Chahat -2(Raj and Naina) Updated pg. 64 Part 39

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 11 years ago

#301

Originally posted by: ridhz21
Awesome update
loved it
Continue soon

thanks so much Ridhz 🤗🤗

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 11 years ago

#302

Originally posted by: Mrsimisam

Aww d Raj-Naina scenes were supercute...dey are so adorable together...luved Huda here...as friend his part was nice...😊

thanks dear. thank god Huda ab ek accha friend ban ne ki koshish kar raha hai.🤗🤗🤗

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 11 years ago

#303

Originally posted by: arpita25
Hey thank god u updated Chahat after a long time.
😆 😆 😆

Nice update and thank you for adding RN romance in this part.😉 😉
thanks dear 😊 😊 😊

So Ms. Naina is going in the party and trying to choose a perfect dress for her and she messed up all the things but Raj was not irritated even he said that every dress looks pretty on her.😳 😳
ye to sahi baat hai, 😉 😉 😉

Wow he is really a sincere hubby who bought Karva Chauth gift for his wife na? 😉 😉 The song was so sweet and I personally loved it.😊 😊
Raj is the best hubby in the world.😳 😳 😳

Raj got another call from the man who is planning everything and Naina acted quickly this time and I this both of them will made that plan fail very soon. 😊 😊
I so wish that as well 😊 😊 😊

Update soon darls

thanks so much dear 🤗🤗🤗

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desaiprachi07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#304

Thank god this thread is open now.😊 I pmed u from last month that I am unable to post my comment here.😕

Great update.👏 Song was awesome and one of my fav.👍🏼 Raj to gaya Naina ko dekh k and Naina ne vo note vahan chod kar us ko aur jyada hi excite kar diya.😉 Major ka party me jane ka irada to nahi lagta.😳 Thank god sahi time pe Alekh ne us ko call kar k pooch liya ki kahan hai vo? 😛 Mohan Singh jee ab party bhi enjoy kaise karenge in Sardaar's get up? 😆 But I liked his concern for Naina and Vyom's relation as he doesn't know the truth.😉 Waiting for next update.

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varshita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#305

A big sorry dear, you know it has become my habit to keep on saying sorry.😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 But u know I am always with my job so get less time to be here.😕 😕 😕 😕 😕 😕
I liked the update,👏
Naina is so touched by Huda's concern and first time I really appreciated Huda some where as u know how much I hate him.😆
The good thing is that he has Ashlesha in his life now and he will not peeche padega of Naina now.😛
Naina is super happy but she can't tell Huda about it and neither she can show her true emotions to him as well.😉
Prep to dono taraf se jabardast chal rahi hain but I do wish ki kuch gadbad na ho.🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔
Naina was surprised that when Raj bought saari for her, beautiful saari.
Raj is very smart us ne kitne smartly dress le li vo bhi jab Naina saath thi aur us ko pata nahi chala.😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉
Pls update asap.

Edited by varshita - 11 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 11 years ago

#306

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07
Thank god this thread is open now.😊 I pmed u from last month that I am unable to post my comment here.😕

Great update.👏

Song was awesome and one of my fav.👍🏼

Raj to gaya Naina ko dekh k and Naina ne vo note vahan chod kar us ko aur jyada hi excite kar diya.😉 Major ka party me jane ka irada to nahi lagta.😳 Thank god sahi time pe Alekh ne us ko call kar k pooch liya ki kahan hai vo? 😛 Mohan Singh jee ab party bhi enjoy kaise karenge in Sardaar's get up? 😆 But I liked his concern for Naina and Vyom's relation as he doesn't know the truth.😉 Waiting for next update.

I think I have pmed u the recent update and that's y u posted this comment here. 😕 😕

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 11 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 11 years ago

#307

Originally posted by: varshita
A big sorry dear, you know it has become my habit to keep on saying sorry.😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 But u know I am always with my job so get less time to be here.😕 😕 😕 😕 😕 😕
I liked the update,👏
Naina is so touched by Huda's concern and first time I really appreciated Huda some where as u know how much I hate him.😆
The good thing is that he has Ashlesha in his life now and he will not peeche padega of Naina now.😛
Naina is super happy but she can't tell Huda about it and neither she can show her true emotions to him as well.😉
Raj k to hosh hi ud gaye Naina ko dekh k. Song was perfect and suitable for the situation.😳
Major Vyom kya chahte hain party me jana hai ya nahi? 😉
Good that they didn't bring Neelu with them and Alekh is so sweet and caring hubby.😊
Thank you Alekh for calling at perfect time varna Major was not ready to leave the chance.😉
Pls update asap.

