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Part 3


LOCATION MALL
...
here rajji selected sum dresses for her...
geet - finally u r done...ab mere liye kuchh t-shirts dekhte hai chal..
rajji - no ways...mumma ne bola hai ke did ke liye kuchh sarees select karna...
geet rolled her eyes...
geet - ohh...not again...
rajji - lets go...
geet made a face...
geet - arre haan...me to tujhe batana hi bhool gayi thi...me b na bilkul zalli hu...wo mumma ka phone aaya tha..ke jab wo sath hongi tab sarees dekhenge abhi philhal t-shirts dekh lete hai...

rajji showed her d call from mumma...
rajji - jab tum wo khel rahi thi..kya keh rahi thi..aisi barish me to kisika ka b man karega jhoom utheneka...
...
geet makde funny face..
rajji -
tab mumma ka phone aaya tha ke tere liye sarees hi loo..koi bahana nahi chahiye...
geet -
aye lo...me to majak kar rahi thi...wo kay hai na...mere pass jyada nayi t-shrts bachi hi nahi hai...
rajji - didi..hum abhi veerji ki shadi ke shopping kar rahe hai...payjama party ke liye nahi...
...
geet -
yah right...!!!!
rajji -
dnt tell me..ke aap shadi ke functions me b wo phati jeans aur wo pote jaise t-shirts pehen ne wale ho...
n strts laughing...
geet too strts laughing...

rajji draggs her to saree collections...
...
geet was a bit less interested in sarees dan rajji...
she was just glancing d sarees...
not liking any1...
rajji chose sum of dem...
n asked her to try it...
geet -
ha ha...achha joke hai...
rajji -
didi...
geet -
rajji...etni sarees pehente pehente yahi raat ho jayegi...
rajji -
achha..to isme se koi ek select karlo...
geet selected 1
d saree was white brasso saree wid black ending n black designing...
smooth like silk...
shining in black n white shades...
...
geet moved to trial room...

here maan meets anwesha...
anwesha was stuck in between sum dresses...
very confused..which to take n which to not...
maan -
kya baat hai..tumne etni jaldi kyu bulwaya...sab thik hai na...
anwesha -
kuchh thik nahi he bhai...
maan got tensed... -
wat happend
anwesha -
ye dekho na..mujhe kuchh samajh nahi aa raha...konsi lu aur konsi nahi...
maan rolled his eyes...in anger...

anwesha made a cute face -
plz bhai...
...
maan sits beside her...
picked 1 red dress from it...
d moment he touched d dress...
he imagined her wearing d same dress...
his eyes melted in her looks..
...red dress..red lipstick..red cheecks...
he sizzled wid a single thout of her...
...MAAN SINGH KHURANA n colors...loLLL
...
he hidingly kept it beside...
picked another 1...a blue colored dress wid light designs...
he advised annie to try it...
annie too liked it..
she moved to trial room...
..
he immediately picked up dat red dress in his hand...
smelled d dress softly...
he felt as if he is feeling her...
he immediately bought dat dress b4 annie cums...
...
he waited for annie to cum out...
she was taking too much time...
...

here geet was trying her saree...
almost done wid saree...
she made d pallu small sized resting on her shoulder...
giving full view of her waist...
which made her look more sizzling n sexy...
black sleeveless blouse...
she was looking nothing less dan a princess...
she came out trial room...
n moved out of place to rajji...
d moment she left...
maan came in from other side looking for annie...
he stood frozen...

he could feel sumthing...
but not understanding wat was it...
he closed his eyes...
he undertood was was he feeling...
he was feeling her smeel...
which he nvr smelled b4 but still he could make out it was her...
he searched for her...
but she was not dere...
he stood d same place...
called annie..
anwesha - haan bhai..bass 2 min..me aa..
maan -
annie mujhe kuch jaruri kaam hai..me office ja raha hu...
n cuts d call..
anni shaking her head... -
bhai b na..har waqt kaam...
...
maan walked towrds lift...
unaware of d fact dat...
his life is waiting for him in d lift...

he gets in d lift..
lift was empty...
he looked opposite to door...
giving his glance outside through d glass...
for one look of her...
he knew how can she b dere...??
but his heart was over powering his brain...
...
geet saw d lift getting closed...
her life is closing in d form of a lift...
she ran towrds lift...
lift was about to close..
she hold d door to get in...
she get in...

he smelled her...
closed his eyes thinking of her...
but could not make out where is she...????
she was in her own world...
she sighed in relief dat she got d lift...
small small happiness alwz mattered a lot for her...
her heavy breaths made him sealized dat she is dere...
close to him...
he was turns to meet her eyes...

