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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for al the love & support… UPDATING :D
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happy 😛
but surprised though...... that... u r about to update engima😊

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wowww ur going to update this first🥳
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***Enigma***
part 10
pls do comment & press the like button' ty for all the love and suport
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well back… i wasn't sure which one to update…
this or paradox… then eveantually… heheh
well here you go… I DEMAND COMMENTS… PLS…
then i will see if i want to update 2mx as well..
lol
soxy…
heheh
jk

hope you all like this…
if i get time will update 2mx as well… :D
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Life couldn't be more painful then the absence of my mother. What was her fault? I scream my hart out again. What was her fault. Her mere presence in this despicable earth. Where people made out of the rotten matter of the garbage. Where human address as a monster. A sick monster I would say. A unbearable, a incurable disease they Cary. Carry to murder you. Carry to snatch the last beat of hope. The last beat of presence of human. The last beat of presence of your dignity. This was the image that was readily available in my mind. I could imagine the unknown pain. I could imagine the disgusting world with my close eyes. My childhood was nothing better then the dog on the road. I would say wars. Life is venerable. Life is endurable. I was afraid. Afraid of the violent fact that I may see. In any particular way it never made it easy or wars. It kept in the same momentum. & still is. My life couldn't face the last phase because it have already reached it's edge. It was point of breaking. Point where I will destroy everyone to satisfy the storm that showed no sign of stopping. Why? why would I want this to stop? It's giving me the great power to fight the disgusting, unbearable creatures. Yes! Yes I bare them. They make me feel sick. There ordure. It's horrifying. I rather commit suicide then bare that unbearable smell.
My thought again was disturbed by my sibling. It's been one month! Police have failed to bring out the truth or to locate my mother. I am waiting. I am waiting for the day. The doctor report have shown she had been going through heavy internal bleeding. Mr Handa have failed to take her to the hospital on time. They were suspecting him for the missing of my mother. What to suspect? Of course it was this disgraceful man. He deserves not to be called a man. He deserves no forgiveness. I am in London now. A urgent travel. I have rome round the town. Giving out flyers. I have failed. Miserably. No one ever saw her. I have reported this mr Handa. I knew he is culprit. I could say that with my close eyes. No need proof. There was no evidence that is leading to him but my suspecting was enough. Police didn't want to take any chance. They have agreed with me.
I am due back to India by twomoro. My flight is in few hours.
Police- any information we find. I will let you know instantly.... I looked at the police with my red eyes. I node. There was nothing much I could do. Or I could possibly think. Everything was in mess.
Raji- Di! I can't take too many day off from school. My exam is coming up soon.... I smiled & node. They have no clue about the fact. I have left the twins with Shila. But raji was insisting to see some of her old friends....


London khurana-


Dr came in. He is worried about ranos internal bleeding. Due to this she had short time memory lost. Which seems to be back to normal. Rano having hard time to convince this unknown man to let her go. He was not convince of her safety to this man she calls his husband. The bruges that became black now have clearly showed it's been done by a man. On purpose.
Maan- I won't listen. I can't leave you alone here. You have to come to India with me!
Rano- I can't beta! My daughters & son will be worried sick!
Maan- we can give them a call once we are in India. You have mentioned they are in India right.
Rano- yes but!
Maan- then it's final!
A man walks in.
Man- hello sir. I am from the passport office.
Maan- yes. I need a urgent passport for this lady to go to India. By today!
Rano looked at him. Shocked. He looked very powerful. & rich. Why would he help her! & there... She doesn't even know the number of her children phone! How will she contact. That brutal man have destroy everything... Just because they used to keep in touch for my well being.


4:00 am...

Geet & Rajji sat at the airport. Only a day left of her so called holiday! Mr maan sing khurana will be back at work! Along with his detectives. She still did not believe her mom was dead. She cursed that word. In no way she will give up the fact. She believe this is the fact.

Maan & Rano walks in along with security guards. Rano her self was not sure that why she was listening to this young man. Somewhere she trusted him. But... Her trust... If you say husband, father or brother it's always have been broken. This young man was no different. But maybe she is going of hope of seeing her daughter. Geet. She done a big mistake of not going along with her. A very big mistake. What will be going through her. She wondered.

Raji- Di!
Geet- ha..... She was lost. Lost in the thought of her mother. Lost in the thought the saver damage that horrifying man have done to her. He had no regret. No shame. Why? She always ask! Why? Was her mom this blind.

Ironic. Maan & Geet were in the same plane. Maan in business class & geet economic. Ironic that they haven't seen one another. Ironic that they failed to realise even after they could here one an others voice. What maan to think? It could not be geet. She was from village. Not fluent in speaking English. Thanks to her fake husband he was in complete illusion that she is married. A happy family with kids. & for Geet. She was lost in her mother thought.


Maan & Rano arrives at khurana house. Dadima greets. There was no Vicky to be seen. Luckily.
Dadi- at last you two are here. Rano looks at maan. Bit petrified.
Maan- "don't worry. I have told everyone everything. This is my Dadima. Mom!" Maan closes his eyes instantly. "I am sorry!"
Rano- "it's ok beta. You can call me mom."... I miss that word. She cried.
Dadima instantly took her in embrace. Comforting her. Maan felt helpless. It's a mother heart after all. What more he could do.

Next day...

Geets normal day is back. Back to her typical abnormal office. She loves her job but hates her boss. & ironic he had some attraction towards this married girl! Women! Maan corrects him self.
Geet was simple today. Her eyes were puffy. It was clearly visible she was crying. Maan looked at her in concern! Have that filthy husband of her misbehaved. He have enough experience from his mother/ ranos experience.