Now I am sure that I have pmed all you girls the recent wala update and previous as well that's why you both are confused. 😆 😆

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 11 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 11 years ago

#308

Originally posted by: poorvi16
sorry di I am very late and in between when I tried to comment on this FF this was closed and I don't know how to make it open. 😕
Good that u opened this thread and continuing this FF as it's my most fav FF.

Interesting update. 😊

Raj aka Vyom to Naina ko dekhte hi flat ho gaye and I liked the bg song u used.

Party me jane ka mood hi nhi hai Major ka, kahin in se koi fault na ho jaye. 😉

Huda aka Mohan Singh is sooo concerned about Naina but I am happy that u gave him Ashlesha. 😛

All of them are so alert and I think kuch serious nahi hoga. 🤔

I think Naina will hold herself now in front of AV.. 😔

Dii ab jaldi se update kariye na.

Same problem here

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 11 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part 35:-

"Bahut khoobsurat hai."

Raj smiled listening this. "Thanks Naina, par aaj k liye maine tumhare liye doosri dress select ki hai. Ye saari kabhi ek khaas mauke pe mai boloonga tum ko pehanhe ko abhi nahi."

She smiled, "your wish is my command Major. Par vo dress hai kahan?" she asked.

"Us cupboard me, " he signaled.Naina went to search for his dress when Alekh called Raj and told him to come for some security check and he said to Naina, "Naina be ready mai thodi der me aata hoon."

"Ok", she replied.

Here in another part of the academy:-

"Sir arrangements to kaafi tight hain hume nahi lagta ki hume itne easily yahan enter karne ka chance milne waala hai."

"Mujhe pata hai par tum is ki chinta mat karo samjhe us k liye maine saare intezaam kar rakhein hain. Humara ek aadmi hai jo ye kaam bina kisi dikkat k kar dega."

"Kaun hai vo sir?"

"Vo tumhe abhi jaane ki jaroorat nahi hai bus tum ye dekhte rehna ki saman pahuchne k baad kisi ki pakad me nahi aana chahiye koi bhi risk uthao but humare misin pe koi annch nahi aani chahiye."

"Vo mai samajhta hoon sir."

"Hume lagta hai vo major yahan un papers k liye aur nuclear triggers ki safety k liye hi aaya hai."

"Ho sakta hai sir."

"Ek kaam diya tha tumhe vo to aaj tak tum nahi kar paaye varna kab tak vo dono humare pass hote aur ab baith k guess me agree kar rahe ho tum ki ho sakta hai."

"Sorry sir," that man realized his mistake.

"Ab seriously ye kaam karo aur pata lagao ki Major ka real mission kya hai."

"Par mujhe pata kaise chalega?"

"Us ki tum fikr mat karo,jab tum log ye nahi kar sakte to mujhe hi kuch karna hoga. Abhi mai tum ko ek sms bhejne jaa raha hoon us ko padh k faurn delete kar dena."

"Yes boss."

In next part of Academy:-

"Neelu tere ko is halat me party me nahi jana hai samjhi."

"Haan han samajh gayi par mujhe ye to batao ki ghar par karongi kya mai?"

"Jo tu roj karti hai apun k yahan nahi rehne par."

"Vo to roj karti hoon na to is me nayi baat kya hai?"

"Kuch naya karna hai tere ko?"

"Haan bilkul." Alekh thought for a while than said, "to ek kaam kar do din baad karwa chauth hai na to tu is ki taiyari kar le."

Neelu was surprised, "oye sach me tere dimag me humesha ideas bhare rehte hain kya?"

"Aise hi thode log mujhe Alekh baba ki jay bolte hain." He winked and she smiled. Later Alekh was given to keep an eye over surroundings of Academy and he was on his job.

Mohan Singh was instructed to observe everything in rest of the academy when it will be silent and now he was on his work. "Sir abhi to yahan sab theek hai".

"Theek hai Huda par aage k liye bhi ready rehna."