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
omg its so good...keep updating hehe
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
CONTINUE SOON... I NEED THE PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww
verty interesting yaar..
pls con soon :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome update

Loved it

loved maan's restlessness

loved the sister scene

Can't wait 4 da next part

Con soon

Thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG
Awesomeeeee
loved it
please can u add me to the pm list
thank u soo much
Edited by maangeetcrazy - 14 years ago
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omg amazing....................jaldi update karo na yaar................cant wait for their meeting
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice continue soon and add me to your pm list.
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Part 4


LOCATION LIFT

he was about to turn to look into her...
a big sound came..😉.
lights went off...
d lift stucked between two floars..
dere was nothing but d drakness in d lift..😲.😲..
...
geet got scared..😭.😭..
hugged d only person in d lift.😉.😛.
burrying her face in his chest...
her hands snaking him tightly..😳.😳..
eyes tightly closed...
...
maan shivered wid her touch..😛.😛.
stood mesmerized wid her soft skin...
he knew it was her..👏.👏.his life...
but he could never think she vil ever touch him...
he was frozen at d place..🥱..
her high breaths were falling on his chest through his shirt...
her hands tightened around him...
she softly whiepred - mujhe darr lag raha hai..😭.
...
her words fall on his chest melting his heart.😉.😛..
his hands automatically moved towrds her...
his 1 hand snaked her waist..😳.😛...her bare waist..😛.😳..a soft petal
he could make out she was in saree...
her skin felt like a silk cotton for him...
he would hav never touched sumthing so smooth...
his another hand moved over neck...
inside her hairs.😉...to d scalp...which was even more smooth...
pulling her closer.😛..
wid his cheen touching her head,...
he closed his eyes...
he wanted to feel every moment of it..😛.😳.
he wanted to feel her more
he knew it was her...
he didn't need to watch her face for knowing her...
his heart punded for her...
his heart beats deepened...
her beats slowly strted getting normal wid his warm...
she felt secured...
she loosed her eyes a bit..still closed...
rubbing her cheeck on his chest..😳.😛..
as if she knew him from yrs...
she whispered - mujhe andhere se dar lagta hai..😭.
maan whispered in her ear - shhh..😳.😳.me hu na...
...
her grip tighttened...
he was getting tickles 😉as if sum rose petals were teasing his body..😉.
he too grabbed her gaining her warm...
a soft smile traced on his lips...
eyes closed..
feeling her to d core...
holding his life in his arms...
he nvr felt so calm b4...
his hand on her waist.😛.😛.strted tracing slowly...
wid his another pulling her more n more...
she felt sumthing completed her...
...
Suddenly d reality stuck her...
she moved away in fraction of sec...
pushing him away...
maan litle taken aback...
geet - m sorry..😲.😲.
...
dere was so much of darkness...
both could see each other...
she was scared...
1st wid darkness n den hugging a starnge person...
her blackberry mobile fell from her hand on floar...
...
her eyes were filled.😭.😭.
he could make it out wid her voice...
he knew she was scared...
geet was shivering...
he scared a bit..😕.
tears strted rolling of her eyes.😭.
geet - m sorry..mujhe andhere se bahot darr lagta hai..kuchh karo na plz..kuchh..😉.
...
maan immediately put his finger on her lips.😛.😛..
she shivered wid his touch...
he felt her lips as if two rose petals.😳.😳..silky ever...
he could barely watch anything...
geet slowly spoke- plzzz..😊.
her words made her lips rub on his finger..😉.
he pulls her towrds him in a jerk...
grabbing her petal soft waist wid his hand...
sticking her to his strong body...
she flattered 😲her eyes...
she could barely see anything...
but she could feel d burn in his touch...
she was just a inch away from him...
he slowly moved his finger away from her lips...
she breathd highly...
which drive him even more...
...
he took out his mobile from pocket..another blackberry..
still holding her tight to him...
puts d light on her face.😳..
...
n he saw her...
she seemed nothing less dan a angel...his angel..just his...
her lips seemed more pink dan anything possible.😛.
her almond eyes were flattering wid not understanding wat is happening...
he moved his mob to her hairs...
dose curly strands teasing her face..😊.
her skin...
was soft...or softest dan anything possible...
...
he could smell her...
he felt as if he is dreaming...
is dat possible...
can sumthing be so delicate😛 in dis world.😛..
his hand slowly loosed her waist a bit..thinking she may get hurt wid his touch...
his soft touch tickled her mind..
she closed her eyes..
she was totally unaware of wat was hapening...
watever b but she liked it...
maan's gaze remained on her...
she still didn't watch him...
d light of mobile on her eyes wre disturbing her seeing anything..😉.
she felt as if she unconditionally belonged to sum1 she never seen...
his heart thudded..😳..
his hand lose her waist softly...
still gazing her madly...
he would hav never asked for sumthing dan it...
n dnt want also..
he just wanted to see her.😛.just her.😛.only her..😛.
he was not getting enough of her...
he didn't blincked even 1ce...
she didn't protest a bit...
...
he moved closer to her face...
her eyes were still closed...
he moved closer to her lips...
she could feel his breaths on her lips.😳.

she turned in a jerk...
facing opposite to him...
d sudden move of her...made d mob fall on d floar from his hand..
sumthing else also fell...
both didn't bothered to see wat it was..
...
again d lift became darker...
he smiled.😊.😉.
she was again scared wid d drakness allover..😲.
he can make it out from her breaths...
maan whispered - etna dar lagta hai.😛..
geet whispered - haan.😲.
...
...

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IMP - reader, i need good response from u all...d lack of likes n comments every time in every update of any story makes me sad...n i dnt feel like updating...if u want more n more updates from me...dnt forget to like n comment..it takes a sec to LIKE n a min to COMMENT..dnt i deserve a min or ur time aftr d update ??...i request all silent readers to listen to my request !! THNQ !!

love
MishTy

Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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today i read your article wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww yaar keep it up.

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