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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
hey dear
amazing os
loved it
continue soon
thnx 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
awesome OS's dear...loved all u have written till now...cont soon and do pm me :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 2
Riddhima couldn't stop screaming. She had gotten scared like crazy. She stood there screaming there for like what seemed like 5 whole minutes. Finally after her screams had died away, she was able to hear someone laughing in front of her. She opened her eyes and she was both happy and mad. "Armaan…" was the only thing that came out of her mouth. A smiled appears at her face. "Look at your face, I didn't know you would get that scared" Armaan said as he laughed out. Then a sudden frown appeared on her face and then her face went red which alerted Armaan that it was time to run. "YOU!" riddhima said and ran behind him. They kept on running in a circle and finally Armaan stopped and turned, but riddhima wasn't able to stop and both of them crashed and fell down on the sand.

Armaan was above riddhima who was getting a hang of herself since she had fallen unplanned. Armaan kept on looking at her as she tried to make out what was happening. When riddhima finally realized what had happened her eyes fell on Armaan who was looking down at her and was just mesmerizing her beauty. "Kya hai?" riddhima said which broke Armaan's trance. "Aise kyu dekh rahe ho?" riddhima asked. "Kuch nahin dekh raha hoon, k jis moti ko mein chor k gaya tha who kitni khoobsurat hogayi hai" Armaan said with a wink. This sent a smile across riddhima's face. "Ab kuch bologi ya sirf apni tareef sun k muskurati hi rahogi?" Armaan asked. "Keh ne ko toh bohot si cheeze hai pehle yeh batao agar tum aaj aane wale hi the toh sab ko kyu kaha k you're not coming" riddhima asked. "Sab yaha aisi hi position mein poochlogi ya pehle chal k us flowery tent mein jaake betna hai?" Armaan asked. Riddhima blushed at this. "OYYE HOYYE" Armaan said with a smile showing his dimples.

15 minutes had passed since Armaan and riddhima had come back to the tent and were sitting chatting away. Riddhima got to know that Rahul and Muskaan knew about Armaan's arrival and on Armaan's request they had lied to her. And since then they had been talking about anything and everything. "So, basically why'd you call me here? I mean what's the big surprise that you keep on telling me about?" riddhima asked. Armaan looked at riddhima without saying anything; he got up, went towards riddhima, got down on his knees and asked for her hand. "Armaan….yeh?" riddhima asked. Armaan didn't say anything and asked for her hand. Slowly riddhima slid her hand into his and Armaan clutched on it. Finally after two minutes of exchanging glances, finally Armaan managed to say what he wanted to say all these years. "Will you marry me?" Armaan finally asked. A wide smile spread on riddhima's face and her eyes were now glowing and glittering from the tears that were now to be seen. "Armaan….tum…..I mean…..u remembered?" riddhima asked after much hesitation. "Of course I remembered, I had promised you na and I had told you that you'll always be my girlfriend and no one will take your place, so now will you marry me?" Armaan explained and asked once more. Riddhima was so overwhelmed that she wasn't able to say anything, tears rolled down her eyes. "Riddhima…..ab Jaldi jawaab do my knees are hurting" Armaan said. "Chup…pehle toh mujhe aane ki news deke khush karte ho…..phir plan cancel karne ka bulwa k rulaate ho…..and phir aisi jagah pe bulake darate ho…..aur ab purpose kara k rula rahe ho……and jab k jawaab pata hai phir bhi pooch rahe ho", riddhima said and hugged him. "Haan toh poochne toh parega na, who knows itne saalo mein jawaab badal gaya ho? Phir mera kya hoga", Armaan said. "Acha? Theek hai……mujhe nahin rehna tumhare saath mein jaarahi hoon" riddhima said and left the hug and was about to go when Armaan caught her. "Acha acha baba I'm sorry" Armaan said. "I Love you" he continued. They both got into a hug again. "I love you too" riddhima said. "Waise ek baat bolu?" Armaan asked riddhima. "Hmm" riddhima said. "Tum bilkul nahin badli….rotlu ki rotlu ho" Armaan said with a giggle. "Kya!" riddhima said and stepped back. "I was just joking" Armaan said going close to her. "Pakka?" Riddhima asked. "Haan haan baba pakka I was kidding" Armaan said as he place his hand on her waist. "Waise btw tum bhi waise hi shararti ho jaise bachpan mein the….bilkul nahin badle" Riddhima said. "Abhi tumne meri poori shararat dekhi hi kahan hai" Armaan said. Riddhima started to blush and looked down. "Oyye hoyye" Armaan said and lifted riddhima's face by this index finger. They got closer and closer and before they knew it they were tied into a passionate kiss. The kiss lasted for 5 whole minutes and then they had to come back to take a couple of breaths. A drop of tear ran down riddhima's cheek and Armaan wiped them off. "I love you" Armaan said again. "I love you too" riddhima said and both binded in a hug.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
AWWWW THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOO CUTEEE

HE REMEMBERED!!

AWWWWWWWWWWWW

LEKIN IS IT OVER? OR IS THERE A PRT 3 COMING??
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
AWWWWWWWWWWWW

is it over?????

plz dont end it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
hey...
just caught up with your os..
all of them are really awesome...
loved them totally..
plzzz pm me next time u write anything..
u truly are an amazing writer...
i liked KISMAT very much.. u portrayed riddhima's feelings very nicely..
take care
-pari
P.S. do you write any ff.. if yes plzzzz do let me know..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
hey Kirni
awesome OS👏👏
loved it
is this finished??????
thanks for pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
awwww.....sooo beautiful...
lobed it dat he remembered.....
thx 4 da pm...is it over or still??
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
heyyy dear,
nice OS
do write more



love
Riddss
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww..........


KIRNI !!!!!
I LOVE YOU :P

Itna acha likha hai tune ki main kya kahoon !

ITS BEAUTIFUL !!!!
loads of pappies and hugs to u for this one !
It was LOUVELY :P
Next OS kab aa raha hai ?

Well for this one i will just say :
Muahhhhhhhhhhhhh !!!! 😳

Love
Rhea

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