"Vo to theek hai sir jee par aap ne bahut galat kaam kiya aaj."

Raj smiled, "Mujhe pata hai Huda ki party me nahi jaane ka afsos ho raha hai tumhe."

Huda was surprised, "Aap ko kaise pata?"

'ye kya nikal gaya, kahin Huda ko shak na ho jaaye.' "Vo..vo ab Naina se tumhare baare me itna suna hai to itna to jaan hi gaya hoon na tum ko." He smiled saying it.

Huda found it wired but didn't show more to that he was happy to see that after all Naina sometimes talks about him. "To aap kuch kar saktein hain?" he asked trying to divert the topic.

"Agar tum chahte ho to koshish to kar hi sakta hoon." He said,

"But gurantee nahi le sakta kyounki u know na ki humara task aaj ka kitna important hai." Huda just nodded his head.

Raj didn't remember that he has Alekh on another line, "Sir bilkul bhi nahi. Is ki madad jara bhi mat kariyega party me aane k liye varna ye jananiyon ko dekh k bhool hi jaayega ki is ko kya karna hai."

Raj gave a small laugh, "I know Captain but mujhe nahi lagta ki vo itne careles hain abhi bhi."

"Sir aap ko lagta hai but apun ko abhi bhi vahi apna purana Huda yaad hai." Tabhi someone tapped Raj's shoulder from behind and Raj was surprised to see Major Talreja there.

"I think Major aap ne poori prepration kar rakhi hai acche se hume pareshaan karne ki." Giving that irriatiting look.

Vyom smiled and said, "Mujhe to nahi lagta ki mai aap ko pareshaan karne ki koshish kar raha hoon par ab aap kya samajhte hain ye aap k uper depend karta hai."

"Baatein acchi bana lete hain aap, par mujhe lagta hai ki aap ko is baat ka dhyaan rehna chahiye ki aap ki in activities ki vajah se humare cadets ya kisi bhi guest ko koi pareshaani nahi honi chahiye."

"I know Major, but u know security k saath hum koi risk nhi le sakte hain na."

MT gave an uninterested look and said, "whatever" and left.

Alekh was still on another line on walky talky, "sir".

"Yes Alekh?" "Kahin is ko shak to nahi gaya hai?" he asked.

"I don't think so captain but haan hume ab alert rehne ki jyda jaroorat hai kyounki ho sakta hai hume pareshaan karne k liye MT kuch karne ki koshish karein." Raj said thoughtfully.

Later in evening by 7 pm:-

All arrangements were done and as the party has to begin by 7:30 Raj has to hurry up and get himself ready to attend it with Naina. He knocked the door but it didn't open and he pushed it lightly and it opened. "Naina...", he called her. He got no response in return and he gave one after another so many calls but still didn't get any response. Kahan gayi ye? Par is waqt to kahin nahi jaa sakti akhir party start hone waali hai.' He thought and got a note on side table.

"Hey Vyom,

Mai aap ko thodi der me milti hoon tab tak aap ready ho jao aap ka suit aur baaki ki cheejin sab vahin rakhin hain."

Raj gave a smile in return at Naina's sweetness. She not only care for her but also knows what can be posible requirements for him. This was a hidden side of Naina and only his loved ones knows about it. He remembered a day when Naveen told him about Naina.

"Pata hai Raj kitna ladti hai Naina mujh se. Humesha aise ladti hai jaise koi kaam hi nahi hai us k pass. Choti choti baaton me gussa ho jati hai aur tab us ki ye choti se naak aise fool jati hai jaise koi pakoda. Mujhe bahut hasi aati hai. Par yahi Naina jab bhi mai yahan rehta hoon ghar pe aisa sab ka khayal rakhti hai jaise vo achanak se bahut badi ho gayi hai. Jab bhi mai vahan rehta hoon na to meri har jaroorat ka har saman vahan rehta hai. Mujhe pata hi nahi chalta ki kab kya khatam hua hai mere kehne se pehle se hi saman vahan aa jata hai aur chahe kitna bhi gussa rahi ho vo mujh se mera room vahi theek karegi aur sone k pehle mere table k pass pani vahi rakhti thi. Kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki jab vo chali jayegi humesha k liye hume chod kar to kaise rahenge hum?" he said thinking than all of a sudden he thought a plan, "Aisa karta hoon us chuhiya ki shadi tujh se kara deta hoon aur jab tu us ko pareshaan karega to teri khabar bhi acche se loonga mai." He said.

