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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
👏⭐️
heyyy!!!!
firstttt i loveeddd ittt!!! :))
it connected soooo much to youu! (:
second happyyy birthdayyy!👏
thirdd i cant believe its ur first try!!!!
i love d firsttt line, nd d way she checks google etc!
i like d way u show them sooo lost in each other,
nd phrases like 1% my armaan! cant b ur first!!
its reallyy cutely written!!!
i love how he can read her,
excatly when she woke up!
both r earlyyy!
how he always took care of her makin sure d first was simple!
how scared she got cause of a small cut!
their bahana,
goooglee was realllyy cutte!
so basicallyy on d whole it was reallyy good
⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
btw its understtooddd i need to knoo before u postt!
nd alsoo forgot to mention thanks for dedicatin it to me!
it was sooo sweet of u!
nd also sorry got late to read it!!
but whts better than readin on ur birthdayy!
nd waitin for ur nexttt parttt!! :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: devanshi_

👏⭐️
heyyy!!!!
firstttt i loveeddd ittt!!! :))
it connected soooo much to youu! (:
second happyyy birthdayyy!👏
thirdd i cant believe its ur first try!!!!
i love d firsttt line, nd d way she checks google etc!
i like d way u show them sooo lost in each other,
nd phrases like 1% my armaan! cant b ur first!!
its reallyy cutely written!!!
i love how he can read her,
excatly when she woke up!
both r earlyyy!
how he always took care of her makin sure d first was simple!
how scared she got cause of a small cut!
their bahana,
goooglee was realllyy cutte!
so basicallyy on d whole it was reallyy good
⭐️



hiii!!!
omg i ma so glad you loved it!!!!
thank you!!
its tecnically not my first but still! haha!! lol!!
dude, i did special editing for you!!
you know what ever you loved i kind off guessed that you would love those stuff only!!!
armaan is just awesome!!
ans so is riddhimaaaa!!
hehe!!!
i am so so happy that you loved it!!!!
reading you comment again and again lol..
i still dont belive i told you so late..
but i did so ya!!!!
😛
crazyforkaran thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: devanshi_

btw its understtooddd i need to knoo before u postt!

nd alsoo forgot to mention thanks for dedicatin it to me!
it was sooo sweet of u!
nd also sorry got late to read it!!
but whts better than readin on ur birthdayy!
nd waitin for ur nexttt parttt!! :D



😊
this is only a dedication..
next one toh will be...
you know what!!
its okay , i am glad you liked it!!
i know!!!
i am still waiting for you!! come fast here!!
i knowww.. even i desperatly want to write the next os!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
hey
It was awesome ...Loved it ...Ridhima is really cute.. your story brought so many memories of DMG... Do PM me whenever you write something on AR.
Hope you do that soon.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: shonagudia

hey
It was awesome ...Loved it ...Ridhima is really cute.. your story brought so many memories of DMG... Do PM me whenever you write something on AR.
Hope you do that soon.😊


THANKS..
glad you like it!!
aww, im glad i could do that!!
yeah sure i will..
devanshi_ thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
im just checkin if u posted nd dint temme againn! :P sooo pleasseee dooo continuee !!!!!!!!! sooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: devanshi_

im just checkin if u posted nd dint temme againn! :P sooo pleasseee dooo continuee !!!!!!!!! sooon


Haha!! No no, chill.. Ill tell you this time surely!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
just read this today...it was so cute..ridhima is so innocent n armaan what we can say about me..he is everyone's jaan here...do write more n continue soon...:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
pls add me to ur buddy list i sooo love this ff :)

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