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Aaksha

@princess.rocks

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Posted: 14 years ago

#301

waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting

update soooooooooooooon 😊

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Angelic_mishty

@Angelic_mishty

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Posted: 14 years ago

#302

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Part 22

she was in so hurry...she didn't even think of him...coz expecting him in colge is nxt to impossible...she knew...
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NO much crowd anywhere...
all d areas got lonesum
"ohh god..lec start ho gaya...me to aaj mar gayi...me..."
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ohh goddd...
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he pulled her in a jerk...
making her back sticking his chest...
and his hand...snaking from her waist to her stomach...
her eyes popped wid sudden act...
she was shocked...surprised..happy..nervous...
every expression was oozing from her face...
she never required any proof to recognize him...
her heart beat went faster n faster...
she was happy like anything...
every beat of her heart knew..dat its him..only he could do dis to her...
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he was happy..delighted...mesperized..to hav her in his arms...his life in him...
he grabbed her more tightly from back..resting his head on her hairs...
her smile widened...
she didn't care about d lec..colge..frndz..anything...
nothing seemed to bother her at dat moment...
all she wanted is to stay in dat moment enjoying his ownership on her...
she was happy she is near him..d way she alwz like...
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he slowly came to senses...
looked at her from back...
she was wearing d dress he gifted...
omg...wat a perfect return gift...
he stood frozen...
wen he bought dat dres...he imagined of her wearing it...but now she was actually wearing d dress n dat to for him...
he didn't get a single word to express himself...
her red lipstick..red dress..red cheek...she looked like a fresh red rose...
may b softer dan dat...
his hand grabbed her litle gently wid d fear of making her hurt...
he couldn't believe yet...she actually wore dat dress...
how on earth vil he b able to express his feeling 2day...
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location class

lec was started...
group were chichating from last banches...
ranbir - aye nishu...ye geet 10 min boli thi..abhitak nahi aayi...
nisha - tu kab se uski baat par vishwas karne laga...aaj to wo gayi kaam se...
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annie - ye mayank...etne aage kyu baitha hai...
nupur find her odd all d time asking about mayank n mayank...
but she ignored it...
nupur - wo mayank ko aage baithna pasand hai...hamesha se...
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nisha - kya yaar..geet abhitak nahi aayi...
ranbir - me usse call karta hu...ruk...
nupur - abbe...pagal ho gaya hai..sir ko pata chala na to tu gaya..aur tera cell b...
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annie - try kar ke dekhna...
ranbir took out his mobile to call geet...
d same moment his mob rang...

SHEILA...SHEILA...SHEILA...
music...
SHEILA...SHEILA...SHEILA...
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he immediately cut d call...totally terrified...
all class started laughing loudly...
ranbir started making faces...
roflll
teacher came dere fuming...
ranbir half dead...sir wo...
teacer - mahoday...ye sheila sheila kya hai...
ranbir - sir wo...actually...
a boy from class - ha bol bol.ye sheila kon hai...
all started laughing again...
ranbir - haan..sir meri masi ka naam sheila hai..wo london gayi hai...to mujhe unki cafi yaad aa rahi thi...esliye me ye ringtone rakh li...mene sahi kiya na sir...
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all were mutely enjoying...
teacher - ohh...dats sad..i hope wo jaldi vapas aa jaye...ok..sit down...
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another boy - sir..meri b masi ka naam sheila hai..to kya me b...
teacher - kyu nahi..jarur...
all class - thnqqq sirrr...
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n den on n on...

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...GEET N MAAN...