Raj was surprised who how he predicted such thing at that time when he even didn't know Naina apart from Naveen's thoughts. "Tu kaise jaanta tha ki aisa kabhi hoga?" he said looking at the sky. His thoughts once again got distrubed by a loud ring of his mobile phone and he smiled after seeing the callers name.

"Kahan ho tum?"

"Bus yahi hoon ready nahi hue abhi tak?"

"Ab tum to ho nahi yahan akele kaise ready ho jaaon?"

Naina smiled, "baatein to aise kar rahe hain jaise humesha mai hi ready karti thi."

"Pehle ka to pata nahi par ab to chance de kar dekho I am always ready."

And Naina blushed listening this. "Bahut shararati hote jaa rahe hain Major."

"Sab aap ki hi sangat ka asar hai Captain Naina." "Accha? Par mai to kabhi aise nahi thi."

"Mai kya janoon? Maine tumhe bachpan se to nahi dekha na?"

Naina thought for a second and replied, "Kyoun bhaiya ne kabhi bataya nahi mere baare me?"

Raj smiled mischeviously, "Us ne to kuch aur bataya tha."

Naina got confused, "Kya bataya tha? Vaise mujhe pakka yakeen hai ki meri burai hi ki hogi." She said pouting.

Raj thought to play more, "Us ne na...", but his convo was disturbed by someone who tapped his shoulder, "Kya Major abhi tak aap ready nahi hue."

It was none other than AV who was passing by him dressed in formals looking dashing but when he found him in casuals and didn't look like he was ready he interrupted him, "Sorry to disturb you Major, par it's getting late."

Raj smiled and said, "I know Major," and he said to Naina, "Naina mai tum se ready ho kar fifteen minute me milta hoon."

"ok I will be waiting Major," and both hung the phone.

"Thanks Major varna Naina to aaj meri class lagati." Raj said smiling.

AV gave a small smile, "Pyaar me to ye sab hota rehta hai na. So aap jaaiye and get ready. Tab tak mai baaki k preprations check karta hoon before Bregedier comes."

After 15 minutes:-

Raj was all ready and he went to Neetu's quarter to bring Naina with him. He knocked the door and Neelu opened it after two knocks.

"Hi", she said.

"Hello Neelu, kahan hai Naina?" he asked.

"Oho badi betabi hai us se milne ki." She teased Raj and he embarrassed.

"Koi nahi ab aise sharmaiye mat mai bulati hoon." She called Naina and when she came in front of him Raj was stunned to see the lady, which look more like a princess than his wife Naina. He couldn't believe at the view he saw, he thought as if his eyes has betrayed him. He has seen Naina many times before almost in every type of Indian dress and western as well but it seems as if she has transformed completely today. He never saw her like this just beyond discription. The Naina he knew was completely different and the Naina he saw today made him speechless. The softness and feminisim she was showing at that time made him fall for her once more. He just wanted to touch her and love at that moment. If it would have been in his hands he would have dropped the idea to attend the Fresher's Ball.

Palakein Munde Chaahat Meri So Rahi Thi
Khushbu Hawaao Mein Thi Maine Nahi Mehsus Ki

He was today completely smitten by her beauty. He so wished to take her in his arms when Neelu coughed which made him aware of his surroundings.

"Kya baat hai Major aaj to lag raha hai aap k hosh hi gum ho gaye hain. Khayal rakhiyega." She winked and Naina blushed. Tumhara blush tumhe aur bhi khoobsurat bana raha hai Naina.' He thought but first he wanted to make themselves alone.

"I think ab aap logon ko yahan se jaana chahiye kyounki aap log party k liye late ho rahe hain." They both came out of their dreamland.

"Aur baaki raha romance ka quota vo to aap log raste me bhi poora kar lenge na?" she winked.

Raj and Naina slightly blushed, "I think now we should leave." He said.

"Haan haan jaiye kafi late ho raha hai." Later both bid good bye to Neelu and proceeded towards the party hall. Raj stopped Naina by calling her, "Naina...", she stopped and looked at his direction. "kya hua?"

