Mayur FF❤️ Kabhi Socha Na Tha❤️ Last Part pg 108 - Page 10

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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
Brilliant start Maria
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Please continue soon and thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Alisha-MJHT

Brilliant start Maria
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Please continue soon and thanks for the pm 😊

@Alisha....Thank u soooo much for liking it🤗🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
Thankssss u sooo much for ur lovely comments🤗🤗
@moona...Dear sorry for short update😳i ll try to write long one
Part 2
A girl entered into Sharma's office...she was wearing short knee length dress...her hair was short and silky and was spreaded all over her shoulder...most of the parts of her body were exposed due to her dress...she was looking smart and preety...Every man's eyes were fixed at her as she entered into office...

Where is Mayank...she asked while entering into Dia's cabin

sir is in his cabin...she informed her

she smiled at her and walked towards Mayank cabin...

she enterd into his cabin without knocking the door....he could not sense her presence as he was engrossed in his work..

Mayank raised his head as he felt someone hands on his shoulder..

he stood up with a jerk...

Ria what the hell are you doing here?how dare you touched me...he was shouting at her

calm down Mayank..... she said seductively...she was trying to put her hand on his shoulder but he jerked her hands off

Dont dare to try to touch me...he said furiously

Mayank why r u behaving like this with your girl friend...She said with a smirk on her face

shut up..shut your bloody mouth up...you are not my girl friend...he said furiously

aww sorry i m your Ex-girlfriend....she said while coming close to him

he pushed her back hard...shut your mouth and get out of here..he was fuming in anger

ok...i m going but i ll come back very soon...she winked at him and left the place.

he controlled his anger and was trying to calm himself down..

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she came out from the Airport...She saw someone and smiled....she walked towards him.......

Hiii Adi...h r u...she said while hugging him

i m fine Nups...h r u..he replied while hugging her back

i missed you...he said with sad face

i missed you too Adi...she replied

lets go ...you might be tired...he said and opened door for her...

They sat in the car..throughout the whole journey Nupur could not even speak a single word..he was trying to speak to her but she just gave reply in Yes or No...

Adi felt hurt to see her in this condition...as he loves her soo much...he could not see her in so much pain.

They reached Nupur's house..they came out of the car...

Thankss Adi...she said while smiling

Nupur its not fair...friends main No sorry and No Thankss...he said with smile

aww sorry i forget...she said and smiled

Nupur you do forget many things...i want my old Nupur back...he said while looking at her

she looked at him as she heard his words

its not now possible Adi...woh Nupur mar chuki hai...she said with those words with so much pain in her voice....

he was shocked to see her strange behaviour

ok Nupur i have to go now...i ll meet you tommorow..he said

bye Adi..i ll meet you soon..she replied and walked towards the door

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Mayank was standing near his window looking at moon...Nupur why i m feeling that you are close to me...i can feel your presence...plzz forgive me...i cant live without you...you are my life...i know i did a big sin..there is no forgiveness of that sin but i m sorry Nupur...i love you Nupur..plzzz come back..Tears were burning in his eyes..

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She was lying on her bed...trying to sleep but sleep was far away from her eyes

her father words ecohed in her mind

"Nupur sorry beta..Doctor could not save your un born baby"

Tears were coming out of her eyes

Mayank you killed my baby...you killed our baby...you killed me...i ll never forgive you...Never

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here is next part...i hope u ll liked it...plzz do comment and press like button..

Edited by maria-soniarti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94
Part>1
beautiful update.
bt starting hi itna sad hai to aage kya hoga :(
well, past wes beautiful.
lovely coffee scene.
update soon.
thanks for the pm.

part>2
interesitng update.
now, two more entries.........ria and adi.
as ur update, adi seems a gud person..........bt diya wsnt a gud person.
so, nupur lost their baby.........so painful.
mayank also feel sorry 4 his did in past.
bt i thot, he didnt knw abt d baby.
ok, waiting for ur next upfate.
continue soon.
thanks for the pm.
Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
By GOd Maria very nice and awesome update..
and i think bcoz of Ria, Nupur left Mayank...
and dnt be sorry........😳
its fab update...
and update soon..
eagerly waiting for next part...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
nupurs baaby dead...,.😭

dekho jaldi se mayur ko milwa do..n iss ria ko out karo....plz

basically my mayur ko sath dekhna chahti hu..no probs only happiness...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
nice update maria....👏
mayank is feeling nupur's presence... isse kehte hai sachcha pyaar

thnx for the pm🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98

OMG... wt an shockin update..😲

maria.. yeh kya... bomb pe bomb phode jaa rahi ho..😲
MN baby ws killed...😭& yeh ria.... 😡
aww... my nups... i'm feelin so bad 4 her...😒
luvd d update...
luv ya!🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#99
maria 🤗first of all congratulations on ur new FF.......just finished reading both the parts.......loving the story......cant wait for the next part..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
OH POOR NUPS......she lost her baby😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 dats soo sad n dat too cz of mayank....OMG its such a mystery...plzzzz cont. soon😊

liked it alot
tczz
loadz of love😃

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