just does not walk away in anger or she act professional or run away

con't soon!

Thanks Princess

yup they finally meet😃

will continue soon

Originally posted by: sweet coco
OMG! OMG! OMG!!! This was so good!!!

I loved loved loved the beginning and the past....uff kya proposal tha...absolutely beautiful!!!

And they meet, well almost....but looking forward to the next update....fireworks for sure!!!!!!!! This is looking so good!!!!

Vicky...the sweetheart totally love him!

And maan...he's so sad and I don't like it.... standing by the cliff and all depressed remembering her....so glad he saw her!!!!

Loved it....please update soon!

Hey Coco... thanks ton sweetie😃

i wanted to make that proposal memorable before they were actually ripped apart temporarily though😃

yes now they meet... Maan is going to be difficult now😕 and Vicky will do his best to help them😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1117

awesome...js speechless....can't wait for next....pls update soon...!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1118

Originally posted by: simi91
i hope ur feeling better
wow love how maaneet

scene each other

poor geet didnt follow

her instinct when she

got vickrant is vicky

anu she is real a loyal

friend to geet uff what

wrong with arjun when

yu love someone yu can

go any length to help ur

lover happy but him he

snap at her

poor geet wanted to avoid maan

but to bad they saw each other

face to face but me wonder

why was vicky lough

super fabulous update

my dear real damn good

writer pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnn

thanks pm

Thanks a ton Simi... i'm feeling on the brighter side now😃

glad you enjoyed the maneet moments😳... yup but if Geet would have followed her instincts she wouldn't have still been here na😆

Arjun is upset over Anu for thinking about Geet all the time😡

yea... now the duo is in front of each other... vicky was laughing? nah dear... he was just smiling at Geet

Originally posted by: raman1921
Loved it cannot wait to read the next update what will be mann reaction towards her please update soon...

Raman

Thanks Raman😃

I'm glad you have enjoyed the story

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1119

oh esha.. that was the best meeting ever...

whever u try to hide from someone so much.. u will fall directly in front of him!!!!

now we can hope everything will become right!!!

so cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1120

Originally posted by: undisclosed
you did it again....you are weaving this story between past and present so beautifuly....am i reading this right?...arjun and nt are partners?...or did i misinterpret his comment to nt?...i cannot wait for the next one now...maan and geet are face to face now...that is it i need to remind myself to breath...update soon please!

Thanks a ton Slyvia 😳

i'm glad tht u enjoying the shift from present to past and vice versa

About Arjun.... well u need to see that😆... yup kindly breathe😃