"Aaj mera katla karne ka poora plan bana rakha hai na tum ne." He said with husky voice coming closer to her.

Jaane Kahaan Bahaarein Meri Khil Rahi Thi
Khushbu Hawaao Mein Thi Maine Nahi Mehsus Ki

Naina blushed but still she knew that it was not a right place, "Major I think we are getting late for party."

Raj made a fake sad face and said, "You are damn unromantic person Captain,ye bhi koi baat hue?"

"Kya karoon Major agar maine abhi ka focus wapas point pe nahi kiya na to aap hi baad me mujhe blame karenge ki meri vajah se aap kuch kar nahi paaye."

"Sach kahoon Captain to abhi to mera bilkul bhi party me jaane ka mood nahi hai. Soch raha hoon aaj ye bijli abhi mere hi uper gir jaye."

She blushed again and moved closer leaning at her face, "Ra...Vyom." She said.

"Naina...", he said holding her chin and making her look in to his eyes, "Pata nahi kabhi kabhi mujhe lagta hai ki tumhare alawa ab mai kuch soch hi nahi paaonga na kuch sochne k layak bacha hoon.

"Yahi baat sahi hai, better hai abhi hum yahan se chalein. Aur bhi kuch jaroori kaam hain na aap k pass."

Raj smiled in heart but he showed as if he was angry with Naina, "theek hai chaliye ab aap ko apni tareef bhi nahi pasand hai to."

Naina understood that he was intentionally behaving like it.

"Par mujhe ye jaroor lagta hai ki aaj party me bijli to aur kahin girne waali hai."

Raj again smiled but didn't show instead he said, "Ab hume der nahi ho rahi hai?"

"Kuch der ho chuki hai, kuch aur agar ho bhi jaye to kya fark padta hai?" she said huskily coming closer to him.

"You will regret it Captain..." saying this he sealed her lips with his and she went numb. They were in open corridor anyone could have come there anytime but Raj was unable to think anything else today. Naina was gentle initially but later she responded with same passion. She parted her lips to let him enter inside n fight the battle with their tounges. Her fingers were ruffling his hair n his hands automatically travelled down to her peeks which were enhancing her beauty and he circled them and pressed them to which she moaned. "Pls...no...". "No nahi aaj Naina...", releasing his lips with hers he gently pushed her behind up to a wall back to her and his lips travelled down at the path of her throat and she held him tightly allowing him to do all what he wants.

Tum mile to mehki barishein,
Tum mliein to behki khwahishein...

Tum mile to muskurana aa gaya...

Their beautiful moment got disturbed by Raj's cellphone's beep. His alert mind quickly made him realize that the time and place was incorrect for this,still hugging Naina he picked call, "Yes Alekh." "aap kahan hain sir?"

"Bus on the way."

"Jaldi aaiye party start hone jaa rahi hai." He said.

"Haan I am reaching there."

At the party:-

"Sardar jee aap kahan se hain?" Abhyuday asked Sardar Mohan Singh aka Huda. "Asssi...assi to apne pind Hoshiyarpur se hain."

AV smiled and said, "maine ye nahi poocha aap se, mere poochne ka matlab tha kis Academy se aap ka transfer hua hai yahan."

Huda replied, "Dehradun k IMA se."

"Oh that's great. To kuch bataiye na vahan k baare me."

Huda coughed and he tried to change the topic by providing a little basic info about every Academy as it will be doubtful if he clearly changes the topic, "Are sir jee vahan k baare me kya batana? Vahan to saare bande hote hain ajeeb ajeeb tarah k. Dimag me soch k aate hain desh ki seva karenge aur yahan pahuchte pahuchte un ko itna nichod ( squeeze) dete hain ki poocho mat fir bhi desh ki seva ka junoon to hota hi hai."

AV laughed and said, "Ye baat to har jagah k liye apply hota hai Mohan Singh jee."

"haan sir jee ye to hai." He suddnely saw Raj entering in party with Naina and his eyes got glued to Naina who looked ravishing. oye ye Naina ki to kaya palat ho gayi aaj kya mast lag rahi hai phoolan. Par kash aaj mainu party me smart and handsome officer jaise entry mil jati to phir koi ladki na bach pati Huda k charm se.'

He was thinking it when Raj greeted him. "Good evening sardaar jee. Enjoying the party?"

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 11 years ago