Pinky- are geet! What's wrong with your eyes?
Geet- no! No! Nothing serious. It's... Just...
Pinky- was your holiday alright?

Maan was over hearing there conversation. "holiday! What holiday? Do anyone seriously consider me as there boss!"

Geet- holiday was great. She smiles sadly.
Pinky- it dosn't look like...
Geet- anyway. I have lots of work to do. I will take a leave. Geet walk pass maan. No realigastion of his mere presence.
Maan- mrs Geet.
Geet stops & looks at him.
Maan- you were on holiday? Who have approved that?
Geet- sorry sir. I already have asked for this holiday months back. You have signed & approved my holiday sheet.
Maan looks at her. Half confused.- alright. I want you in my office. We have some work to clear.
Geet- yes sir.

Geet makes her way in to maans office. This whole month of way from her seems to go in vain. No matter what he does, everything seems to end in geet. If he takes now for a example. He had no major work to finish or do. But still he calls her in his cabin... Discusing work thats deadline is 2 months way. He wondered what this married girl was doing to him. Then comes her puffy eyes. That gave him wild imagination. Very wild. Why? How? Who? Where? Did that husband forced her!... Tere was no explanation of his worry. But Rano seems to give him most disgusting thought. The violent situation she went through... Somewhere he didn't want Geet to face the same. Something was eating him. Deep within. The fact also someone els touching her! Eventhough it's her husband it startted to hurt his man ego! What he was thinking. She have 3 kids! Why would that matter! Why all thought comes up to physical attraction! He ignored the thought completly.... Showing clearly what men must think about most of the time!
Maan- what's wrong with your eyes?
Geet looks up. Again with his detectives- Nune of your business sir. It's personal. I would like to keep it as a personal.... Maan wa taken back with her cold attatude. She usually will take it in a different way to avoid any type of personal question but now!
Maan- sorry!
Geet- no! It's alright sir! I was rather rude. I am bit tensed. It will be nice if you just talk about work. Geet kept her self calm. She only comes here for work. Nothing els.
Maan- yes. We have allot of meeting pilled up this months. We have to travel from office to office! Are you alright with it?
Geet- yes. I would like to point out that my work time is back to normal like your any other empolye. I won't take any break to pick my kids up. My husband have offered to do this. So my work time is from 9am to 7pm. I hope you already know this. I have spoken go Adi sir.
Maan- yes! Yes! Adi have mentioned.
Geet- thank you.

It was long day. Geet left the office at 7. Flowed by maan.
Maan- would you like me to drop you home?... Geet was tiared & had no intention of help.
Geet- I am alright sir! Thank you!
Maan- are you sure?
Geet- yes!

Few days of cold geet have passed. Maan kept cool until she was back to normal. He was curious to know her up & down mood. & his weird attraction toward this married girl.





*THANKS for all the love & support…

next- maan drops geet home…😲
worried when he remembers about rajjis word😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update.....so now i guess maan will come to know of truth....he will start off with his detective antenna.....lolz...
Edited by JayaR - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Full of emotion.
Lovely update.
I love this Ff. You have touch of everything.
Thankyou you for the lovely Ff.
Live the way you have typed.

Life couldn't be more painful then the absence of my mother. What was her fault? I scream my hart out again. What was her fault. Her mere presence in this despicable earth. Where people made out of the rotten matter of the garbage. Where human address as a monster. A sick monster I would say. A unbearable, a incurable disease they Cary. Carry to murder you. Carry to snatch the last beat of hope. The last beat of presence of human. The last beat of presence of your dignity. This was the image that was readily available in my mind. I could imagine the unknown pain. I could imagine the disgusting world with my close eyes. My childhood was nothing better then the dog on the road. I would say wars. Life is venerable. Life is endurable. I was afraid. Afraid of the violent fact that I may see. In any particular way it never made it easy or wars. It kept in the same momentum. & still is. My life couldn't face the last phase because it have already reached it's edge. It was point of breaking. Point where I will destroy everyone to satisfy the storm that showed no sign of stopping. Why? why would I want this to stop? It's giving me the great power to fight the disgusting, unbearable creatures. Yes! Yes I bare them. They make me feel sick. There ordure. It's horrifying. I rather commit suicide then bare that unbearable smell.
My thought again was disturbed by my sibling. It's been one month! Police have failed to bring out the truth or to locate my mother. I am waiting. I am waiting for the day. The doctor report have shown she had been going through heavy internal bleeding. Mr Handa have failed to take her to the hospital on time. They were suspecting him for the missing of my mother. What to suspect? Of course it was this disgraceful man. He deserves not to be called a man. He deserves no forgiveness. I am in London now. A urgent travel. I have rome round the town. Giving out flyers. I have failed. Miserably. No one ever saw her. I have reported this mr Handa. I knew he is culprit. I could say that with my close eyes. No need proof. There was no evidence that is leading to him but my suspecting was enough. Police didn't want to take any chance. They have agreed with me.


Edited by BadGirlKiss - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks for the long update
so much of emotions
glad that rano is in India under detective Maan😆
he would sure find out about geet some way or the other
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Posted: 14 years ago
Love how maan call rano mom... So touching.... It's strange how strangers become great help when ur own don't care about u.... Poor rano..... At least now there is chance for geet to meet rano as she is in india..... Precap is interesting 😆 .... Update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
gr8 update
Want Maan 2 tke Geet 2 KM so she can see her mum
Cont soon Xx...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yaar ye raaz kab khulega?!

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