geet was still in his embrace from back...
she softly closed her eyes whispering - aap...
a smile teased his lips...
he came near her ear from back whispering - kal raat mene kaha tha ke etna khubsurat lagane ka haq kisiko b nahi...par ab shayad ye keh du..etni khubsurat to sirf GEET hi lag sakti hai...meri GEET...
OMG...her blush n happiness was nowhere to stop 2days...
she was happy..mesmerized...lost in his love words...
dat was d perfect word to praise her...she thout...she vil never need a word more dan dat
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she blushed wid a soft smile...
her rose petal like lips seemed more delicate to him...
she still didn't think of once to see his face...
she never needed it...
his heart was enough proof for her dat she is his..only his...
maan slowly carrased her earlobe wid his lips...
she was tickled wid his touch...again closed her eyes...
he loved watching his effects on her...
he whispered again - me bardasht nahi kar sakta...ke mere alava koi aur tumhe dekhe...
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his words...sticked on her heart...
she loved him...his every single words...his dominance..his ownership on her...
as she belonged to him forever...
geet whispered - aap mujhe chhupa ke to nahi rakh sakte na...
maan dominantly - me tumhare sath kuchh b kar sakta hu...
n bit her ear...
she moaned - ouchhh...
his heart sinked wid her single moan...
he scared as if he hurt her...
he kissed her ear softly..carrasing it...
geet loved his behaviour...attitude at 1 sec..n caring at another 2nd...
he whiepered - dard to nahi ho raha...
geet smiled - me etni najuk b nahi...
maan smiled at her words..grabbing her more n more...as if dey know each other from yrs...
...
wat kind of relationship dey shared...
dey both couldn't understand...
wat was it wid dem...
dey hardly know each other from 2 days...
but dey behave as if dey r together from yrs...
dey knew every beat of each others...
...
deir hug deepened...
dey were so lost in each other...
nothing seemed to matter for dem...
dey both got scared dey may just melt in each other...
maan left her at once...
looking opposite to her...
she didn't turn to see him...
she alwz trusted him more dan herself...
...
both were standing facing deir backs...
geet - aap mere liye aaye the...
MAAN SMILED STILL LOOKING OPPOSITE...
maan - nahi..me kuchh aur kaam se aaya tha...
geet naughtily - jhoot mat boliye...
maan - sach keh raha hoon...
he couldn't dare to say d truth...
...
geet - me nahi manti...
maan - u dnt trust me...
geet - i don't...

PRECAP : d 1st FIGHT...OOOPPSSS...:((

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MishTy

Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago

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ninavi

@ninavi

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#303

awsome update

Cont soon😊

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josh.pooja

@josh.pooja

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#304

today me the second one good one i like it very much update soon

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Angelic_mishty

@Angelic_mishty

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#305

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Part 23

maan - u dnt trust me...
geet - i don't...

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maan expression changed...
his eyes widened in pain n anger...
how could she say dat...
his emotions crushed in pieces wid her answer...
she doesn't trust him...
his heart sinked in pain...
he felt as if he is suffocating n can not breath anymore...
he turned to see her...
she was still looking opposite to him...
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how can i be so stupid...she never trusted me..dats y she didn't want to see my face...is she still confused...he wonederd...
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his heart over filled wid sudden pain...
his pain started bursting out in d form of anger...
he couldn't bare to see her back...
he wanted to hold her in arms tightly...asking her y she doesn't trust him...
but all he could see was her back facing him...
he felt as if hitting d wall hard till his all bood vil ooz out...so dat d pain vil b reduced...
he left from dere at once...
...

geet - happy...ab boliye..ke aap mujse hi milne aaye the...
she turned to face him wid her naughty expression...
he was not there...
her expressions changed...
she searched for him every where...
he was nowhere...
her eyes were madly searching for him at all corners...
she knew...he alwz vanishes like dis...like a dream...
but 2day..she didn't like it...
she wore d dress specially for him...
but he...
"wo aise kyu chale gaye..mujhe bataye bagaire...kya ho gaya unhe..mene unke liye dress pehani..aur wo aise bina bataye..."
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tears rolled of her eyes...
she got angry now...

"..ye kya baat huyi..hamesha mujhe bina bole chale jate hai..me unse baat hi nahi karungi..manayenge to b nahi manungi..."
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she turned making grumpy face...
n about to leave for her class...
...
her mind stucked sum words...

