M/G FF: With all my love & heart forever PG 125 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Arey wah Jal...kinna sona hai.
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Chapter Two..


He stood there staring at the closed doors felt like eons thinking what just happened; her voice replayed the melody tune repeatedly in his mind. No one in his twenty some seven years has pinned him at one spot for more than few seconds. That was it, his mind right then spoke unwanted words that he will make his right on the owner of those hazels. He double on it, "Wait a minute where did that came from?" He lifted his hand and placed the back of his palm to his forehead as if to check if he is ok? Shaking his head and leering, mentally he kicked himself and turned back to go where he came from. Finally, he was at the side of his best friend who was getting married to his love of his life. He never thought that love could change some one and make you chase the creature called Woman. For him they were trouble, he could flirt with them here and there but nothing more than that. His charming and flirty nature got him to almost in troubles few times and Agustiya always warned him to be careful as it could cause him big times lose. His moniker answer to him was "Main Maan Singh Khurana hoon. Lose and me? The word does not exist in my dictionary." Does he know the fate has stored something else in his dictionary?


Agustiya's call got him out of his chain of thoughts, "Yaar Maan kahan rehgaya tha tu? Is everything alright you seem like you are lost."


Maan spoke, "Wo Kuch nahi'aa' haan Main theek hoon. Not to worry I'm great." With the confusion of his own.

Wedding rituals begins; it was the time for the Bride to join the Groom to complete the wedding rituals. That's when he saw her again the second time that evening, she was holding the bride and walking along with her, as if she sensed him staring at her he saw her turning to look straight into his eyes. His heart did the break dance and kicking the walls against it; he lifted his hand unconsciously to rest it on the spot where he felt the kicking as if to sooth the dancer to calm down. He noticed then, she lowered her eyes and a pink spread on her fair face to give more glow to its beauty. Throughout the rituals, his mind and eyes were around her not a single second was spared. It high lightened his mood to the fullest he never felt this way before. During the reception, they got the formal introduction with each other along with her close friends Adi and Pinki that are when he found out that she was Bride's cousin Geet Handa. Finally, the night came to the end, Bride and Groom left to the new nest to start their life together and the family and guest back to their old nest. He had the opportunity to share few words here and there during the wedding as they teased and argued with each other. He learned something new about her during that time. Behind shyness she also holds brilliant mind, wittiness and feistiness. He liked that, beauty with brains she matched him alright. He felt hollowness as if he is leaving something precious behind and will never ever find it back. He wanted to see her one more time, he walked around to look for her and that's when he found her surrounded with few elderly ladies along with his Dadima in open. Leaning on the nearby tree he observed every movement she did, her blushing, over some comment of praising her beauty, laughed on some joke, getting attentive to hear some advice and bending over to take some blessings. He saw his Dadima showering her love over her, kissing on her forehead and giving a tight hug. He stood at the distance, waiting for his Dadima to join him. She noticed him then, he wore the most gorgeous smile ever staring at her with full mischiefs in his eyes at that instant he winked at her and mouthed goodnight and bye with his two fingers touching his forehead and he turned to walk towards his waiting car.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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that was super mindblowing my dear love each part pls cont soonnnnnnnnn thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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so he know who she is......... dadima also love her.........at least tht route is clear...........great update 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharmake11

that was super mindblowing my dear love each part pls cont soonnnnnnnnn thanks pm



Thanks so much sharmake...BTW I lkie your signature.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: komlika

so he know who she is......... dadima also love her.........at least tht route is clear...........great update 😊



Yes she is his Best friend's Wife's Cousin. Dadima adores her, she is the main key...continue reading...more to come.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Interesting first chapter....... it was wonderful...please add me 2 ur pm list! update soon!



Thx, you have been added. Check out the 2nd chap...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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"His heart did the break dance and kicking the walls against it; he lifted his hand unconsciously to rest it on the spot where he felt the kicking as if to sooth the dancer to calm down"
This line definitely made my evening
Very happy in my heart Dil Dance Mare Re....hehe
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice one.. plzz continue soon n do pm me the updates...
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very nice ,do update soon 👏

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