"i dnt...
...i dnt...
...i dnt...
...i dnt..."
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her eyes filled in pain...
she turned again wid painfull eyes...
her eyes started welling blood...
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"kahin woh..."
"heyy babaji..."
"ye mene kya keh diya...unhe kahin meri baat ka bura...mujhe kya jaurat thi aise kehne ki..how stupid i was...unhe hurt kar diya...par me to mazak kar rahi thi...par unhe kaise pata...ab me kya karungi...unhe kaise manau..na naam malum hai na chehra..is puri delhi me kahan dhundungi unhe...ohh godd...how can i be so dumb..."
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she fell on d floar..totally breaking down...
"heyy babaji..ab me kya karungi...unhe kaise samajhaungi...kahan dhundungi unhe..."
tears rolled of her eyes continuously...
nothing seemed to matter her..not even dat she is in colge...
it's more dan half n hour..n she is still at d same where he left her...
she was still crying..not understanding wat to do...
she didn't dare to get in class...
her heart started sinking wid d thought.."agar wo mujse dobara nahi mile to..."
her body felt numb wid d thought...
she felt as if all dis is a bad dream ruining her new dream...
but it was not a dream...
it was d reality dat she hurted him unknowingly...
her almond eyes were red crying bloood...
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she get up from d floar...
searched for him in whole colge..if he is dere..anywhere...
but he was nowhere...
she left from dere...
without meeting anybody...
she just left...

...
maan angrily went to office...
enterted his cabin without talking to anybody...
neeva entered his cabin...
neeva - sir wo simla wala project...
maan furiously - did i give u d permission to get in...
she was scared wid his suden rude behaviour...
neeva - m sorry sir woh...
maan - leave right now...
neeva - sir.
maan - dnt let any1 enter my cabin until i call...
neeva - right MK.
neeva leaves..
her eyes were filled wid his rudeness...
neeva was sure sumthing was wrong wid him...
she didn't dare to talk to him...
he locked his cabin from inside..so dat no1 could disturb him...
he was angry like he may just kill anybody...
his eyes were bursting fire...
not bcos of her words...but he was angry on himself for not able to gain her TRUST...
for creating dis stupid hide n seek game...
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he was angry..he was in pain..deep pain..his heart was filled wid tears...his breathed was chocked at d throat..he couldn't speak a owrd...
he opened file..tried enough to read ot..concentrate on it...
but he was helpless..he could think nothing but her...
he droped his head down on d desk..closing eyes...
...
d moments of kurban huva...flashed in his mind...
his heart calmed..d moment itself was so smooth..so romantic..he couldn't stop himself loving her more n more...think of her more n more...
deir love moments started to haunt him...
her stupid questions.."aap jadugar ho..."..he smiled...as if he is living d moment...
d way he sopiled her lipstick...his heart started missing her...
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he couldn't decide...he was so confused...is he angry dat he couldn't gain her trust...
or he was sad wid d thought dat she is not wid him..she is away...
he was not SURE wid her condition...how she hav felt...
he was more dan enough busy wid his own anger...
he just assumed she vil b colge...
...

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she went out of colge like a dead body...
to search him...
she tried to search him madly on d roads...like a stupid...
she was searching a person...
but whom...
she doesn't know his name...how he look...anything about him...
still she was searching him...
she looked like a fool...searching a unknwn person wid tearfull eyes..
.on d streets on delhi...
its been hrs...she was searching him...her sandals started hurting her making small injuries on her feet....she didn;t bother about it...
her skin became all reddish due to d sun rays...
but still she was nowhere to stop...
she searched him like anything...
but failed...
she couldn't find him...
she was broken like a soft toys...wid baby sad emotions...
like a fish is just taken out of water..n he is fighting for his life...
she wanted him...just him at dis moment...
she felt as if she didn't see him..she vil die any moment...
she couldn't think anything...wat is she doing on roads...
her car..her frnds..her home...she was thoutless...
she searched for him non-stop for hrs...
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PRECAP : all were scared...totally shaken...

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love

MishTy

Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago

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ninavi

@ninavi

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#306

😕 ab kyaaa hogaaaaaaaaa

cont sooooooon 😊

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preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#307

loved part 22..............per end mein jhatka diya...................23 toh mujhe rula diya.........unka pehla fight and they both thinking abt each other.............oh geet's pain is more..............as she doesnt even know where he is..........when he comes to know that she was searching for him like mad person and if something happens to her he will kill every one with his anger..............oh god aaj ka quota poora ho gaya.............so u may not update more...............i cant wait till tom..............hey u didnt updae yesterday so y dont u give us another double update plsssssssssssssssssss